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Reviews for Children of Darkness

By : Luma
  • From NarutoVixin on September 10, 2009
    maleing list please vixin1027@yahoo.com

    i love this no one has done that well with a broken naruto before good luck on the writing and i will be waiting for updates when they come
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  • From xtabluarasa on July 12, 2009
    -grovels at your feet-
    Gosh, I love your story.
    I've nearly cried at so many parts.
    You're a wonderful author, and I hope you get the chance to update soon.


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  • From goodchaos on July 12, 2009
    Good Luck!! I can't wait for your rewritten story!!
    This is actually my first time reading it & when I got to the end... Well, I wished I started at the end..
    But How was I suposed to know you were gonna rewrite it. oh well.. I'll still be looking forward to it! ^_^

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  • From ANON - dustin on August 23, 2008
    UPDATE! PLEASE! IF YOU DON'T I'LL DIE! LOL. NOT REALLY, BUT SERIOUSLY. HURRY, PLEASE! YOURE AN AWESOME AUTHOR AND I THINK YOU WOULD BE A GREAT PROFESSIONAL! I HOPE YOU NEVER LET FLAMERS DISCOURAGE YOU AND TELL YOU OTHERWISE. IF THEY DO, ILL LEND YOU MY CHICAGO TYPWRITER.(A MACHINE GUN OFF OF RESIDENT EVIL 4.) I LOOK FORWARD TO YOUR FUTER CHAPTERS! -LAUGHS EVILY- MAKE SASUKES TORMENT GOOD. I THINK HE DESERVES IT,BAD.
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  • From ANON - dustin on August 23, 2008
    UPDATE! PLEASE! IF YOU DON'T I'LL DIE! LOL. NOT REALLY, BUT SERIOUSLY. HURRY, PLEASE! YOURE AN AWESOME AUTHOR AND I THINK YOU WOULD BE A GREAT PROFESSIONAL! I HOPE YOU NEVER LET FLAMERS DISCOURAGE YOU AND TELL YOU OTHERWISE. IF THEY DO, ILL LEND YOU MY CHICAGO TYPWRITER.(A MACHINE GUN OFF OF RESIDENT EVIL 4.) I LOOK FORWARD TO YOUR FUTER CHAPTERS! -LAUGHS EVILY- MAKE SASUKES TORMENT GOOD. I THINK HE DESERVES IT,BAD.
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  • From ANON - animelover on July 26, 2008
    now it gets interesting ... hmmm, what will sasuke do i wonder to win naru over again. i'm not good at reviews, 'cause i can usually not find any to complain about. ;-) i just gush. lol!

    well, see ya next update!
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  • From ANON - Melar on July 25, 2008
    I just started readiing this story today and you've blown me away. I love that you have any progress that Naruto is making is slow- it makes the story more real and for me it makes me get into the story and love it even more.

    I have two questions: #1 Who was delivering the gifts from Sasuke to Naruto? and #2 What were the third and forth gifts (was it more flowers, some stuffed animals, a bowl of ramen with uchiwa shaped narutos?)

    You've got me hooked on this story and I can't wait to see how you continue this!
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  • From ANON - animelover on July 02, 2008
    whoa, this is pretty cool ... sad, but cool! i can't wait for the part where naruto opens up to his friends and relies on them but am scared about what'll happen with sasuke. hmmm ...
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  • From nm1716 on April 21, 2008
    PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY SOON, i CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT.
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  • From jtwsnw20 on April 16, 2008
    u have to update...i really enjoy the fanfic... tell itachi hi for me *drools* he is so sexy... anywho... sasuke need to hurry up and do something. !!!!!!!!!!!!! i hope ur haveing a great day and week...
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  • From SuChAbAKa on April 13, 2008
    Ahh okay! I am finding I am a fan of your writing! More so than just the first story I reviewed! Again, please put me on the mailing list :3

    bbethard@yahoo.com n.n
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  • From TeaniaZazzuullii on November 13, 2007
    Okay...well first I have to say that this is not exactly my cup of tea...I honesty think this story is kinda boring, what with all the thoughts and the skipping days and your not really describing what Taro or Yukikto(sp?) looks like, nor the rest of them, it's kinda annoying but i do like the idea. I just think it would be better if written a different way...

    now don't take that the wrong way!! I like this story alot and I want to know more. I want to see how Naruto's walls start to crumble and fall, I want to see Sasuke be all corny and romantic and stuff and I want to see Taro and Sasuke start to like each other. I think it'd be great and i'm eagerly awaiting more, so please keep writing and don't think of the earlier statement as a flame, it's not, it's just what I honesly think...I really do like this story and can't wait to see what happens next, and just for her sake I like Yukiko(am i spelling it wrong? I can't tell) she's pretty cool and i hope she comes back eventually, she's kinda nice, but I'm not sure what she looks like exactly so when she does can you explain it more? just for me? cause it's kinda hard to figure it out.

    anyways thats my review take it or leave it!
    keep writing can't wait for the next update!
    -teania
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  • From nm1716 on October 28, 2007
    PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I hate seeing sad Naruto. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From Spindy on October 26, 2007
    Loved your fic- hope you update!!
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  • From LadyWolf on October 04, 2007
    sorry for not commenting after every chapter but I get so wrapped up in reading I don't want to stop......

    OK,,,, This is some good stuff!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    I really enjoyed reading this. Hope you post another chapter soon!
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