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Reviews for Two Legendary Beasts Dragon & Griffin

By : brook13baby13
  • From Luma on December 20, 2007
    Get a beta. Maybe more then one would be best because honestly, you're making my brain hurt just by trying to read this. The numerous mechanical errors and lack of detail is pushing me away from ever even thinking about this story every again. It's bland and it lacks so many things to keep my interest in it. Get someone to help you improve your writing ability. That's all I can really say.
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  • From mistysmysticrose on December 19, 2007
    I really liked this story when I first read it on Fanfiction. So I was wondering if you were going to update it on there as well or if you were just going to up date it here.
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  • From ANON - animelover on November 01, 2007
    hmmm, interesting. i think i kinda like this and want to see more; not quite sure, but yeah. why'd they "break up"? where was sakura ... wait, who cares about her?

    let's see more! later ..
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  • From solitare1 on October 18, 2007
    Yeah, I definetly need more of this story. This is really good.
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  • From ANON - Chioma on October 15, 2007
    i will like an update of this story.
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  • From Jessicajane1318 on July 27, 2007
    lol i dont know where i came up with her. i guess i just saw a slut one day and decided to put her into character. lol.
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  • From Jessicajane1318 on July 26, 2007
    awesome! is he good to me? keep his dog away lol? no its cool. i am about to put the next chapter in "i dont love you" up. it has alot of you in it... you get embarassed... and you see a man naked. its good lol. i am not quite finished... but close. oh... did you call me today at like 12:30 1:00?
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  • From Jessicajane1318 on July 23, 2007
    I LOVE this story.... where are the rest of your chapters??? i know i know... i'm a WO-man whore in it lol. but ehhh. i still love it.
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  • From ANON - saki on July 10, 2007
    That's totally hot. I koved this first chapter. Now I want to read more and find out why Naruto says they were broken up.
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  • From anapana83 on July 10, 2007
    Wow, this went off to a hawt start. Give us more!
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