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Reviews for Seven Deadly Sins

By : BouncyBunny
  • From ANON - mel on July 07, 2007
    I love this story! Kakashi/Sakura is my favorite pairing and I think you're doing a great job with the dialogue and the plot. I look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From fangirlqueen on July 07, 2007
    noooo sakura come back its kakashi for heavens sakes!!!! is she stupid or something? i mean common KAKASHI!!!! the hottie of all hotties!!!!!!!!! >_< i wanna cry!
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  • From ANON - Amaretti on July 07, 2007
    This is going great! It's so hard to fine decent fics on this site and yours is one of the few that make visiting this place worthwhile. XD I love your characterisations and the idea of sin theme for each chapter. So we've had Lust and Envy and soon we'll have Pride. Then Wrath, Sloth, Greed, and Gluttony. I'm looking forward to seeing how you work those themes into this story! I imagine Gluttony will be a tough one (Kakashi, perhaps, comfort eating his woes away? XD)I'm loving it so far, but there's the occasionally slip in narrative where it goes from "I" to "Kakashi". Not a huge problem (I do it all the time in my 1st person narrative fics) but that's the only technical fault I can find if not the only fault, period. This is a very good quality story, please keep it up and make me the happiest girl in the internets! :3
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  • From ANON - MINA on July 07, 2007
    Oh that was good, great writing! please continue soon!
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  • From ANON - ninjakitty on July 06, 2007
    wow
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  • From ANON - Jessi on July 06, 2007
    I thought this was really well-written. A lot of the fanfics have all the sexual stuff without any good grammar or story. I like how you are giving a lot of build-up to what could happen, and character depth. Good job!
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  • From ANON - poornmiserable on July 03, 2007
    awesome awesome awesome update soon keep up the good work
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  • From Zelha on July 01, 2007
    Veeeery nice! Looking forward to the next installment! :3
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  • From ANON - DragonLady on July 01, 2007
    Wow. That's an excellent start! I can't wait to read more. =)
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 30, 2007
    This is good! Continue with it!!
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  • From ANON - Envy on June 30, 2007
    I can't wait for the next chapter your writing is so amazing. So who is Kakashi going to envy Naruto, Saskue, Sai...Genma?!?
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  • From sihayadib on June 30, 2007
    Great work! Thank you for the chapter, and I look forward to more. You do extremely well at drawing the reader in. =)
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  • From fangirlqueen on June 30, 2007
    i like the premise of this story but i was surprised it began with lust. It makes me wonder what the sin will be when they finally get it on
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