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Reviews for A bond thicker than blood

By : Snoopythebrave

From LadyRonin on November 24, 2007
thanks for the eplilogue and the cookie it has brightened me in this time of triffin' crazy computers and no internet. i totally love the fact that sasuke became a detective that was so unexpected (nice twist), especially when you add in the fact that naruto is a yakuzi (i am so sorry for my bad spelling) boss and the fact that they are still together rocks. i love this story so much that i had to give you all the props for making an entertaining, exciting, understanable reading experience and look forward to having a chance to see your writing again. may a skittles rainbow fall whenever you wish and see you later.
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From KoibitoFemme on November 24, 2007
*claps her hands after she shoves a box of tissue up her nose* Great ending. I wish you would have called on me to beta for you I am never busy when if comes to your chapters. I loved this story. BRAVO!!
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From LadyJessien on September 06, 2007
after finally finishing the story I'm so happy...I began to vry when I read that naruto was shot. I'm ganna read more of your stuff. great job!
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From abhorsen3 on September 01, 2007
This was so good!! I liked the ending, I liked the way you didn't just make it a happy ending straight away with Naruto winning and everything being fine, you kept us guessing till the end on wither or not things were going to be ok!!
I abslutely love this story!! Thanks so much for writing it^_^
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From LadyWolf on September 01, 2007
**sighs heavily**** I freakin' love this story!!!! OMG...Thank you so much for writing it. This just re-enforces my love for this couple.!!!!

I know, I know a little overly dramatic,.....but who cares, That's me!!!!! I'll definitely be looking for more of your work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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From LadyWolf on August 29, 2007
OMG!!!!!!!OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Sorry I haven't left any reviews up until now, but I just couldn't stop reading! This story, the plot the characters have drawn me in....my gosh Snoopy, I have this story bookmarked!!!! Ya hear me BOOKMARKED!!!!

Ok, I'm goin' back readin'!!!

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From morbidsockpuppet on August 28, 2007
Epilogue!?!?
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From LadyRonin on August 26, 2007
so happy and yet so sad. if you have ever heard of the song burning brght by shinedown i feel like that right now. "nothings ever wrong but nothing ever right such a cruel contradiction ...........i was born to indecision", i am happy that you are leaving for you journey to hong kong (new places are always full of unexpected fun especially when you really get a chance to immerse into a new diffrent culture) i hope you arrive safely. i am sad that you great story is ending (and since you will not be updating understandably (moving is always so hard but maybe because i'm lazy)the other story for a while i'll miss having something interesting to read so even if it's selfish i hope that you will not abandon it. because i got to tell you i pretty much figured that you couldn't surprise to much anymore when boom kyuubi is naruto's older brother. i know you are like he's dead and has no real significance to the story. it's just that kyuubi was naruto's older brother (i think saying it twice says everything don't you). i wish he could be reborn like blade to seek vengence on leadersama with a bombin motorcycle and blazin ass attitude (not going to happen but you never know sequels *hint*). no pressure or anything that sorta just popped in my head when i saw his name. thanks for a nice chapter and now on to the next.
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From KoibitoFemme on August 26, 2007
Thats was simply superb you have a gift. I really like the story although I wonder what Leader sama will do now that Naruto is officially in charge.
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From LadyRonin on August 22, 2007
i hope you had smores with stay puff sorry i didn't send chocolate and gramhn crackers. for the gooey sweetness is still there. with sasuke and naruto finally talking again. i am full of sweetness and light once again. although i see how you did neiji so he is no longer considered a threat to me. ino on the other hand is another kettle of fish. is she gonna pop up and say that she is pregnant by sasuke. i can't remeber but is sai going to be included in this story at all. that ends my questions because it all depends on how the next chapter plays out. can't wait for the next update.
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From LadyJessien on August 22, 2007
Sasuke makes me want to cry sometimes...others...he makes me want to punch him in the head... more soon KK!
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From gaara89 on August 21, 2007
OMG! This is sooo good! Please continue soon!
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From LadyRonin on August 20, 2007
this was such a gooey sweet chapter that i am sending you the stay puff marshmallow manfrom ghostbusters to eat or explode whichever is your pleasure. i glad you had momo talk to sasuke it was unexpected and you know how i like the surprises. i just would have thought a typical scenerio with haku being the one to talk to sasuke. so it was really slick how you had naruto's father figure talk to sasuke. maybe after sasuke talks to naruto then i am guessing in the chapter after next naruto should be speaking to momo again. i hoping it will be soon cause a sad momo makes me sad for him. when naruto confronts orochimaru (finally spelled it right) is something going to happen to one of his friends or sasuke. i have been wanting to ask if this is the time that leadersama will show up again and try to get rid od both orochimaru and naruto (sorta like a driveby). what if sasuke showed up then and was severly wounded would naruto kirk out and start a gang war. that would be kinda cool too considering that sasuke is supposed to be naruto's anchor to this world. so if something happened to his anchor how will naruto act. sorry rabling because the possibilities are endless and i can't wait to see which one you choose. see ya at the next update.
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From LadyRonin on August 13, 2007
even though everything is now basically in the open and they are talking it out i still wonder about something. sasuke and naruto was talking about the yakuzi but neither brought up the fact that oochimaru was raping naruto for alsmost a whole year. will this be a deciding fator when they discuss this whether sasuke leaves naruto (temporarily) or not. will their talk about this subject make or break naruto when it comes for the time for him to confront oochimaru. will he be having flashbacks during the battle (or something that will make him freeze up) giving oochimaru an advantage. what if naruto lost and instead of killing him oochimaru demanded that he have to come to is side. wouldn's that be something if sasuke had save naruto from oochimaru (two avening down with one stone). since naruto and sasuke may split is this the time that you will now have neiji make his move since he said that he would go after naruto if sasuke let him go. does neiji even know about naruto's past (family being murdered, in league with the yakuzi, anything) because wouldn't this effect how naruto would see his as a potential partner. also now that naruto has talked to sasuke about the yakuzi he at least seems to feel more comfrotable in seeing the yakuzi as a means of protecting his family. i like that he seems to be getting his old spunk back. thanks and can't wait for the next update.
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From LadyRonin on August 10, 2007
oh my gosh i thought htis was hilarious. ok ok let me be specific i thought when sasuke was either talking or thinking about ino cracked me up. i like how you gave her the thirty year old my biological clock is ticking desperate housewife feel. kudos to your briallance as a writer i mean you ahve to admit it's bad when you are trying to get a drunk gay man to sleep with you. of course the drama after that of naruto being there to hear their arguement was a nice cliffie. has naruto and sasuke been seperated since they spoke to oochimaru and how long of a period was it. i get the impression that it was at least several weeks and yet i'm not sure (it never hurts to ask if you not sure right. what actually does the challenge consist of. does naruto and oochimaru have a swordfight (since it's the yakuzi) or will be some sort of martial arts standoff. oochimaru would naturally be good with a sword and naruto is takng the lessons so anything goes i guess. also are you going to go into more detail about what happened after oochimaru told naruto that momo knew that he had killed his family (like how he felt about momo keeping that a secret from him etc.). thanks for a great capter and can't wait to see the next one.
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