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Reviews for Scroll of Sexual Desire

By : EclipseCannon
  • From ANON - T.O.B on July 09, 2007
    well, that was interesting

    i wodenr what will happen next

    can't wait til the next chapter

    what about kurenai,anko,hana,and maybe shizune,also maybe yugao

    SEE YA
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  • From ANON - JuPMod on July 09, 2007
    Interesting. I read your note that this would end up being a NaruHina. Just how many of the girls would Naruto have sex with before he settles down with Hinata? He does know the last names of Ino and Temari, thus it would be easier for him to bang them before banging Tenten, given he doesn't know her last name. Hinata would be last if she's going to be Naruto's steady. :)
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  • From ANON - gameshark on July 09, 2007
    oh hell yeah plz up date soon plz im on my hands a knees
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  • From Jin on July 08, 2007
    You have to write a Naruto/Ayame lemon! There are so few of them out there and she is so freaking HOT. I'd be really disappointed if you skipped over it.

    I also hope you include Temari in on the fun at some point, Shikamaru be damned.

    Great story so far. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - SAotW on July 07, 2007
    Aye. It pleases me to read your excellent smut. Carry on.

    You have excellent writing form by the way.

    Supreme Admiral of the Web
    AFF.Net Commanding
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  • From ANON - ninjakitty on July 07, 2007
    i'm curious as to where this is going
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  • From ANON - Chronostorm on July 07, 2007
    Well i most certainly think so and i have yet to find a Naruto/Hinata Lemon i don't like but also are you going to include Yugito (she is the 2 tailed Jinchuriki (i spelled that wrong didn't i) from cloud) in the story and i am also wondering if the age extention on this from young to old.
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  • From wheathermangohanssj4 on July 07, 2007
    those chapters were great sorry that my name is long its been my screnename for a copule of years and i type it quickly so i forget that it is inconvent for others to write it.

    if you want when, or if, you respond to this you could call me W-G-ssj4 unless someone else comes up with that user name.

    I can't wait for hinata to come in. I have a funny feeling that the jutse actual won't affect her at all because, well she's hinata


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  • From serenagold on July 07, 2007
    Heh, its good to see a (somewhat) good natured and slightly pervy (straight) Sasuke for a change.


    Also, I just gotta say, while Naruto is like a kid at christmas with a new toy, his lack of common sense is really going to bite him on the ass with Ayame. Everyone knows, you don't shit where you eat. Yeah, she might not have any ties to the people he knows, but if he gets on the bad side of old man Teuchi... no more Ramen! Then death! (From starvation from lack of ramen.) >:) Bwahahahahahaa!
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  • From ANON - Libu on July 07, 2007
    Alright Ayame then ANko Mitarashi, Kurenai I think it's her last name Yuuhi,
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  • From ANON - Libu on July 07, 2007
    Nice, one of the best stories I've read so far
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  • From ANON - Libu on July 07, 2007
    Great story, the perverts rise lol
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  • From ANON - Wolfbane420 on July 07, 2007
    Why don't make this a Naruharem with Hinata as the Alpha Female.
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  • From ANON - garoga-chan on July 07, 2007
    YATTA! time for the blonde mack daddy kick (or rather fuck XD) some ass

    awesome stuff in every way, you win!
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  • From ANON - morgoroth on July 07, 2007
    I'm pretty sure its sannin or at least sennin with 2 n's... watever though i might be wrong... you show promise so i volunteer to be your beta if you ever need one
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