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Reviews for They Are Just the Cleaners

By : Raina
  • From ANON - Meep on September 29, 2007
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    let a tailor take care of your dresses! its the cloth that costs the most (normally, although the one who tailored my prom dress was the mother of an old friend of mine and neighbour so maybe I did get a slight discount...) and a professional will be able to come up with plenty of ideas you might not have even thought of!
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    Well, I dont know anything about you (maybe you're a tailor yourself or something), but... i liked the story and I was dissapointed with the fact that it only had 3 chapters seeing I want to read more so...
    well...
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    *Cry*
    its not often you see the characters being in character. normally in fics like these naruto finds sasuke absolutely gorgeous and doesnt care about sakura at all (for example) and small things like that can annoy anyone (even if they hpapen to love yaoi, yes, its just idiots who like when you jump into action head on without even regarding the characters normal thinking) ._.


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  • From lexjamandme on September 26, 2007
    I am loving this story so far. So original, so much potential. Can't wait for the next!
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  • From ANON - Renee on September 25, 2007
    Erm... please tell me you are continuing this.
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  • From Arcueido on July 14, 2007
    The story's really interesting. I like how you've managed to describe the details so well.

    So please continue updating. Looking forward to your next chapter :)
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  • From ANON - bishie-chan on July 11, 2007
    Ooh, intriguing! And the plot thickens! Please continue this wonderful fic!
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  • From ANON - Vivi & Venny on July 10, 2007
    Vivi: Yay! Naru-chan's not stupid~! I like him to be oblivous sometimes, but not flat out stupid all the time.

    Venny:.......

    Vivi:....Don't mind him, he's angry because there was no smut.......Or Sasuke.

    Venny:.........-glares-

    Vivi: But he likes it, too! He just wishes the yaoi would hurry up and come........No pun intended.

    Venny: -smiles- .......But it was still nicely written. I only caught one spelling error.

    Vivi: See? It isn't all about the yaoi. We like the story too!

    Venny:.....But that doesn't mean we don't want the yaoi.......I need the yaoi.

    Vivi: Ignore him. I can't wait for the next update!

    Ja ne~!

    ~Vivi & Venny
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  • From ANON - chineseartist on July 06, 2007
    alright, you got me. i'm intrigued and now i wanna know what the hell's gonna happen. can't wait to see the rest of this fic. good luck.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 05, 2007
    i agree with u all the way a stupid Naruto is so annoying
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  • From ANON - kai on July 04, 2007
    youve cought my interest,i like your use of blood and gore and avoidence.be waitin for the next chapters/continuations if you diside to(hope so)anyways good luck im ruting for ya!


    ~kai
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  • From ANON - Vivi & Venny on July 04, 2007
    Vivi: Wow, I was surprised by how many locks Sasuke had on that.

    Venny: Damn, I wouldn't have been surprised to have read that some sleeping gas went into the air when he removed the picture.

    Vivi: I know. But yea, poor Kanky-chan! 'm feel sorry for him. To die like that, by Sasu-kun no less!

    Venny: Ha, ha Sakura-bitch! You ain't gettin' nothin'! ITS ALL FOR NARU-CHAN BABY!

    Vivi: I laughed at her. Really truly I did. Any real woman.....or maybe just crazy people like me.....Would have went off on Sasu-chan. No matter how hot. She's a 25 year old, married, virgin. I'm so, so very surprised she hasn't cheated it. .....I would have. Or left him..... Something!

    Venny:.....I wouldn't have.....

    Vivi: O.O ......you lair.

    Venny: Yea. But really. That one girl. She cussed more in one sentence, than I do in ten.

    Vivi: But 'm like your story!!

    Venny: Yep. Can't wait for Naru-chan to come in!

    Vivi: ....wonder how that's going to happen....

    Venny: Eh. 'm too.

    Ja ne~,

    Vivi and Venny

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  • From yaoilover07 on July 01, 2007
    This is an interesting story can't wai to see where this is going.
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