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From ANON - Rainwater on February 07, 2014
I loved this story from start to finish. Truly memorable, thank you so much for sharing. This was completely hot and hilarious!!!!
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From ANON - Ash on March 02, 2010
The neurotic in me couldn't stand the capitilized spelling error hehe...(STORIES NOT STORIED) =P I just get so excited when I read your work!!!!! "Touche button, touche"

Enough said.

Oh shoot, I lied.

I must tell you that I have docked my boat at your SasuNaruSasu landing of yummy goodness and I intend to stay for the long haul!!!!!

HIP HIP HOORAY!!!!!!!!!!

;p
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From ANON - Ash on March 02, 2010
YES YES A THOUSAND TIMES YES!!!! In the words of your psycho fan stalker a 100 STORIED WOULD STILL BE TOO LITTLE!!!!!!! I don't think I have ever laughed so hard while reading a Narusasu fic....you are my absolute favorite author in this genre and I will be watching out for any new fics religiously!!! THANK YOU GOD!!!!!! The fangirls of the world finally have a reason to continue prowling the internet in search of sexy smutty funny exciting W-W-WONDERFUL NARUSASU!!!!!!!!! *Fangirl cries tears of joys that would rival Lee and Gai!!!!!!!*
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From ANON - anon on February 14, 2010
forgot to say fave line: it relocated.
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From ANON - anon on February 14, 2010
I simply adore this story. It's my second time reading it, because it's the bomb, it's the divine nectar. In fact it was (I think) this story that originally made me take fanfiction seriously.

You are a genius of humor. It flows off your fingers like water, with perfect timing, rhythm and grace; and almost makes me wet my pants. I hardly ever laugh out loud while reading, but you make me: it's partly regular old laughing, about funnyness, but it's also awe-filled laughing at the sheer brilliance of it all. And yes, I loved the lemon (that almost made me wet my pants too), along with all your other fruits and nuts. How utterly perfect that it was just a dream! Sasuke sure has good dreams, for being such a pill. I'd wish I had dreams like that; but of course, I have your writing.

Is there anything we can do to keep you inspired, so I'll have MORE of your writing??? I'll leap off Japan's highest skyscraper... (by writing I mean naruto. It has to be naruto. Has to be narusasunaru, sasunarusasu, whatever. For me no other fanfiction exists. I'm kinda narrow that way, but...well, it's just that naruto is so... so... everything.)

You are my dreamboat!
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From Kerrisa on January 22, 2010
Chp 8

THATS what it was!! It tickled me that Sasuke pounced on his phone when it was the doorbell that was ringing! xD I'm really feeling sorry for Sasuke, here he's getting what's he's dreamed about for Years, and Twice now it end horribly wrong )= Gotta love the guy for not outright throttling the blonde for manipulating his hormones and body!

"Ah touch� button, touch�" xD Lol Epic battles between Sasuke and buttons. Nice xD

I really liked "the talk" in which Naruto pointed out a lot of facts, and Sasuke sputtered indignantly! So mean of Naruto to just turn the other cheek and be such a great pretender (wait.. wasn't that a show?) OH! another thing i loved, the movie quotes and unintentional Kiba quote xD

Also loved how Naruto told Sasuke to stop molesting him when in both heated scenes he was definitely the one doing all the molesting xD Sasuke was right for calling him a hypocrite! Too bad his pants didn't seem to care...

I really really enjoy your writing style (which should be apparent by now) and I like reviewing your chapters,but I feel weird to be reviewing so much and wondering if you're not tired yet of getting these so often X_X If you care to let me know my email address is ruri_kawaii_kitsune @ yahoo .comm XOXOXs Kei-Chan
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From Kerrisa on January 21, 2010
Chp 7

Its like you keep trying to make me cry!! All these utterly devastating moments!

I think there was a point somewhere in the last chapter I wanted to mention how much I loved how non-Uchiha Sasuke always seems to act,but I cant remember the exact scene that caused the thought at the moment..

I was so thrilled by the passion and all-out sexyness that grind-fest was composed of and was repeatedly chanting over and over in my head "Finally! Finally! Finally!" ooooonly to have Naruto freak and runaway at the end.

