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Reviews for How We Miss Together Tonight

By : dengrymme
  • From ANON - AnhelakaArie on May 03, 2011
    Hello, my name is Artem. I wanna translate your fanfiction into Russian for people who dont speak English. Can I do that?
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  • From blueh on July 09, 2007
    Great story. Very sweet indeed. ^^,

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  • From anndragera007 on July 07, 2007
    awesome job! i loved this. but you do know sasuke has black eyes right?
    so why brown?

    other than that it was amazing. you did a great job with naruto and his feelings. - but honestly, next time - have sasuke run for the gym. - more room there and usually mats as well!
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  • From ANON - jessie on July 07, 2007
    that was cool.. a bit angsty but i like it.. go for narusasu!!
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  • From ringpop on July 07, 2007
    "Why don't you compete with me anymore? What is the fun in being the best, when you're not making me do better?" That line....*nods head slowly*....that line was gold.
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  • From SasUke28 on July 06, 2007
    *droolz* i love it........you need to make more stories like this!
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  • From ANON - lo on July 06, 2007
    Nicely written, I can tell you put some realy thought into this. Nice job.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 06, 2007
    Nice that was really good........
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  • From Picspixie on July 06, 2007
    omg that was soooo awesome lol, very well written and i luved the character growth etc. hope you add to this, though it does stand alone well also, just great, luved it so much :P
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  • From anapana83 on July 06, 2007
    Very nice, sweet and excellently descriptive. I love the little speech Sasuke gave too. Very well done. ^_^
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  • From serenagold on July 06, 2007
    oh my gosh! what a great dynamic! =^^= I love it!
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  • From ANON - Luthien Wildglen on July 06, 2007
    YOU POSTED IT!!! I was getting worried that you had decided not to post it here but I'm glad you did because it was amazing! And the Summary was great too! I read it several more times too and its still fantastic! You do promise to write more and post it right? (emphasis on the posting mind you!). Anyway I just wanted to drop in and say that the fic is still fantastic and I can't wait to read whatever else you have in store for us! My best wishes for you and your writing!
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  • From ANON - beautifullove348 on July 06, 2007
    There are absolutely so many things I want to comment about on this one-shot that I do not think it will fit. First of all this was an AMAZING one-shot. Right from the start it was so full of feeling. How the story formed was perfect...I definitely like how you portrayed Sasuke and Naruto's charaters not cliché as most of these highschool stories are prone to do. You made them express their feelings in a nicely done way. And I'm not only talking about the smut ;P Which was done VERY nicely by the way. But I'm talking about their conversation at the beginning. I could actually picture how their past was like and how they depended on their rivalry. It was MARVELOUS! Also that brings me to the well writtin descriptions. I have to give you major thanks...your descriptions allowed me to picture the highschool scene PERFECTLY. Your lemon, strangely enough though it wasn't long because I prefer longer lemons, was definitely right for this story. It was innocent in a way and portrayed as not being perfect which really appealed to me. Their laughter was a key element and I liked it! I have not read very many stories like this one, definitely not. I admire your creativity and your writing skills. PLease, please write more stories wether it be one-shots or full out stories! I'm begging you:) This one-shot blew me away!
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  • From ANON - Vixenia on July 06, 2007
    OMG I LOVED THIS. this is like the best oneshot i've ever read. i love it to death. i'll prolly read it over and over
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  • From ANON - kai on July 06, 2007
    that was one of the cutest and perhaps best oneshots ive ever read i mostlikely will read it at least six more times its so heart warming,by the ending id say that was the end but i liked it none the less.give the beta props too
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