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Reviews for They Are Just the Cleaners

By : Raina
  • From alleycat88 on April 15, 2008
    *squees* Im so excited! I cant wait for more!! Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - IvvyMoon on April 09, 2008
    Ah! It's all just too exciting! But how is Sasuke going to come to the good side? He seems so deep into the organization, that I can't see him getting off scot-free after the FBI raids everything. Hmmm.... I can't wait until the next update!
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  • From ANON - IvvyMoon on April 09, 2008
    Ah, I love a competent Naruto! It gets really old when Naruto is stupid or completely uke-ish, blushing and stuttering all the time. Hmm...am I ranting? *shrugs* Anyway, I don't know if you're NaruSasu or SasuNaru, but I'm so glad Naruto is being badass. Lurves you!
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  • From ANON - IvvyMoon on April 09, 2008
    Ah! It's so exciting already! I can't wait to read the next chapters. Put this on Y!gal now! Um, please?
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  • From Kimra on April 09, 2008
    Awesome, glad I read it and can't wait to read more. :D

    Hope it's happy in the end - though don't suspect it will be. Just give me good and I'll be happy. :D
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  • From ANON - Mewmew2 on April 08, 2008
    Interesting Plot you have developing here. I can't wait for your next update, this fic has caught my attention......
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  • From ANON - gryphonwills on April 08, 2008
    Nice!
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  • From lexjamandme on April 08, 2008
    I cannot tell you the extent of my giggles when I saw this was up and then getting to read it... um hum... again... was spectacular because this chapter is so damn intense and just WOW!!!
    Yay... you are BACK, baby!
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  • From ANON - kanaro on April 08, 2008
    Excellent story so far! You have a great plot, everyone stays in character and gah! I can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - Sero on February 19, 2008
    I love this story, please continue it. I just love this plot and will be hoping for update. Please please continue.
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  • From ANON - riddlestar on February 19, 2008
    wow! and i thought i had read everything worth reading on this site! i was hooked right from the first setence. XD the character development is brilliant..and im actually a little scared of sasuke! i think you've made him more formidable than in the manga.. im really looking fwd to the naruto-sasuke interactions..that should be very intersting..hehe. though how exactly you're going to get them together.. i have no clue.! which i like! yay!
    though there is one thing i would like to mention.. i found that your chapters have one too many LONG paragraphs.. especially when it comes to the format of this site.. it makes it very difficult to read. i found myself wanting to skim ( but i didnt :D) throo the para's because it required a tad too much of concentration. i think it would be an easier read it you broke down those long para's.
    other than that.. kudos for an amazing AU story. looking fwd to your next update~
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  • From ANON - Lison Faye on February 13, 2008
    *grins* Nice to know there is another author out there who likes math. (I've been doing Calculus since my sophmore year in high school.) I seriously thought for a while that all writers didn't like math.... or at least they don't like learning it, or writing about it; and then it reflects in their characters and stories..... Oh well, this paragraph is completely off topic.

    Now onto what I think of your current chapter:
    You are, as far as I can tell, keeping the characters in character to a tee. Man, I wish I could write in character as well as you do. I liked how you pulled out the extremes of the characters personatlities in this chapter. Like the cold, annoyed attitude Saske has with Sakura. "There is no other woman."..... Honestly I'm surprised that she hasn't figured it out, because she actually is a smart person; but, at the same time, I recognize that she is blind when it comes to Sasuke and is in complete denial about his sexuality.

    It was a little confusing when reading the whole Takahara mental-scenes/flash-back area, because I didn't intially get that that wasn't what was happening chronologically in the story..... It could've been indicated a bit better. However, once I understood that that was what happened, the light bulb went on,and remained on.

    Also, I really liked the ending to the phone conversation with Sakura.... The combination between Takahara and her made a really nice effect that I find amazing to read. It was obvious who was saying what, but at the same time, it was indifferentialable what they were saying, because it was the same thing except with different situations. Bravo.

    I already have a pretty good idea as to who the new neighbors, but other than that, I'm guessing as to where you're going to take this plot. Keep up the excellent work.
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  • From Ljiljana on February 08, 2008
    So exacting! I do feel sorry for Sakura, though.
    Great work, I like this story.
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  • From ANON - Lynn on February 07, 2008
    Hey! I can't believe it took me so long to check my email. I'm so sorry you are feeling so bad. :( *hugs u* Gah! I love such random parts, like the Haku part, I laughed so damn hard. Does that mean I'm mean? I also like the comparison of Makayla and a dog. Haha. Yea, I think I'm mean.

    Lynn

    Keep going!
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  • From ANON - Aeryss on February 07, 2008
    Oh yeah, my email is eryn1985@hotmail.com. Update me please :)
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