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Reviews for Scroll of Sexual Desire

By : EclipseCannon
  • From ANON - blazer6 on July 12, 2007
    this looks pretty neat. I hope you keep it up ill look out for it.
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  • From ANON - bloody shadow on July 12, 2007
    Yes, You updated.
    good job on another great chapter.

    Once again I'm loven this story, can't wait to see what happens next.
    also love the idea of the scroll evolving with each use, can't wait to see what other jutsu are uncovered.

    SO once again good job on the story & good luck with the rest of it.
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  • From DemonicKnight on July 12, 2007
    This is damn good so far. Please continue.
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  • From Tenithus on July 11, 2007
    Great! I ove it! I wish I was you so I can bear to write Naruto in any possible pairing. When ever I tried to do it I always have Hinata on my mind and a feeling that he only belong to Hinata and Vice Versa. I salute you with my deepest and truest form of respect and may you make senseless sex great!
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  • From ANON - Arisa on July 11, 2007
    *lol* both naruto's sensei are perverts. nice story! keep it up, i want to know what naruto's planning.
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  • From ANON - Bren the wise on July 11, 2007
    HAHAHAHA your really ooc'ed kakashi on chapter 4

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  • From ANON - Chronostorm on July 11, 2007
    Well that sucks about missing the update day but hey can't wait for more this is getting interesting and i don't think Naruto would have trouble dispatching Kiba but then again i like kiba bashing so ya.
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  • From Jin on July 11, 2007
    (Drools) Two lemons...and a NaruAya lemon being one of them! What more could a guy ask for?
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  • From ANON - Ero-Bontenmaru on July 11, 2007
    This seems like my kind of story. I'm sure I'm gonna enjoy it a lot.
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  • From jupmod on July 11, 2007
    Eh? Naruto doesn't know Temari's last name? I find that odd given he knows of Gaara's last name of Sabaku, so it should be reasonable Naruto can figure that Temari's last name is the same. After all, Gaara and Temari are siblings, thus they share the same last name.

    Anyway, I look forward to Naruto getting it on with the ramen stand girl. I wouldn't mind Naruto getting Tenten, Ino, and Temari before setting on Hinata. :)

    BTW, why would any guy want that second version of that jutsu? The first one, as Jiriya said, makes for one-stands without consequences. Sakura wouldn't remember anything, so Naruto should be safe. Now if Naruto uses that second jutsu, the woman would only have sex with him but not in the romantic sense. That's not good, because if Naruto says settles with Hinata as his steady girlfriend (according to your notes, he will), yet uses that second jutsu on another woman, Naruto will be in deep trouble because that other woman will keep coming to him for sexual favors, etc. I can't think of any woman Naruto can safely use that second jutsu without consequences, unless you're plaining a harem for him which your notes say you are not.
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  • From serenagold on July 11, 2007
    oh man... this chapter is just soooo OOC for both Naruto and his descriptions of his fellow Konoha Kunoichis. Are you a strict watcher of the English dubs? Of course, this is the first chapter of the story to really strike me like that...

    that said...

    I just gotta gush about your description of Kakashi and his reaction to Naruto wanting to read the Icha Icha series. He's like a rabid fan girl! (Squee!) It just brightened up my day. ^^
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  • From ANON - gersquin_065 on July 11, 2007
    hello, i loved your fanfic, it´s not only a lemon story, UPDATE fast.
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  • From wheathermangohanssj4 on July 11, 2007
    Oh that was so boring. But at least we know how the scroll works and you did promis two lemons for the next chapter so all is well
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  • From ANON - Bren on July 09, 2007
    OH MAN THIS IS GOING TO GET GOOD

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  • From ANON - bloody shadow on July 09, 2007
    man, I Love this story.
    I like how you combine smut with a good story, makes it more interesting.
    Anyway in the next chapter I think you should go into more detail about the scroll(how long it lasts, any memory afterwords, ect)but try to work the lemon in if you can.Anyway please update soon, Can't Wait!

    PS: Maybe you can involve some of the older women such as Kurenai or tsunade
    Maybe even get some OC characters. just throwing out ideas
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