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Reviews for Of Broken Bones and Shattered Dreams

By : Saitochan
  • From ANON - Leslie on December 14, 2009
    omg so goood! Yes Neji and tenten are so cute together, I love it! Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Dawn on December 08, 2008
    soooo sweet! Go Neji!
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  • From Kipling on October 03, 2008
    Despite the lack of smex I enjoyed this chapter. Maybe I should say, I enjoyed this chapter with the lack of smexiness? I actually like how you're making Neji wait. It makes it feel more realistic, more IC for them both (I don't see Tenten as the type to bedhop) and honestly I enjoyed reading about the two of them just cuddling. I LOVED reading it from Neji's POV, especially - like the way he's all "YAY TENTEN'S BOOBS" but trying really hard just to be there for her. Tenten's right - he is sweet.

    You've actually done quite a good job of constructing this dynamic between the team. Neji's adorable, especially in light of Lee - yet Lee isn't a bastard, nor unrealistically hateful, just a real guy with a real reaction. I was actually expecting Tenten to spill but the fact that she didn't just builds my anticipation for when Neji does find out.

    In short, I love this story, I love your buildup to Nejiten, I love the originality of your approach, and I can't WAIT for the next chapter.
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  • From gordafarid on October 02, 2008
    wow, amazing story! Personally I like LeeTen more than Nejiten, but in this story it's such a triangel and so mcuh tense that no one really knows whom Tenten is realy choosing and those problems are that, neji loves tenten, but she loves lee and lee is inlove with that sakura. maaan you better hurry up with the next chapter! :D
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  • From Kipling on September 20, 2008
    Oh PLEASE let there be! It doesn't have to be right away,but I always had the feeling Neji would make the better partner for Tenten in this fic. Maybe he comforts her?
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  • From Silent Pluto on July 08, 2008
    Oh my god!
    I love this story you have to update soon k!
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  • From ANON - Dawn on June 25, 2008
    awww I'm glad to hear that. I'd like a neji/tenten lemon, not just bc it's a hot pairing, but it'd be cool for her to be with te one who loves her. lol
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  • From Kipling on June 25, 2008
    Ooooh. Nejiten lemon! Please! Please!

    ...I've kind of been anticipating it. Anxiously. ^^;; Hehehe. It's just - the Tenten crushing on Lee, Neji comforts her when rejection occurs angle was so NOVEL and I love reading stories where the usual dynamic is flipped. Neji chasing Tenten is one of my favorites.

    Either way, you're a great writer and I'm looking forward to the next chapter - whether or not there is Nejiten lemon.
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  • From Archfiend on June 25, 2008
    A TenTen/Neiji lemon would certainly advance your theme of the mènage à trois forming with the thee of them, and it`d give lots of opportunities for misunderstandings and generally a bit of a soap opera. Should you chose not to insert a Neiji lemon then you will have to drop a story strand that has made the story so good so far, soI suppose there is more that speaks for the lemon otherwise the story should have started out as a straigt Lee/TenTen stor with a different approach. Though no matter what please Update soon
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  • From ANON - Dawn on June 23, 2008
    I love this story! There aren't enough out there about these characters. And I love the love triangle too. I want a Neji/tenten lemon! lol

    Please continue your story!!
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  • From Archfiend on May 30, 2008
    well first of all it want to congratulate on the persons this fic focuses on, very unusual. Secondly you write your story well and the lemon scenewas written in a very romantic way. It is also interesting tosee how your charactersare revolving around never quite being able to catch up zo each other. Your story has loads of potential and the plot is coming about nicely making me want you to update as soon as possible
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  • From ANON - Chigirl on October 07, 2007
    Please update soon! I love this story and I like angry Lee! But please dont let him be a bastard towards Tenten! A new chapter right away!
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  • From ANON - prinlita on October 07, 2007
    so so happy that you're still writing this fic. the newest chapter was so hot, but the ending was so sad for tenten. Anyway keep up the good work and good luck with your exams.
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  • From Kipling on August 22, 2007
    I don't know why I haven't said how much I enjoy this story. I'm a fan of Neji/Tenten but danged if the way you write this isn't making me curious about Lee/Tenten. I especially love reading how Neji and Lee begin to realize their fair teammate is different from them....Neji's realizations are especially fun. I assume the next lemon is going to be Lee/Tenten...will there be any NejiTenten action? Any jealous fights? Heck, threesomes?
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  • From elaynabrooks on August 18, 2007
    I don't know if you have it or not, but Cartoon Network has been having this 'Naruto Hundo' thing going on, and even though I've seen all the episodes already, I loved watching my favorite parts. It reminded me of your story, and this just confirms that your story is a believable story if sticking to canon. Once again, well done. ^.^


    As for the Harry Potter thing, it's no big deal...I actually went through the chapters, and realized you had a valid point when it came to similarities. I can't remember which chapter it was, but remember the one where Sakura had the map? I think I stole the little-dot-for-your-location-on-the-map thing. The other part, where the rest of the ink bled into view for her was my own idea. For whatever reason, I didn't intentionally do this. I laughed when I read it again, and while it fits, I did see the absolute similarities. Thanks for pointing it out. But when it comes down to it, I did it because it was convenient, not because it was from someone else's works. It just tells me that you're paying attention, and I like that. Currently working on chapter seven. While it's going to be funny and sweet, it will also be sad. I think it might be one of my longer chapters, so it'll take me a while since I have other obligations to fulfill as well.


    Kiyasume
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