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Reviews for Scroll of Sexual Desire

By : EclipseCannon
  • From qmop2 on August 03, 2007
    Great story
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  • From ANON - mad6231 on August 02, 2007
    Great work on this chapter! I impressed with the amount of detail you used as well as the plot you've developed in your story which seperates it from the oversized one-shot stories out there. As for your challenge, I've already found another fanfic with a Naruto/Ayame pairing that was made before your's I'm sorry to say, though I find your's to be better. You can find it at this link: http://naruto.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=544198949&chapter=20
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  • From DemonicKnight on August 01, 2007
    Most impressive. Please continue.
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  • From setsue on August 01, 2007
    *laughing* Oh, the lewd perversion!!!
    Naruto needs to pace himself or the back lash will knock him silly!
    And this is planned? *laughing* EVEN BETTER! Jiriaya is my hero.
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  • From ANON - Chronostorm on July 31, 2007
    Well i have to admit although it long it was worth the wait for it dang it had a lot and two girls in one night i wonder if Naruto will get more imaginative about the sex him i also wonder whats going to happen in that shower now who will Naruto's next vic.. i mean volunteer can't wait to find out.
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  • From COK on July 31, 2007
    pretty good :D
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  • From ANON - spike shin on July 31, 2007
    will i love the story. so far keep them comming and your not the frist i hate to say
    http://naruto.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=544198949&chapter=20
    there ya go and i liked your better and keep them comming
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  • From ANON - KyuubiNaruto4 on July 31, 2007
    Hate to say this but Demon God of Chaos got you beat with Naruto/Ayame. As a matter of fact he has had Naruto do every girl(even some guys turned into girls) that isn't Sakura, Ino, or Hinata(Hinata being raped doesn't count)
    here is the link to the multiple one-shots http://naruto.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=544198949 chapter 20 is Naruto/Ayame. He even did a Naruto/Naruko & Naruto/Rin.

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  • From wheathermangohanssj4 on July 30, 2007
    sweet two fucking lemons.
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on July 30, 2007
    http://naruto.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=544198949&chapter=1

    Chapter 20. Great story, great writing and such.
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  • From Saitochan on July 30, 2007
    Hahaha... oh man! This is such a fun story. I'm hoping you write a lot more chapters to it!! I'm also looking forward to the lemon between Ten-Ten and Naruto. Ohhh boy! Ten-Ten is the best!

    P.D: What were you thinking when you called Kakashi a 'responsible adult'? XD
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  • From UnlikelyLoveUnlimited on July 30, 2007
    This fic needs a tsunade/naruto chapter! pretty please?
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  • From Jin on July 30, 2007
    Thank you for doing the Naruto/Ayame pairing justice. The only way the lemon could have been better would be if there was a shower scene involved. I really love shower scenes.

    As for your question, you are actually the third person on this site to do a Naruto/Ayame fanfiction/lemon (at least to may knowledge). However, the other two aren't very good, especially when compared to yours, so you might not find them worth reading.

    Here are the links anyway:

    http://naruto.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=544198949&chapter=20

    http://naruto.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600091678&chapter=6

    The links are directly to the chapters where the lemons are located.
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  • From serenagold on July 30, 2007
    Yo, I just gotta say to Kuso13:

    Who cares if someone else did an Ayame/Naruto pairing before? That doesn't make this one any less original, nor does it make you any less of a jackass. It was damn good smut and you should appreciate it for what it is!
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  • From serenagold on July 30, 2007
    Ha ha, thats right! You take it like the kinky little slut you are, Ino!! Even your father knows what a whore you are! >:) Mwhahahahahaa!!


    Hehe, quite the delightful, entertaining little chapter. 0:) Keep up the good work! ^^
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