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Reviews for A bond thicker than blood

By : Snoopythebrave
  • From Arcueido on July 12, 2007
    Hiya (^_^), only up to chappie 5 but i must say that the plot is really intriguing.

    Even if I haven't read the other chapters, I'm already guessing it'll get better...

    However, I'm inclined to point out one error that should be fixed and that's the title's spelling.... I thought it was intentional at first but I discovered under Chapter 1 that the title is indeed "A bond thicker than blood". If you're wondering how that can be fixed, its easily done under edit details. Here's my email if you're looking for beta...

    Hypergraphian@gmail.com


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  • From abhorsen3 on July 12, 2007
    I almost cried with Sasuke when Naruto was crying in his arm!! It was so sad at the beginning but I was happy things were getting better for Naruto!!
    I'd offer to be your beta reader if you like. I don't know if you would mind, but will be happy to help if you want.
    I'm already looking forward to the next chapter, I love the fact I can read one chaptere a day^_^
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  • From abhorsen3 on July 11, 2007
    Oh my god, that was just so cute there at the end!! I feel so sorry for Naruto for having had to go through all that but I'm glad Sasuke is there to make him feel better!! Things are going nicely between those two, I just hope Sasuke can presuade Naruto that he isn't dirty!! What happend to him was not his fault!! I love this story!!
    Thankfully my laptop has never died on me like that while writting something important, mind you it has accidently deleted an email I was writting and that nearly drove me crazy so I know compared to that you must have felt pretty annoyed!!
    It's a shame you don't have some days off work!! I'm ill at the moment so my days off came at a good time, I have the flue!! I think your going to enjoy your holiday a lot in a weeks time!! My holiday from work is in september, just before university starts!!
    Well I can't wait till the next chapter, try not to work too hard^_^
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  • From roro237 on July 11, 2007
    I have fallen in love with your story:) Ch.9 was so touching. I'll be here to the end:)
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  • From abhorsen3 on July 11, 2007
    That was just so sweet!! They make such a cute picture sleeping on the hospital bed together!! It should be interesting seeing Sasuke sticking close to Naruto for a whole week!! They're so cute together^_^
    I'm glad your in a writing mood, means more to read for me^_^
    The noodles sound nice, I like cooking for myself, even if I say so not a bad cook myself! The only good thing about working is the money! I'm off work for two days, so I'm going to take complete advantage of my free time!! I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter^_^
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  • From abhorsen3 on July 10, 2007
    My heart was breaking when I was reading this chapter, poor Naruto!!! It must be reallt frustrating for Sasuke not knowing anything!! Im looking forward to seeing how things develop between Naruto and Sasuke, it's great that it's not finishing any time soon as that means plenty to read for me!!
    I was so happy to see chapter 7 up, I was sure there wouldn't be an update but wanted to see annyway and there it was, chapter 7!!!! I'm so looking forward to reading the next chapter, hope you had something to eat!! I know what you mean about doing overtime at work, I got roped into doing 3 extra days so I'm really tired!! Feel a lot better now though after reading^_^
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  • From MurakiXTsuzuki on July 10, 2007
    AWWW poor Naruto! Lol man I need to know what happens next! Great chapter! Awesome job! Lol PLEZ PLEZ TRY TO UPDATE SOON!!
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  • From abhorsen3 on July 09, 2007
    Oh my god!!! What's happening?! I can't wait to read the next part, I hope you update soon!!!
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  • From abhorsen3 on July 09, 2007
    Poor Naruto, he had a hard childhood!! I wonder what's going to happen with those two!! Ok must hurry and read the next part, you just can't stop reading this after you start!! Thanks for sharing^_^
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  • From abhorsen3 on July 09, 2007
    Sasuke just walked in didn't he?! This is really good, the story get's you interested and makes you want to read on!! Ok off to read the rest, just wanted to say love the story so far^_^
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  • From MurakiXTsuzuki on July 09, 2007
    OOOO Man that is crazy lol! Poor Naruto! But yeah awesome chapters! I was so happy when i saw tihs was updated and then I was like 'yeah! two new chapters muahahaha' lol. But yeah, I can't wait for the next chapter, seriously! Lol GREAT JOB! AWESOME STORY! PLEZ TRY TO UPDATE SOON!
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  • From MurakiXTsuzuki on July 08, 2007
    OOO he has his address lol and man, what happened to Nauto? Lol I was so happy when I saw you updated heh. I was in the middle of another story but I figured I'd rather read this lol. Awesome Chapter!!! GREAT JOB! I'll be looking forward to the next chapter! PLEZ TRY TO UPDATE SOON!
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  • From Luma on July 08, 2007
    Hn... interesting. o_O
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  • From MurakiXTsuzuki on July 08, 2007
    Hahaha I got a chapter haha, man, my day has been made lol. But w/e enough about that, Great chapter! At the end I was like "oooooo it's Sasuke" then I kinda laughed madly to myself... lol. But yes, GREAT Chapter! I REALLY wanna see where you take this lol. PLEZ TRY TO UPDATE SOON!
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  • From MurakiXTsuzuki on July 07, 2007
    Good Chapter! I want to know what's going on with Sasuke lol. But yeah, good job! Plez try to update soon
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