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Reviews for Natural

By : Lechan
  • From ANON - Ultra on March 10, 2012
    I really do hope you add more to this. It was wonderful.

    And since I can't Review Kyuubi The Bitch for whatever reason, i'll just do it here, now:

    Please update that story soon. I'm going insane with waiting. IT IS SO WELL WRITTEN AND SO AWESOME.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 24, 2010
    I really hope you continue this. This ending makes my heart feel like its trapped in a vice.
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  • From ValheruYaoi on March 04, 2008
    Cool story... true guess it would be easy to keep him alive afterwards but that was change this fic from the semi-dark fic that it started out into something else... If you can manage it then go ahead but from my point of view it's going to be really hard to keep the flow and mood of the story going (and the style you wrote it in)


    Great job with the style, the transitions and the details of this story.
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  • From ANON - AnsemMesna on February 28, 2008
    Oh I forgot, my e-mail is orochi_greel@live.com
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  • From ANON - AnsemMesna on February 28, 2008
    I want to copy of the song.
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  • From ANON - comatoze on July 14, 2007
    Wow. This is only rated ++++?!? This is honestly one of the best one-shots I have EVER read. You had me crying it was so well written. Dear lord pease keep up the good work, haha.

    I liked it as a one shot, and it should probably stay that way, but honestly, if you found a way to continue this, I'm all for it.

    Wow.
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  • From ANON - Skaye on July 09, 2007
    Cool fic. It was very nice I hope you contuine it maybe put Sasuke point of view?

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  • From anndragera007 on July 09, 2007
    damn good! you had me crying half way through!

    very good story (even though it was only based on the first 4 min or so).
    Awesome! loved it entirely!
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  • From spoon10488 on July 08, 2007
    that was so sad. please continue the story. :')
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  • From sunlight159 on July 08, 2007
    wow... that story gave me physical chills of reaction.. That was amazing writing...
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  • From ANON - V on July 08, 2007
    I love the way this is going can you make it a chapter please?
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  • From Vien on July 08, 2007
    I cried. It was so damn good. Hope you'll give us more.
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  • From emp78 on July 08, 2007
    That was so good! Leave it as a one-shot; it would ruin the story if made longer, in my opinion. The way it is now brings out the feelings involved between the two.
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  • From Rianestorm on July 08, 2007
    That was really good, it made me cry. I've thought a few times that if it was me at that moment I'd have been hard pressed not to just let him stab me. If I were you I'd leave it as a oneshot, it makes more of an impact this way. Good job.
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