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Reviews for Parthenogenesis

By : TRG
  • From Starryeyedstar on July 27, 2007
    So, the plot thickens~! Rather nicely as well. Starry gets the sneaking suspision that Naruto doesn't know who he really is...hm...interesting. I can't wait to read more~!
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  • From serenagold on July 27, 2007
    NOooo@@@!! Shocking revelations then a cliff hanger??? NOOOOOooooOOOOOOOO!!!!

    (See, this is the reaction we should all have, had we not all come with the preconcieved and generally accepted notion that the fourth is Naruto's father. Its so freaking obvious. ^^ hehe. Great chapter, btw.)
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  • From HumanInfiltrator on July 27, 2007
    You have outdone ourself. Thank you. I can just see Sasuke's face - priceless. It's a bit strange that she would mention this, I mean wouldn't somebody have sworn her to secrecy or something? I guess it's senility setting in. Again thank you, this was wonderful!
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  • From bluegenjutsu on July 26, 2007
    I sure hope Sasuke takes that old woman's advice and marries Naruto!! Loved the lime and also how they slept together. :)
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  • From ANON - fangirl on July 26, 2007
    I loved this chapter. Though Naruto came across a bit more blow job experienced than I would have thought, but whatever, I'll just pretend he learned it from Jiraya's books instead of practical application. I really liked your jabbering midwife and how she so effectively chewed Sasuke out...that's gonna be an interesting conversation he and Naruto have.
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  • From ANON - Ashlee on July 26, 2007
    OMG, that old lady is my hero, xD

    You tell Sasuke who's boss.

    I love how you update every day. It makes me happy to know that :D

    You know, its sooo predicable that Naruto father's is the Fourth Hokage. The hair, eyes, whole body look, and the whole point that they don't give off who Naruto parents were and what the Fourth Hokage past was.
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  • From serenagold on July 26, 2007
    ^^ Yay! More ramen-lisious chapters! Excellent job. I love Naruto's whole philosopy on annoying people. Shino's reaction was by far the best. ^^ Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Damp on July 26, 2007
    “Quit drooling and come to bed, dobe.” Something felt so right to Sasuke when he said that. Come to bed. He could get used to saying that.

    I totally agree! I absolutely loved that phrase...perfectly appropriate. ^^ ARGH! Now I got that phrase stuck in my head...Not that I really mind.

    And because Naruto was going to have his babies, he needed to come up with a plan that would get Naruto to stay by his side forever, where he belonged…not that he was possessive or anything


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  • From ANON - Anon on July 26, 2007
    Awww, that was sweet! Please continue!!
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  • From HumanInfiltrator on July 26, 2007
    Thank you for the fluffiness!!!
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  • From LadyRonin on July 25, 2007
    the ramen song is hilarious. the things that authors use for inspiration always astound me. cute chapter and i can't wait for the next one.
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  • From MissMayumi on July 25, 2007
    Your story has come along greatly! I'm deeply impressed! ^_^ Stupid Sasuke, didn't Naruto had like all his supplies in those scrolls? What about clothes? Oh! Maybe Sasuke just wants to see Naruto shirtless..haha..

    oh, by the way! Naruchan might have me be her beta! I'm like over flowing with happiness! Haha, thought maybe you'd like to know that...random, but hopefully it'll come true...
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 25, 2007
    Cool chapter. Please continue!!!
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  • From nekoleopard on July 25, 2007
    aww fluffies.
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  • From bluegenjutsu on July 25, 2007
    Poor Naruto always having accidents! I love the humor and the romance! :)
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