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Reviews for They Are Just the Cleaners

By : Raina
  • From ANON - Aeryss on February 07, 2008
    Thanx! I like my name too! XD I totally feel you on the review thing, I know I should review more...

    I think this was appropriately titled. Wow Orochimaru is one sick motha! And that Makayla wants to get in his pants?! Ha! she doesn't know how lucky she was... Though, Sasuke's no angle either. I can't believe he cut that guy's fingers off! Yuck! I feel bad for him(Not Sasuke, Takahara) Dude, I'm so excited for the next chapter, Neighbors?!

    Peace,
    Aeryss
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  • From ANON - nlb on February 05, 2008
    Thanks for telling me about the new chapter. Since my favourite stories on affnet aren't updated too regularly, I'm not here too often. And I would have really hated to "miss" this update. ;-)
    You did a good job with the paragraphs, my eyes say a humble thanks.
    Poor Sasuke...why doesn't he just get a divorce? Because his wife is really, really annoying(and no, I have not pity with her, since it is so obvious he doesn't love her and she just wanted to marry him because he is beautiful, like an accessoir).
    I can't wait till Sasuke and Naruto meet.
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  • From spoon10488 on February 04, 2008
    I so excited to read more! Please update soon!
    =)
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  • From ANON - Pooh The Bird on February 04, 2008
    Oh my. xD
    Suigetsu and Sasuke.. :O
    (That's still not going to be the pairing right? xD )It was hot.
    Mmm. Interesting story.
    The long chapters are a great plus too! xD

    I love yaoi..
    Neji's gay too, right? RIGHT? xDD
    And just to make sure.. Is one of the pairings going to be SasuNaru?

    I would like to see more!
    Update soon again!
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  • From Imagy on February 02, 2008
    wheee~!
    another chapter up and about
    roaming around
    graceing the world with its beauty
    love it ^.^
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  • From Sabriel20 on January 26, 2008
    If you'd like I could beta it for you or just offer some advice, I'm pretty opinionated but nice. Although, I'll confess my grammar skills aren't the greatest, but I'm not terrible. Anyway, I really like your story, so if I can help in any way let me know. Since my email isn't shown its donahoecarrie@hotmail.com
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  • From Imagy on January 25, 2008
    P.S.
    To contact me, email me at fuzzy800@bellsouth.net
    'til then,
    c-yah~!
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  • From Imagy on January 25, 2008
    Hey darlin'~!
    No problems on my part, this story is totally worth waiting for ^.^
    but if you need an ideas person, I'm definately your go-to girl
    so, let me know if you need any help
    I'm more than willing to give it~!
    Hope you're well,
    Nikki
    ;D
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  • From lexjamandme on January 25, 2008
    Somehow I missed the last chapter... which was wonderful. Sasuke is just so sadistically brilliant in this. I have a terrible time keeping him that way in my own writing... I swear, he gets around Naruto and turns into a giant bowl of really sexy goo.
    That said, I'm sorry that life is getting out of control. I completely understand the sentiment. If you would like I would love to submit my 'application' as beta or even listen as you bounce your wonderful ideas around. Let me know.
    michele604@yahoo.com
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  • From spoon10488 on January 24, 2008
    Sorry to hear of your problems. I hope they mix themselves soon. Until then I'll wait for the next chapter.
    =)
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  • From ANON - Lison Faye on January 24, 2008
    I've been reading this again...... I really like your writing style and as I said earlier your work really intrigues me. I'd be willing to beta for you if you wish, however sometimes it might take me a day or two longer to get back to you. Well, if you decide you need my help, let me know at dreams2bdecided@gmail.com .
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  • From Tesp71283 on January 24, 2008
    Don't mind helping out, send me a message!
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  • From Imagy on January 06, 2008
    awesome!
    update, soon~!
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  • From ANON - Lison Faye on January 04, 2008
    Congradulations..... you have me intriuged by your plot. It is very rare for me to find a good thriller fanfic that I haven't already figured out what will happen by now. I like their code names. Most of them make sense to me, but I haven't seen much of the show. I found the precautions for Sasuke's safe to be humorous in a way, but at the same time extremely effective. I also like the character development that you have going so far, because most people assume that you know the characters right off the bat and dive in; and then there's people like me who are going now why did that character take that act again.

    To be honest though, I think it's kind of risky making Orochimaru Sakura's father, but it will be interesting to know where the story goes with that, and I have a feeling that you will make it all work out.

    However, it's stories like these that make my favorites list, because they are well written and thought out and they manage to hold my interest longer than my math problems. (Just so it's clear, I'm a math enthusist.) I am looking foward to your next chapter so post soon.
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  • From ANON - nlb on January 03, 2008
    I was all "yay a new chapter!" and then it turns out it was only the edited version...*sigh*
    Well, it didn't hurt to re-read your excellent writing ;-)
    I can't wait to read more, I really love this story.
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