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Reviews for Parthenogenesis

By : TRG
  • From ANON - Ashlee on July 15, 2007
    “Read the books inside this box, summarize each, and then write a report on the similarities between them all.”

    That so reminds me of English class >.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 15, 2007
    Will Kyuubi's plan succeed? Hurry with the next chapter!!
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  • From DeviousLilDevil on July 15, 2007
    this is very interesting, i cant wait to see how this pans out.
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  • From ANON - Chibi-chan D.J. on July 14, 2007
    OOH, you really got my attention now. I can't wait to read what happens next XD!!
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  • From ANON - Damp on July 14, 2007
    No need to offend...But please re-edit this whole second chapter. All of it is in bold and the paragraphs are not spaced out...making it very hard to read as it is hard enough with all the bold letters.

    TYPO!! He folowed the boy, being... I think you know how to spell that...follow.

    >o< Awesome! I bet Naruto´s stealing (stealing is wrong and should be punished...oh who the hell am I kidding...) some of those fertility scrolls...Awesome >...
    -Damp *Please continue this fic, as it is very pleasing and very interesting!*
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  • From ANON - Damp on July 14, 2007
    Even though I don´t think you asked for people to point out typo´s...I can´t resist the urge *-*
    From the first chapter...

    Naruto made a noise of frustration, “Argh! What is with all you Uchihasyou’re your superiority complexes?” I don´t know what you meant by it...so I´ll just let you know of this typo...

    Oh my gosh...I find this kind of topic totally interesting...Is this really true!! I would really love to research this kind of thing...

    -Damp *I AM going to go research this thing!!*
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  • From MissMayumi on July 14, 2007
    Bad Kyuubi! ahha, not that Sasuke and Naruto will end up regretting what Kyuubi is going to do. This story has a great plot so far, and I find it very original and interesting. please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Ronnie on July 14, 2007
    that's nice.
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  • From nekoleopard on July 14, 2007
    that was very interesting i can't wait for the next chapter
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  • From HumanInfiltrator on July 14, 2007
    I smell potential, please continue this. I also like your writing style.
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  • From minaaaaaaaa on July 14, 2007
    well i'm impressed. sad that i wont have internet access for a while to keep up with the developements of this story *cries* but when i come back i wanna see lots of chapters cause i think this story has alot of potential
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  • From edxroy4ever on July 14, 2007
    This story was great! Update soon!
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