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Reviews for Paper Wings

By : scribblexdie
  • From serenagold on January 03, 2008
    Wow. This story is so different. I love the cryptic mythology that surrounds the Uchiha brothers and their cat servant Kakashi. Its very interesting. I wonder what exactly Naruto is, and why he has to endure his indentured servitude first, prior to receiving the answers to his questions. I can only assume its because he'll end up discovering his identity through these tasks and come to accept them, so that when the truth is revealed, it will actually make sense. Then again, agreeing blindly like that, he could be subjecting himself to YEARS of debt. Considering the mythological implications, that could mean centuries, rather than decades. O_O


    Of course, I could be looking to much into this. Heh. Keep up the good work with the story. I'm looking forward to its continuation. :)
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  • From Ihadadream on January 02, 2008
    Now i know what that story reminds me of: xxxholic! it's a really great manga! it's a really good idea to rewrite it with naruto characters! though i never would have imagined itachi in yuuko's shoes but, hey, he is great like that! And the copycat nin is really a cat, so great, i love this kakashi! I wonder why sasuke feels like naruto is bad omen and why itachi made him work for the shop? Is naruto someone like xxxholic's watanuki? I hope so! It's great to see the blond dobe in another role than the loudmouthed idiot! He seems so sad and empty! I hope itachi and sasuke find how to fix his problems... I hope it will be more sasunaru than itanaru but the 2 are good so please keep going!
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  • From Ihadadream on January 02, 2008
    Great start! This story is fantastic! you've created a mysterious atmosphere and itachi and sasuke perfectly fit in this place! Poor naruto, he always has to face hardships, hasn't he? I wonder what naruto want from the brothers?
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  • From ANON - animelover on January 01, 2008
    coool, yet creepy. kinda like twilight zone ... definitely piques the curiousity. if you do emails for updates, mine is above.

    looking forward to the next installment!
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  • From ANON - Ilene on June 30, 2007
    hmmm, was the killer (driver) Itachi? naaaaaaah, that can't be it. um, *scratches head thoughtfully*, ????? is that even important to the story? it's gonna bug me though...long black hair...Orochimaru? yeah! It's gotta be him! RIGHT? wrong?... update soon!
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  • From Anaheyla on June 29, 2007
    I am intrigued. Please continue.
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  • From ANON - DesperadoSweetie on June 28, 2007
    I like this. It is intriguing, a little confusing too but left me wanting to know more. I look forward to your next update.
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