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Reviews for Children of Darkness

By : Luma
  • From nawatia on October 03, 2007
    Is that light I see at the end of the tunnel? I just might be...a glimmer, a firefly, a lit match...hey, I just thought of something - what if Naruto's son was in danger - would that snap him out of his non-responsiveness?
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  • From ANON - Damp on September 12, 2007
    But I love you, Uzumaki Naruto. And if it takes my entire life to do it, I'll prove to you that I will do whatever it takes to be with you. Even if I have to write messages like these to you every single day, I'll do it. I'll do anything for you.'

    That reminded me of the movie 'Mr. Deeds' SO MUCH!! You know, the scene where after they prove that the servent is the real heir, and then Adam Sandler goes off somewhere and the girl chases him. . . That part was to lovely. If only it could happen in real life more often.

    -Damp *Man, that sounded so corny.*
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  • From noezel7 on July 30, 2007
    I totally understand the whole writers block thing. I went for a month without posting a knew chapter!! Oh well, there's really nothing you can do about it, huh? I really enjoyed the parts with Iruka and Naruto. It's nice to see Naruto open up to someone other than Yukiko and Taro. Oh, I actually like Yukiko. She's a strong female that is rare in the Naruto series. I know that Sakura has gotten stronger in the anime/manga, I still think she is still weak in personality. I'll be sad when Yukiko goes away!! I'm sure Sasuke will figure out something to win back his dobe!! I'll be waiting for the next chapter, no matter how long it takes!!
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  • From on July 27, 2007
    hehe. i like this story. its awesome. i actually dont mind yukiko either. she pretty cool. and taro, hes so cute. anyway. love the strory. update soon please.
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  • From Rosebud on July 16, 2007
    Good chapter, update soon ne!!!!
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  • From noezel7 on July 10, 2007
    Sasuke, Sasuke, Sasuke... You better had make up for what you done now that Taro trusts you, somewhat. You're doing a good job!! I can't wait till Naruto finally talks and what's up with Yukiko and Itachi? Anway, keep up the good work and I'll keep on reading and reveiewing!!!
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  • From ANON - Saki on July 10, 2007
    I really love the story so far, but there are a few confusing words in the story itself."Otokasan" is one of them since in japanese, it either means "tail and family property," "Cord and Department," and "It doesn't melt" in my language. ^^; I just wonder if you mean "Okaasan" which means mother. I really would love to read more of this as soon as it's updated but there are a few errors in it. I hope it helps out.^_^
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  • From ANON - Damp on July 02, 2007
    Aww!! Taro´s reaction made me cry a little!! I didn´t think he´d retalite, nor did I think that he even knew who his dad was!! But still, I hope Naruto and Sasuke recover enough to keep on living and get hitched with each other XDD.

    -Damp *What was that Itachi was that made him react like that, I wonder??*
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  • From Rosebud on July 02, 2007
    good chapter! ^^
    Update soon!
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  • From Anaheyla on July 02, 2007
    Hmm.....I like your story. Not crazy about this Yukiko chick though.

    Also my Japanese is terrible so I'm probly wrong, but Taiyogakure is Hidden Sun Village or whatever....right?
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  • From ANON - anonymous on July 02, 2007
    ah, poor naru (and taro, i suppose). bastard's getting what he deserves for being an asshole. he's gonna have to walk over burning coals and broken glass. well, let's see what he tries next.
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  • From ANON - Damp on June 30, 2007
    Hey! I just loved the little butterfly idea ^^ So cute! PLEASE UPDATE!!!

    -Damp *And it got me all confused about love and such o.o*
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  • From Rosebud on June 29, 2007
    Good chapter. I can't wait to see what happens when Sasuke tries to talk with Naruto and his son. Please update soon.^^
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  • From bluegenjutsu on June 27, 2007
    I'm really interested in seeing how this story goes. Great first chapter! The kid sounds cute too! :)
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  • From Rosebud on June 27, 2007
    Well... this is really interesting!
    I like it a lot.
    But poor Naruto, I feel bad for him.
    I hope you update soon, cause I'd realy like to see what happens next.
    Take care. ^^
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