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Reviews for The Power Offered

By : DarkSkyOmen
  • From ANON - Angel of Mint on January 24, 2008
    ohh~ thats nice. The writing and grammar were a little rough but the over all effect was lovely
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  • From serenagold on June 28, 2007
    hehe.. nice one. sasuke is such a whore for power.

    kyuubi and naruto make one hell of double team. I hope you continue with this.. and even if you don't, this would be and excellent oneshot. ^^
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  • From NinPao on June 28, 2007
    okay - i'm totally digging the plot-line. it's curious and creative. i would suggest a beta reader so that small things like grammar and punctuation do not detract from the story as they do now.

    if you do not have one yet, i'm fine with beta-ing for you until you find one.

    other than that - I like it so far and certainly hope you continue!


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  • From ANON - Ilene on June 28, 2007
    oh, i liked SOOOOOOOOOO much! What would it take for u to continue this? or if not continueing, at least making another story with the same pairing! *puppy dog eyes* pweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeze? O_O
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