Poor naruto...*thinking about the childhood you gave him* Poor Sasuke... *thinking about Naruto running away after he confessed and did...other things with him*

They were adorable in kindergarten =) I can imagine chibi Naruto with his hands full of paint and a huge grin on his face. That makes me smile =)

Darn it, i was going to comment about something else but a text messaged distracted me and now I can't remember.. poop. Either way i thoroughly enjoyed the chapter. XOXOXs Kei-Chan
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From Kerrisa on January 21, 2010
Chp 6

*Blinking back unshed tears*

*Clicks "Next Chapter"*

XOXOXs
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From Kerrisa on January 21, 2010
Chp 5

xDDDDD!!!! Omg after the day i Had, the get-rid-of-Hinata chapter was amazing!! If anyone should have that kind of kink, it should be the shy and introverted Hinata. I loved that, I'm glad she went out with a "wtf" bang! I'm feeling for Sasuke! Gonna start the next chapter, then off to bed early! Thanks for inadvertently brightening my day! XOXOXs Kei-Chan
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From Kerrisa on January 20, 2010
Fave Line:

Correction, Sasuke�s headache drained blissfully away, simply to return with reinforcements.

-- Darn those headaches and their reinforcements!! Lol i love Sasuke goes into erotic fantasy mode whenever Naruto puts his hands on him. I loved how Sasuke used Naruto's song against him (again)! lol devious. I was so surprised Sasuke got thrown out of the restaurant before he even did anything! Its for the best, I know, but still... darn you Sakura )= Looking forward to reading more soon!! I'm lovin it! XOXOXs Kei-Chan
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From Kerrisa on January 20, 2010
Chp 3

Fave moments:

�Oh�� Naruto�s statement, tinted with genuine surprise, snapped Sasuke back to reality. Oh jeez, what did he just do?" -- LMAO!!! I LOVE this Sasuke xD!!!

SFKDUWHH$&Y$IU)E*U@O$IEJO FTRHOQ$@Y&!!!!! NOOOOO!!!! IT WAS A DREAM!?!?!? YOU EVIL VICIOUS FANGIRL TEASE!! I KNEW IT WAS TOO GOOD TO BE TRUE!!! Dx!!!!

(Lol btw I love that song.)

" ' Anything else?�
�(Muttering) You�re going to hell��
�(Sigh) I know�� " -- Lol as long as he knows xD

green-clad idiot, orange-clad idiot.. lol nice xD

*snickers* energetic fist pumps into the air.. *more snickering* Poor Sasuke xD

-- Sorry sorry I'm all over the place with trying to figure out how to format my reviews, I've resorted to having the review page opened in another tab so when something pops up that I have to comment on, I can do so immediately ^ ^ I'll figure it out! Hope you don't mind me flooding your inbox with new review alerts from aff X_X

The lemon in the scene was hot, I was properly nearly as disappointed as Sasuke when I realized the "dream" had been spoiled.. *pouts* I was waiting for the bomb to drop... ugh, devastation. I'm looking forward to how Sasuke plans to sabotage Naruto's date XD Oh! WHich reminds me!! I love how you went about explaining the Hyuuga's eyes and incorporating Lee's shortcomings and transferring them into his taijutsu dealings with this story! Brilliant. Gonna read and review chp 4 tonight b4 bed so you'll be hearing from me again soon X_X XOXOXs Kei-Chan

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From Kerrisa on January 19, 2010
For Chps 1 + 2

Fave Line:

"Sasuke cooled his voice so much; you could have chilled juice with it."

Your sense of humor tickles my sense of humor. I can't believe Naruto let him off the hook so easily for that Naruto double stunt and then had the audacity to ask out Hinata!! Okay, so maybe it is perfectly natural for him to ask out a cute girl, i just feel bad for poor Sasuke. Poor baby is suffering D= !! Okay, must read more, I shall continue to review between chapters 'cuz if saved it for the very end, I might end un short changing you or leaving a retardedly long review that might take awhile for you to read through... I've done it before. . . Until next time! XOXOXs Kei-Chan
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From loveusender on January 19, 2010
I.LOVE.YOU. enough said..funny,charming, witty, angsty, heartwhenching, nervewracking, tears of joy. That is what you did to me, you great person you. I loved the songs also. Simple plan and hoobastank fitted SO WELL..I'm also following torrid. glad that i found you :D
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From Leeana69 on December 05, 2008
:happy sigh:

That was amazing, this is by far one of my all-time favorite stories. ^-^

Thumbs up for awesome writing.
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From Leeana69 on December 05, 2008
So I adore the line about dying for true love, it reminds me of 'The Princess Bride' The single best movie of all times.

And the part about the confession.....that is my all time favorite part of any story ever. I was thinking about it at work the other day and almost burst out laughing. I was doing a clients hair and I couldn't stop smirking. It was terrible, I blame it one you. XD
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