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Reviews for Of Broken Bones and Shattered Dreams

By : Saitochan
  • From elaynabrooks on August 16, 2007
    Ah. This....I could definitely see this happening in the cannon. It was written well, and I felt Ten-ten's pain at Lee preferring Sakura to herself, something I've had the unlucky fortune to feel myself. It's amazing how some people can write well, and then how some can write realistically. Good job.


    As for a similarity between my stories and Harry Potter, could you explain that in a bit more detail? I'm afraid I came up a bit confused at that statement, and, as curious as I am, I wondered what you meant by that.


    Kiyasume
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  • From ANON - prinlita on August 04, 2007
    How embarrasing for tenten to wake up like that, but at least lee is noticing her for the first time as a woman. Anyway I loved the last chapter. I read that you want what's wrong with the fic, but so far I've got nothing. I'll review with the first thing that's wrong when I see it. Promise(grin) Keep up the good work, and update soon.

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  • From setsue on July 25, 2007
    Hey, a little blood can go a long, long, long way. Even if it weren't much, it can look real bad.
    I can't figure out how to say I know about it without sounding like a grade A nutcase, i just know.
    Keep up the effort, it's paying off.
    CD
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  • From ANON - prinlita on July 24, 2007
    Love this fic!!! I really like fics about team gai. Love neji, and lee is so funny. Anyway about your fic please update soon and tell me how tenten is. I like the way you've set up the fic with tenten and the guys. Please write more I'm dying to know what happens.
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  • From BouncyBunny on July 16, 2007
    Holy...shit! Keep writing!
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