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By : KageKitsuneXXX
  • From SasUke28 on July 14, 2007
    OMG NARUTO IZ A PUZZY Y CAN'T HE ACCEPT HIZ LORV FROM SASUKE!"??????and update soon!
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  • From vanessaclarke on July 14, 2007
    This fic is shit hot! It's got a little of everything and a 'little more' of the best things. XP I love Naruto's character (he makes a kick-ass doctor) and Sasuke's awesome too. His ooc-ness is all inward which makes it perfectly reasonable. You've got the humor, the angst, the sexiness and the fluff all nicely packaged for me. Dominatrix-Hinata was AWESOME, as was kindergarten-Naruto. LOL I loved every bit of this and I don't have one single negative comment. Even the spelling and grammar was problem free. (sigh) Just give me a moment of silent worship here..... Ok, I'm done now. But seriously that's some truly good writing. Thanks for sharing it! (hugs)

    Later
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  • From serenagold on July 14, 2007
    Wow, I love this story. Its so silly and sweet at the same time.

    Also, I absolutely loved how you named Sasuke's care 'The Paradox.' Is that a refrence to something? Cause that is simply brilliant.
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  • From ANON - beautifullove348 on July 14, 2007
    Wow!! Definitely an amazing story! You are seriously a talented writer. I love your writing style and prowess and how you present and develope the Naruto characters. The story was neither taken to fast or too slow, and the way you progressed and made the story develope was ingenious!! I love it, love it, love it, love it!! This story is definitely one of my favs. The smexyness was really done well too ;P PLease update soon!
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  • From nekoleopard on July 14, 2007
    this fic is so good but please i'm begging u put a god damned lemon in i'm dying please
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  • From antilogicgirl on July 14, 2007
    Don't be sorry. It was a great chapter, even though you made me cry AGAIN! This just makes me hope for them even more, though. I'm not going to urge for updates. Get the next chapter perfect before you post. That's the only way you won't feel like it's not right. Gah. If I had any Sasuke or Naruto plushies, I'd be squeezing the life out of them right now. They're way too adorable, and even the angst is great. I
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  • From antilogicgirl on July 14, 2007
    I think I hate and love you at the same time. Chapter six made me cry FOUR times. I'm going to read the seventh one, so you'll be getting another review for that one, but I hope that it's at least as good as this one. *hugs you then smacks you* It was good. No worries of real hate...

    a/j
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  • From ANON - Adi on July 14, 2007
    lol you know this time I was thinking "If she makes it makes it all a dream I'm gonna hunt her down and show her what butt secks is" O_O! XD

    IT WAS SO FREAKING GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD

    Of course when I found out that Naruto already knew, I then wanted to kill him and show him what butt secks is too

    The kiddy flashbacks were so cute, so freaking adorable, images of lil Naru and Sasu made me go all "AWWWW!" Damn you! *shakes fist*

    Don't you even think about ending this fic, EVER. I fully expect it go on for at least 60 chapters XD hey wait! Where you going? Stop running!

    *dead* *cough* just went back to reread the smut scene, phew, that was pretty fucking hot, seriously, yeah, make them do it again!

    I love the Sakura moments, I'm glad you don't bash her in this fic, and her yaoi fangirl moment :D XD

    XX
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  • From MidnightsKeeper on July 14, 2007
    don't make us wait weeks please! for something that was supposed to be a oneshot, this turned into a pretty damned good story. and that was a god-awful place to end it. evil really. and making us wait too long for the follow up is even eviler (if that's even a word). ;)
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  • From Allys on July 14, 2007
    Silly silly author XD. This isn't depressing at all, this is fantastic, it means the story goes on XD. And yes the grope session compensates, not to mention finding out the Naruto knew all along was the perfect twist. Cause I mean really, after that stunt in the beginning he would have had to be a complete idiot not to know. You did soooo GOOD!!!!!!!!! LOL, XD. I love that Arashi was Naruto, graciously SUPER-SIZED XD!! And that Sasuke was in love in Kindergarten, And that Sakura is a closet yaoi fangirl, and the whole tiny section about happy endings :waggles eyebrows: XD, LOL, Oh who am I kidding I loved it all XD. :glomps you: Thanks so much for the update, Ja.
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  • From Chria on July 14, 2007
    It was awsome! Don't worry about it. Thanks for the quick update too. :D
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  • From ANON - Xenobia on July 14, 2007
    OMG!!! This story is ab-fab! I loved the progression, the plot and even the angst! This has turned out to be an awesome story. Please continue...there has to be a resolution to the tension.

    Xenobia
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  • From ANON - Taylor on July 13, 2007
    Wow. Poor Naruto. Both of his parents went...just like that, in a very very possible way. Naruuuto. You DO realize that if you dont figure out that you lurve Sasuke, he could be gone just as quick. It's better to have loved and lost, than to have never loved at all...I supposed at least.
    Awesome job on the fic. I can't wait to read the next chapter. :3

    twistedneko@yahoo.com
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  • From ANON - Luna_Meow on July 13, 2007
    I was introduced to this story by an IRC friend, and it's really a nice story! I like how you keep everyone in character, suppressing Sasuke's feelings over Naruto, and when Sasuke eventually confessed... Angst chapters go angsty, funny ones are hilarious.... Okay, I just can't describe. Whatever.

    Please keep it up! (That's what I really want to say *laughs*)
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  • From Anaheyla on July 13, 2007
    *sniff* Poor Naruto. :(

    Ok now that the angst is out of the way we'll get straight to the shagging right?
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