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Reviews for Change of Fate

By : oberlisk
  • From Henki8 on September 29, 2007
    It hard to understand what's going on sometimes, but overall it's a good plot
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  • From Qiana on September 26, 2007
    Please keep it Itachi and Naruto, I love that pairing
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  • From serenagold on September 24, 2007
    its a great idea for a story, but the one question that has kept irking me throughout the whole thing was "Why do the Akatsuki keep letting everybody live?" I mean won't it just cause trouble for them later on? Plus wouldn't killing be easier than swiping someone of thier memories? As evident with Naruto in this last chapter, obviously locked memories can be retrieved. :/

    Akatsuki got no whims against killing, so the only thing i can figure is that you just didn't want to kill off the main characters that came across them. As much as I love Kakashi, Ayami and her father (I forget his name), there was no reason to let them live.


    Keep up the good work though. :P
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  • From FluffyLemons on September 23, 2007
    Uhm..A bit random..And you need to proof read..But it's okay...
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  • From kati on September 23, 2007
    this looks good i love itanaru! but you should probably get a beta cause it would make it a whole lot better.
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  • From ReflectionsOTR on September 23, 2007
    I am in the process of writing an e-mail response but I wanted to respond to this story sooner than later.

    It is a good start though it does need a little work to make it easier to understand. Some of the dialog is a little difficult and I am not sure if it is something that was caused by aff.net or something with the original text but there appear to be gaps in the scenes.

    Personally I dislike the oversimplification of characters such as giving flat titles of good or evil as even the most vilest of characters, if they are to have any depth of personality, must have some motivation to their actions.

    For instance I find it hard to believe that Itachi would kill his clan just because he could or even with something simple as a discovery of a hidden diary but what if something else happened. For instance what would a person do if he found out his clan intended to wipe out the village he had sworn loyalty to? Or if they were the ones to attract the 9 tails ire against Kanoha(this theory would combine really well with power hungry Head of clan wanting to use the most powerful demon to create an even more powerful bloodline maybe even with the sacrifice of Sasuke to charge the ritual)? Or if the clan had a meeting after they read the entries about Naruto and (the Uchiha head being one of those most vocal with the wish to destroy the 'demon') tried to order Itachi to attack his own charge(this would combine with Itachi keeping his role a secret from even his father but as an ANBU that would not be far fetched), this last idea would not even require any alteration of any of the posted chapters.

    Sorry it is taking so long for me to respond, I really hope college stuff goes well for you. Please feel free to ask specific questions if you want me to clarify anything that I have suggested or written.

    ~Reflections
    HarrisDaniel@hotmail.com

    PS I found Wikipedia's article about Akatsuki very informative when it actually comes to understanding things, though I am not sure that it is all inclusive
    http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Akatsuki_%28Naruto%29
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  • From Kiku666 on August 17, 2007
    *holds hands to chest* ...I LOVE YOU!!!! *glomps* FINALLY!!!! FINALLY a ItachixNaruto fic! Do you know how hard it is finding a good fic with this pairing?!?! I swear... you're my new hero! I read all of your other Naruto stories and I loved them as well... PLEASE keep writing more!
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  • From Qiana on July 20, 2007
    Please make itItachi/Naruto pairing. I love what you have so far.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 19, 2007
    make it a threesome!! hahahaha just joking!!
    ASOTA
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  • From spoon10488 on July 18, 2007
    very cool story. i think you should make this a Itachi/Naruto fic
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  • From EmpyrealFantasy on July 14, 2007
    Nyahhhhh ItaNaru loooveeeee... *hearts* Continueee! :)
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  • From Hen on July 10, 2007
    Since they have both Naruto and Kakashi, will you be making this story Kaka/Naru? Cause there aren't enough of those stories out there!
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