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Reviews for Blood Surrender

By : brook13baby13
  • From ANON - Anon on July 26, 2007
    How morbid. Please continue!!
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  • From Silkylove on July 23, 2007
    oh man, that is too funny, but you think that people would try to check what was wrong before putting him on the stretcher, or Iruka actually asking whats wrong, can't believe he called for an ambulance, god thats funny!!! :) Poor naruto though.keep up the good work ^.^
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  • From Madhater on July 23, 2007
    oh mny cant wait for the next chapter but how old are they in this story?
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  • From ANON - tiger-lily on July 23, 2007
    please update... i love where this is going
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  • From ANON - Darkcherry on July 23, 2007
    This story's nice!!^^ I really like the part where you made sasuke a half vampire!!^^...soooo I guess sasuke's the new day walker huh? hehe!!^^ that is sooo kool!! but it was so mean to what Kiba and Konohamaru did to Naruto and now he will be embarrest for the rest of his life!! POOR NARUTO!!! ...question when does sasuke meet naruto? and is he or his family going to eat him??!! NNNNNNNOOOOO!!!! please please write more I really enjoyed reading this story!!^^
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 23, 2007
    Poor Naruto. Hurry with the next chapter!!!
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  • From TheGingerLady on July 22, 2007
    Ok I totaly hate sasukes parents and I totaly Love konohamaru! And YAY Naruto openly dislikes Sakura! ^^ I realy like this so far! pleas update soon!
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  • From kati on July 17, 2007
    Hey I like this but I think you need a beta. I could give it a whirl if you like... Or you can shoot me, just--whatever ^___^
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  • From ANON - ayame on July 16, 2007
    hey its not that hard to find virgin!!! your talking to one!! hey..quit thinking peverted things!!
    this fic started out nice but dont let you ego get to you its only been one capter!! goodluck!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 13, 2007
    This story show promise. Please continue!!
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  • From Stacy on July 12, 2007
    that was so cool!! i hope your following chapters are longer and come more quickly....bust out laughing....get it.....i'm so funny.....i crack myself up!
    please update asap!
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  • From ANON - Chibi-chan D.J. on July 12, 2007
    OOh, I like the story so far, but isn't this story's title another one's title. I don't know the title seems highly similar to another. Well anyway I love what you got going here and look forward to more of it :)!
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  • From ANON - chineseartist on July 12, 2007
    short chapter, but you're just getting started i hope. good luck and i like the story concept.
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  • From yaoihentai69 on July 12, 2007
    Well now, you got my attention. ^^ Pretty easy to read/understand and seems interesting. I'll be looking forward to the next update.
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  • From ANON - kay on July 12, 2007
    um well on the good side the story is a good idea on the bad side you NEED a beta BADLY. for example you wrote "he was born immoral how do you become unmoral" (or something to that effect) that sentence manke NO SENSE at all. i gather that you meant he was born immortal...there is a difference between the words immoral and immortal.there were lots of other mistakes as well. also your chapter legnth should be longer and should have more depth to it.its a good first try though keep it up
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