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Reviews for I'm only Human

By : VRon8899
  • From ANON - Meza on December 06, 2008
    I think that part of the reason why you're not getting many reviews is because people are starting to get tired of scrolling left to right to read you story.

    What I would do is go through this story and your others, and make sure that you don't have more that 72 characters across your page. If you make a long line of __________________, that makes the reader have to scroll across. Even with the change you made to the underlining, when you put the story into wordpad or MS word (Which is what I have to do in order to even read this story) it works out to about THREE lines of _____ at times.

    I'm not trying to be mean or anything because even though I'm confused, I'm enjoying it, but I think you would increase your reviews and greatly increase this story's readability by fixing that horizontal scroll.

    Just use a simple divider like ~*~ or something that is small.
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  • From nyge98 on November 13, 2008
    I enjoyed the chapter. You have me sitting on the edge of my chair :) I can't wait till I know what will happen next and how it will end.
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  • From WolfWing on November 09, 2008
    Loving the story! Excellent rendering of how characters would act/react, especially the complicated personality of Sai. I can't wait to see how this story turns out!
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  • From serenagold on November 09, 2008
    Holy crap!! O_O This chapter is like just one huge set up for something crazy. I'm almost hesitant to look forward to the next chapter, lest my mind be blown by sheer ninja-heavy insanity!!

    lol =^^=

    Keep up the good work! If you find someone willing to flesh this thing out manga-style be sure to post the link. There's enough action in this to make it a worth while doujinshi. hehehe
    Until next time~! :D
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  • From ANON - Sa-Chan on November 06, 2008
    (I am lazy so this is the same review I left on Y, I am so happy for the return of this story and this new chapter!!!!)

    Madara is not exactly my favorite person and Zetsu is downright one of the creepiest beings in existence…what’s with him and eating people?

    I feel bad for Naruto, even though he hasn’t lost his identity even at six tails he has still lost part of himself, his soul. Naruto isn’t Naruto without it, Seiko needs to get back to him and fast.

    Hmm who is the girl? Someone who calls Jiraya sensei and who he now has to fight…Arghhh you are killing me with all these mysteries, I just want to read more and more and more (maybe that’s your whole point).

    Everyone is involved in fights at the moment and I have my heart in my throat for all of them, I don’t want anyone of our nins and their allies getting hurt… Most of all I’m worrying about Naruto, if the scales don’t tip in his favor fast I don’t know how much of Naruto will be left after the fight even if he survives.

    Thank you so much for an amazing chapter it was worth the wait…I can’t wait to read more though, you can’t keep leaving me hanging like this. Soon I won’t have any nerves left.

    Again thank you so much!

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  • From Aikotina on November 06, 2008
    they are most definately going to be needing that hospital; so i figured i should contribute. So, yeah, i'm a tad confused; is itachi a good guy or a bad guy? also, what happened to seiko(?) ((I forgot the clone's name. haha)) Will he be okay? I hope they save Naruto; i don't want him to merge with Kyuubi. Or die. (love how i put that second. >.
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  • From Telpei on October 26, 2008
    Yay, this story is up again! :D I'm happy.
    Man, I really hope Sasuke and co. get there on time to save Naruto! That idiot, going off like that to sacrifice himself. Bah. *smacks Naruto upside the head*
    I also hope Itachi doesn't get to him first! :( Will Sasuke encounter his brother? I'm anxious to see what happens! And what's going to happen now that Seiko is dead? Is he really dead? How will that affect Naruto and the bond? Ahh please update soon!
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  • From Telpei on October 05, 2008
    I'm glad to hear that you're on top of the problem! *Huggles for support* Keep trucking along, and I'll be here to check up on it whenever you update! :D I love this story! (ps, you can email me if you want, or I have YIM - setoassassinplushie_tm@yahoo.ca ) Good luck!
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  • From Telpei on October 05, 2008
    Story is hidden? Why?? :( *pouts* But I want to read it... Can you fix this please???
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  • From nyge98 on September 09, 2008
    I just finished reading your two new chapters. I can feel that everything is coming to a head. I feel that things will be happening soon. I'm really excited. I can't wait.
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  • From dragoness615 on September 04, 2008
    ooh! Cliffie, cliffie, cliffie! o.O! You naughty girl! That's a biggin' too. How are they gonna get out of it *whimpers*... 'o.o? *looks around at the others for answers* anybody? hello? -_- I gets no love. lol. Anyway, keep it up, the suspense is killing me! I'm hooked! *sticks a hook in her mouth* see? ow ._., I'm stuck... Help?
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 04, 2008
    I love your story. I think that it is great how you can take them out of character but keep them in it at the same exact time. (I hope that made sense for you) Your writing style keeps me from getting bored and using the back button.
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  • From serenagold on September 04, 2008
    These chapters are getting pretty crazy. Plus, and I must say I am impressed, you started this story how long ago was it? You seem to be incorporating the newest manga chapters into the story with ease. That's freaking awesome. ^^


    Anyway, I'm glad you enjoy my reviews. I enjoy your chapters so I'd say its a fair trade. ;) heh.
    Keep up the great work. ^^
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  • From ANON - Sa-Chan on September 04, 2008
    Dear sweetie, what are you doing to my mental health? Juast when I thought that I had started to recover you spring this on me.... Don't get me wrong though, I absolutely love every single word I read. I just get frustrated that no one ever gets to Naruto...

    And what is this about Seiko.....? Seiko can't die now, his Naruto's soul, he needs to find Naruto and merger so that Naru can push Kyuubi back. I'm so emotionally invested in this story that I actually get out of breath when the characters are running...Is that good or bad hmm?

    Thank you for a wonderful chapter! I loved the arrival of Jiraya at the end...Just don't let him end up like in the manga. Again thank you and I'm already looking forward to the next chapter! Now I'm going to calm down and grab myself a soda...You always get my adrenaline pumping with your chapters...
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  • From Kohakusan on September 04, 2008
    Ohhh, nice fight scene. Kisame is a bastard in this but I guess its for a good reason. SO they know about Madara, grr I hate him oh so much...Anyhow I sure hope to read more soon. ^_^ Have some cookies! *hands you a plate of chocolate chip cookies*
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