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By : KageKitsuneXXX
  • From hpn827 on October 07, 2007
    I had to stop reading for a minute to review. That part about Gaara sounding like Yoda was hilarious. I've never laughed so hard. I can totally picture it.
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  • From ANON - Nova on October 03, 2007
    Do not ever, ever make a joke like this again! So, I understand Naruto-kun wholly, and I know (do I?) that Uchihas can bring down anyone, even a psycho sandman. But 'do you still have immunity'? He isn't really going to ask something like that...Oh God he is! Sasuke-kun really needs to connect his brain to his mouth before speaking, even during...well, that. Itachi is too right, his little brother is indeed foolish...
    Ok, now my panicked babbling is off, so I just add that I love your wonderful work and update asap, please (puppy eyes)?
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  • From WhiteNightmare66 on October 02, 2007
    A few things to start off. One - I love Barenaked Ladies' "One Week" I absolutely love the little song twist. Two - Sasuke kicked out of somewhere? Kudos! Oh how his pride must be hurting. Three - What's the name of the song by Bloodhound Gang? And finally Four - Dominatrix Hinata?! Damn! When I read that line and safety word, my gut spilt. I'm currently scooping up my entrails. Damn! I could not stop laughing. And Kiba magically appears from nowhere with a love confession. Gotta be one of the funniest moments in this fic! Mondo, mondo, uber awesome job!
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  • From ANON - Kitsune13 on September 28, 2007
    that was such a great story!! i loved it please post the next chapter soon. :)
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  • From ANON - Suzanne aka lividangel on September 24, 2007
    ok soooo...I'm picking up pizza and what should come on the pizzaria's radio but
    BARENAKEDLADIES!!! ONEWEEK!!! and all I can picture is a naruto (in a lab coat)and then sasuke jerking off.
    o_0

    heh!

    PS - by the way, I have never felt so bad for a sasuke in a story, keep up the great work because boy can
    you make me laugh!:)

    suzanne
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  • From ANON - Styles07 on September 19, 2007
    You know you are a great writer when you turn Gaara into the funniest character of the bunch. Not to mention I`ll never be able to here a few certain songs (most notably "One Week") without dirty thoughts running thru my head. Keep up the great work :D
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  • From ANON - erutufon on September 18, 2007
    omg. Please write more! D: Its so good and yet so hilarious at the same exact time. :) update soon plox. *thumbs up*
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  • From Reyn on September 18, 2007
    It's usually a cold day in hell when I leave a review, but I really couldn't resist after reading these lines:

    “I wouldn’t say you slept; it was more like you slipped into a coma. You’ve been asleep for fourteen hours. I was afraid you had chosen my house to die… or hibernate.”

    “Oh… well… I guess that’s different then.” Naruto slurped his noodles, as he appeared to mull things over. “What am I doing?! I don’t want you to kill him!”


    “For the love of mercy and decency, man! Are you insane?! What are you, some kind of serial killer? My kids are pissing their beds in terror over here! Shut up, before I call the police!” Gaara, as anyone would be, was very sensitive at this point. Hence, he was affronted by the lack of appreciation for his heartfelt and artistic confession.

    “You have no taste, and for that you will die! Tell me your name! I am adding you to my list!”

    Gaara wasn’t joking, he did have a list. From the original he had then, only one name is still present on the list he has now. But it is only a matter of time before he gets that singing, dancing, purple freak of a dinosaur. Yeah, you know who you are... … … Barney. (1)

    These lines had me cracking up for a good five-ish minutes XD

    And then there's this line...I don't really know why I like it...“Kankuro has pointed that out to me. I can’t help it.”

    And I think my mouth just fell open in shock as you had Shikamaru break out into song.

    The line up of patients was great, but Sakura's with the penis-problem man just totally took the cake.
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  • From ANON - Lindsey on September 14, 2007
    OMG! NO, no, no, no, no!
    SASUKE MUST EVENTUALLY REALIZE HIS MISTAKE, YES? AND FIX IT?
    Holy shit, I'm actually shouting at my computer.
    I was like NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
    and then I realized you hadn't updated past that chapter and almost dropped my laptop.
    My reading mind is curling into itself and rocking back and forth, muttering, "No, Sasuke, no...."
    Please update soon. If only to save my poor, poor mind.
    Love this!
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  • From LadyWolf on September 13, 2007
    First off, I hope everything is ok after the hurricane. I hope everyone made it through, everyone will be in my thoughts....


    Now the fic....This is one of my favorites. I have this one added to my favorites list and I check back to see if you've updated...so can't wait to read the next one...

    Sasuke is gonna have a lot of crap to think about since 'little Sasuke' screwed up!!!!!! Love is a hell of a thing!!!!
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  • From kaesaku on September 13, 2007
    ooh, angsty~
    well, if i were in sasuke's place, i would have made the same mistake..
    couldn't concentrate much on word & logical thinking in that predicament..
    hehehehe..
    write soon! :)
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  • From ANON - Shishio_Not_Logged_In on September 12, 2007
    xD Oh my God, your stories are always hilarious! I mean, your portrayal of a drunk Gaara, priceless! -Poor neighbor kids- Also, Gaara telling Naruto how he was going to 'painlessly' kill Sasuke, and then saying that he had diplomatic immunity! And at the end of chapter 10, where Naruto was leaving with Gaara and asking if he still had diplomatic immunity! -Busts out laughing-

    ~Fire
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  • From ANON - Shishio_Not_Logged_In on September 12, 2007
    xD Oh my God, your stories are always hilarious! I mean, your portrayal of a drunk Gaara, priceless! -Poor neighbor kids- Also, Gaara telling Naruto how he was going to 'painlessly' kill Sasuke, and then saying that he had diplomatic immunity! And at the end of chapter 10, where Naruto was leaving with Gaara and asking if he still had diplomatic immunity! -Busts out laughing-

    ~Fire
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  • From ANON - Aice on September 12, 2007
    OMG.... where did you get all those ideas???
    The 2nd virgin birth. Those are really hilarious.

    To Sasuke: Don't give up yet.
    To Naruto: Come on...give Sasuke a chance.

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  • From ANON - Nami on September 12, 2007
    I really don't know whether to laugh at Sasuke or say 'aw'. I'll do both at once and I think that will well encompass my feelings for him (humor, joy, sympathy, and other). Awwwwwww XD;... You're so stupid with contact, Sasuke. And poor Naruto not knowing. Geez, I can't wait for the explanation, 'sorry, I get a little retarded when you touch me D:'. ....d'aww. Angst though. XD I'm gonna re-read the little extra to cheer myself up (hurray for Naruto who knows Sasuke has the IQ of a pet rock!)
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