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Reviews for Parthenogenesis

By : TRG
  • From ANON - Maggie on October 21, 2007
    Hi, I've really enjoyed the story so far. Do you plan on finishing it?
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  • From ANON - Belle-san on October 17, 2007
    I like your story. I wonder what will happen to the fourth child.... and technically in even though the Kyuubi created four children and there are 1 out of four odds, there may still be no YY child. Hell, Kyuubi could have created eight children without ever creating a YY child. While probability does play a signifigant role, it is less valid in terms of genetics. For example, gender should be even between male and female, but this rule changes depending on the couple. For some reason some men are more likley to donate the X chromasome and others are more likely to donate the Y. For some men there is no genetic inclination. In my mother's family there are eight children, but only two of them are boys (my uncles feel severly out numbered). Thier father was the only son out of five chidlren. Apparently female gentics are dominate in my mother's family. However my mother's four children are evenly split; my two brothers and then my sister and me.

    ...wow, I kinda got off track there...meh.....genetics are facinating
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  • From tshapochi on October 13, 2007
    I had started reading this a few months ago and just now had the chance to look it back up. I'm glad I did. The names he came up with for the new characters was hilarious. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From Dreamfool on October 12, 2007
    Aww... why'd you stop, it was just getting good. Kidding, the whole thing is good. Favorite parts sllep walking Naruto/Kyuubi, the midwife, and the names Naruke and SAseme. Not to mention all the science and research that went into the idea behind this story. I hope to see an update soon.
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  • From shirilyle on October 07, 2007
    good story plez continue
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  • From ANON - klen77 on October 03, 2007
    Hi i am a big fan of your fanfic and I love it so much!
    But you haven`t write in a while yet and I would like to know if you still writting this fanfic.
    I hope you will write further, I am looking everyday if you have uploaded the next chapter!
    Please finish this fanfic there are so little good storys of sasukexnaruto!!!

    Your biggest fan!!
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  • From leanne on September 28, 2007
    Um so far I'm really liking this story it's great and the science you put into explaining the birth is excellant, I really liked the relationship part is building between the two. It was adorable to have Gaara and Neji pretty much tell Sasuke to get is ass in gear or he was going to lose the one chance he had at happiness.
    Ero-sennin spying on them as they were having sex was pretty funny him taking notes for a second story.

    I have to small complaints one is: Chapter sixteen you wrote a sentence that didn't make sense "like a pistol on a train," trains don't have pistols that make them move so I think you meant "Like a piston on a train." and the second complaint is when you offered the pairing you wrote Naru/Sasu so when is Naruto going to be the one on top being the Seme or is it Uke?? I get those names mixed up. I know Naruto's pregnant and all but if they are in an equal relationship wouldn't Naruto start demanding the same courtesy from Sasuke as he gives to Sasuke? at least every third time they have sex, or something any way just wanted to know if you are meaning the story to be SasuNaruSasu?
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  • From Huronoryu on September 12, 2007
    OMG! I absolutely LOVED this story! Oh My god! 4 kids?!? FOUR? Poor Sasuke, the "responsible" parent. Oh and I loved the next Icha Icha Paridise Yaoi book 2. *Cracks Up Laughing* Gaara was fabulous too! Just to piss off Sasuke, he goes after Naruto! HA HAHAHAHA~!

    Oh please say you'll update soon! It's just getting good!

    BDQ~
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  • From MissMayumi on September 08, 2007
    Hmm..I'm really sorry this one-shot is taking forever to get out. Please don't hate me. I feel the more I work on it, the better it'll become.

    ILY
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  • From ANON - llk on September 08, 2007
    I love this fanfic your writting is so amazing!
    I hope you upload the next chapter as soon as possiblel!!! You describe sasuke and naruto so good. And the lemon was also great! The two are really kinky, i like that ;-)

    bye
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  • From ANON - GravitationXObsession on August 21, 2007
    i really love your fanfiction
    it's so intriguing
    ah
    and i must ask
    is Katashi and Riki off Kakashi and Iruka?
    >.>
    just asking
    cause they had similarities i noticed when i read
    ^_^

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  • From Travellyr on August 19, 2007
    *laughing* Saseme. God. Jiraiya is so corny and BAD that he comes out a WINNAR. Jiraiya = love.
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  • From MissMayumi on August 18, 2007
    Hahaha. Ero-Dobe??? That's a cute name!! omfg..I love it when Naruto rides Sasuke..thanks soo much!!!! Naruke and Saseme?? Hahha..that's original!!
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  • From ANON - Damp on August 18, 2007
    *Raises eyebrows*

    Naruke and Saseme

    No, you can do better then that!! Come ON! It'll be so OVBIOUSE that it was Naruto and Sasuke, Jairya (Can't spell his name) was spying on.

    -Damp *HAHA!! That was hysterical, I can't believe Jairya would spy on GAY PEOPLE!*
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  • From bluegenjutsu on August 18, 2007
    Hot lemon!!! It was funny how it was Jiraiya that found them instead. Wonder how they will feel when they read the 2nd Yaoi book? XD
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