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Reviews for Parthenogenesis

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  • From LadyRonin on August 18, 2007
    that jiraiya is really a hoot. is he going to ever reveal who riki and katashi is because inquiring minds really want to know. i love this chapter especially sasuke being jealous of the ramen and sasuke being turned on looking at naruto eat the ramen. i can't wait til the next chapter cause i have a feeling that when sasuke and naruto see jiriaya it will be a hoot.
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  • From minaaaaaaaa on August 18, 2007
    you know i always thought i had started reading this story before, seems i had not so just read all 17 chapters :D so good! especially that last chapter, J watching an taking notes hahahahah funny but more importantly super hot! when naru rolled over and top and 'sat himself down' whoo *fans self* good stuff
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  • From HumanInfiltrator on August 18, 2007
    Fun, as always. Thank you!
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  • From anapana83 on August 18, 2007
    Wow, that was hawt!!!! I was waiting for that! Jiraiya got a great free show. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 18, 2007
    That was sooo HOT except for Jiraya watching them, that was just plain creepy. Awaiting the next chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - Damp on August 18, 2007
    *LAUGHING HER ASS OFF!!*

    Those poor people next door...*still laughing

    -Damp *Still laughing...those poor people*
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  • From ANON - lonelylulaby on August 17, 2007
    Ha ha ha, man the old couple in the next room. I was cracking up. Yeah now Naruto will forever belong to Sasuke. Hopefully together they can figure out something to do about Kyuubi. I really liked the role playing at the beginning.

    ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
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  • From bluegenjutsu on August 17, 2007
    Yay! A wonderful lemon!! Great chapter!! :)
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  • From Trollmia on August 17, 2007
    Ohh, how I've been waiting for this chapter... I love this story - I really do. The little rivalry-rants they have are just too precious :) plus... the smut there at the end... yummie :)
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  • From LadyRonin on August 16, 2007
    role play whoa ha now that's the way to start the loving. i only wnat to know if katishi and riki are supposed to be kakashi and iruka and if jiraiya just changed their names to put in his freaky book. i can't wait til you update and i get to see the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Saiou-chan on August 16, 2007
    AHHHHHHHHHHHH! I WANT MORE!
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  • From ANON - fangirl on August 16, 2007
    Well, Sasuke's established that Naruto's his...is Naruto going to lay his claim as well? Great story...way to end the chapter on a laugh!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 16, 2007
    LOL!!! I bet that old couple got an ear full that night! Terrific chapter!! Hurry with the next one!!
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  • From MissMayumi on August 16, 2007
    Mm! I loved it! The part where Naruto was like, "I don't know what comes next in the book" and Sasuke was like "I'll show you" Mm...Mm...Mm! Haha, it made me laugh, imagining the elder couple, they were probably like "What the hell is going on over there!" They probably knew...Haha, the 'squeaking of the bed.' nice. absolutely nice. I loved this chapter! I hope demon of redemption is getting updated soon? Please don't become discouraged and not finish it! I will go on a rampage! Also, would you mind reading/reviewing my story, The Ramen Club, and tell me what you think?? ^^
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  • From ANON - missmurder111 on August 11, 2007
    Aww Man I Want More! I Cant Wait To See How Sasuke Ask Naruto To Be His Boyfriend. And I Hope Later On In The Story We See There Kids Growing Up. And Call Me Stupid But Is That Book Kakashi Gave Them Real?! Update Soon!
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