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Reviews for Role Play

By : KageKitsuneXXX
  • From ringpop on January 29, 2008
    Baaaaahahahahhahahaha!!!!!! 'Marinating in his own juices.' AAAAAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHA!!!!!!!

    Kage....this ending was SUPERB!!! I'm so satisfied!!! I think out of all the fics i've read i was most satisfied with your ending. It was cute, sexy, witty & oh so loving : ] I really hope to get a sequel from you on this one.....when you have time! THAT'S BE AWESOME!

    Hahahahahah "That'll do Sasuke, That'll do." HAHAHAHAHAH okay BABE!!!! hahahaha fabulous job dear FABULOUS!

    I'm so surprised this fic isn't OVERFLOWING with hits & reviews This is a real asset to AFF.net....really.
    You have a wonderful writing ability/skill
    Thanks for using your time to entertain us! Because....certainly......i was entertained
    ♥!
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  • From ANON - Kelly on January 29, 2008
    Aww, it's been a long while since I liked a story enough here to review it, but this one took my breath away! XD I don't think I've ever read a more amusing (yet hot and sexy) smut scene like that, and I'm totally thrilled that I did. **glomp** Looking forward to your one-shots if you make them^________^
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  • From ANON - rae on January 29, 2008
    that was great. sas is so funny. About your idea, not a series i think, but sidestories would be great like the one you did earlier

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  • From Anaheyla on January 29, 2008
    A:NARUTO FINALLY ADMITTED IT!!! Gaw! Also yay!
    B:YAY Naru/Sasu smex!
    C:Hilarity inherent in the awesomeness of the story
    D:Hilarity in Sasuke's brain melting into nothing after an orgasm.

    :)
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  • From ladywolfTerri on January 29, 2008
    This last chapter was well worth the wait!!! It busted me up while being smexy at the same time!! Wonderful job!!

    I vote for the future stories!! please let me know when they come out!

    ladywolf_5@yahoo.com
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  • From charmpit on January 29, 2008
    Super-hot lemons. Naruto owns Sasuke. Naruto has mad fangirls and fanboys. As it should be. The world makes sense again.

    This was enjoyable.
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  • From ANON - beautifullove348 on January 28, 2008
    "This is real life! Not a TV. show, not a tacky romance novel, and certainly not some yaoi fanfiction with over-the-top characterizations and a forcedly humorous plot, by some rabid sex-crazed fangirl with an idealized view of gay men; written for other rabid sex-crazed fangirls and boys, with idealized views of gay men! In real life, Sasuke, you do stuff like that when I have time-off!!" Sasuke remained silent, afraid to say anything lest Naruto gave him another tongue-lashing."

    Priceless. Absolutely priceless.

    This story was just one hilarity after the other. I loved it, absolutely loved it. It made me laugh so much. And the sex...

    Well that was just downright HOTT.

    Your writing style was so eloquent and perfect and you really got me into the story and feeling the emotions of the characters. I can honestly say this was one of the best stories of Naruto on AFF.net. Everything was just amazing.

    Congratulations on finishing the story, and I can't wait to read your one-shots :) And also to hear more about Manservante! :P
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  • From ANON - Charlotte on January 28, 2008
    By the way thanks for making Sasuke uke.
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  • From ANON - Charlotte on January 28, 2008
    That's the weirdest sex scene I've ever read. I was laughing so hard. Is that even right? It was really awesome thought. Thanks for the update. I've been waiting for that for so long.
    I'm happy but sad at the same time because one of my favorite fic is at an end. (sniff)
    Thanks.
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  • From Sayuri on January 28, 2008
    Awesome! So glad you finished it. I found the last chapter to be more humorous than hot, but it was still hot nonetheless, especially the sex against the washing machine. But it was funny how you made Sasuke ignorant about preparation, his cottage cheese brain, all the random drifting into his own world, and attacking Naruto/trying to get away.

    I'd really love it if you made continuations for this fic because I really enjoyed it. If so then let me know: s4r4_88@yahoo.com.au
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  • From ANON - Word_Slave on January 28, 2008
    I loved this story and am so glad you updated!! Thanks. And whose going to say no to more Naru/Sasu??? not me.... please!
    Slave
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  • From Allys on January 28, 2008
    Holy Crap! What kind of stupid question is that? Have one of the funniest and greatest stories ever just end o.0 Or have it pop back up uexpectedly every now and again... Hmmm... Let me think o_o (can you feel the sarcasm?) Of course I want More!!! This was fucking hilarious. Only you could make a stop and start sex scene, where the idiots involved keep arguing Sexy as all hell XD. *Glomps u* No honestly that was awesome. You have no idea, LOL, well maybe you have some idea, but to make it clearer - Right now my throat hurts from laughing so much. Seriously I'm going in search of saltprunes as soon as I'm done writing this. And Gods we got not one smex scene but 2. And Fucking Sasuke is so adorable when he's mush. LOL, you said that after having sex once rendered Naruto immune, *snicker* and all I could think was - Dude, you were Mush. You will never be taken seriously again, LOL. I loved this. A fantastic and fitting end to a fabulous story XD. Gods and this was so not forgotten XD. It actually ran through my mind earlier today, I was trying to remember Shika's lawn mower song *snicker* XD. You and your awesomeness. Thank you so much honey *Squishuggles* ♥ Oh and my email is mizrubble22@yahoo.com ;).
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  • From MidnightsKeeper on January 28, 2008
    i'm all for more role-play stories. this was hot and hilarious, which i love.
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  • From on January 28, 2008
    Ahhhhhh.....see what happens when I go away for the weekend; I am rewarded with the last chapter. God I was seriously beginning to worry a bit; it was rather depressing. I was going to wait until later to read but I couldn't help myself (I may have caused a bit of internal injury trying to contain my laughter to a dull roar with my fam in the room). I seriously can't quote a favorite line in this fic with the constant hilarity running rampent through out (although I think the line "Sasuke was a hundred percent, uncut, Japanese drama" comes to mind). I am extremely happy with how you chose to end the last chapter and not make the lemon go perfect and smooth; it wouldn't have went with this fic at all. Yeah I know a long review but hell I owe you one because I have read all your fics and I know my reviews are lacking (you are a review monster that I don't mind feeding). Hmmm...you asked if you should make this into a series; lets see thats a tough decision. Yeah right, of course you should do it. Oh the madness that would insue. But if for some reason you don't then I look forward to reading more madness from you. I'll make you a deal; I'll feed your review monster if you feed my inner bastard with your humor. Keep up with the fantastic writing.

    ~cai~
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  • From ANON - Nami on January 28, 2008
    Sasuke XDDDD! Sasuke!!! *giggles fits* When the fic wasn't being all hot, it was busy making me die of laughter. Sasuke is like a robot, man XD. Sex and then everything just shuts down. He's so cute! And Naruto wins all kinds of awesome awards because Sasuke is a prissy lil' thing XD. And completely insane. Their relationship will never be normal. NEVER XD *loves*
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