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Reviews for Mr. Right

By : ringpop
  • From ANON - Synn Black on December 24, 2008
    Please please please finish.
    I luffles it.
    Oh and if you need a beta for anything in the future just give me a look up.
    I rather beta than write.
    Well . . .
    Ya.
    But this is an amazing story.
    Lots of love coming at you.
    :)
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  • From ninetailedfoxx852 on March 19, 2008
    gah! you have no idea how happy i was that there was new chapter out!!! it really made my day-- so thank you!! *kisses you on cheek* XD
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  • From Dragon7 on March 18, 2008
    Loved it I can't wait to read more so update soon.

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  • From hisoka on January 31, 2008
    though i dont really know what a beta is or what they do i could help you if you want, but if you adk me please have patiance i really dont know whatto doing and have never been a beta before im a fast learner though. if its just support i can give alot
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  • From ANON - Aura on January 31, 2008
    =( ahhw, I really hope you'll find a beta to make things easier for you.

    I would do it, but English isn't my native language.

    All of your work has been amazing so far and I absolutely love you're writing style.

    Good luck finding a beta!
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  • From vanessaclarke on January 31, 2008
    Hey Girline! I'd feel sad for your plight if I didn't know that you've probably already got a bunch of offers. ('Cause who wouldn't want to work with genius.-^^-) I've never done the beta thing, nor have I used one, but I'm going to offer my services anyway. I'm sure you're just bursting with good ideas and I'd love to help you jell them into a full-on plot. Be forewarned, I wouldn't 'let' you begin until you had a complete outline with all the major snags worked out. That being said, I won't be upset if you pick someone else. Just make sure that whoever you choose, leaves your style fully intact. It's the best thing you've got going for you.

    Hope you get up and running soon!
    dagget
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  • From noezel7 on January 31, 2008
    I would love to beta your stories. I've been reading them for a while and I love how you write. Please don't give up, though I do know how you feel. My one story I didn't post a new chapter for two months and I felt awful, but people still read it when I did post a new chapter. Let me know if you want me as a beta. I would feel honored.
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  • From Madamdragon on January 31, 2008
    I hope you find a beta you cant quit its such a good story... please continue. ONEGAI!
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  • From YamiKaeko on January 31, 2008
    Sweetheart you know I don't have a problem with helping you, why didn't you ask me? I'm on the verge of quitting because I have too many stories running through my head and no outlet. Plus nobody wants to read my stories...I'll gladly beta for you if you want me to. It's not like i have anything else to do. The story I'm working on right now probly isn't going to be posted because nobody reads them anyway. it's called Red Candy Roses...I dont think i told you that. Anyway IM me (im usually invisable) ~Rain~
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  • From KoibitoFemme on January 31, 2008
    Girl don't let this get to you. You should be writing because YOU enjoy it. Your joy transmits to your fans and they enjoy your talent. If you need ideas me and my beta can help you if you are willing. Shes full of ideas and if it wasn't for her I don't think I would have been able to finish half the stories I have done. Shit if it wasn't for her I would have just stopped with my flop of a first story. If you need a rest take it. I have waited for your updates before and I have no problem doing it again. The main thing is if you are happy. Don't let the thoughts of pleasing others cloud your heart. I think anyone whose a real fan will understand your plight and agree. Sometimes we need someone else to make our recipes work.
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  • From ANON - hunter sunday on January 31, 2008
    I agree that you should get a beta i am willling to do it but i will not go easy on you I will tell you if i think something is wrong or needs improvement
    but dont think i will always be an ass because i wont i will complament you whwn you do a goood job.
    My Review on Mr. Right I liked it a lot i loved the plot it had good um... tast it was a littel boring at first but it did pick up so i give you a 3 star rating .
    any ways if you need a beta seend me an email.
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  • From Deandraquin on January 30, 2008
    If you're still looking for a Beta: I would love to help you out. I've got all the time in the world. So let me know.
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  • From hisoka on January 20, 2008
    they're all horny bastards all they need is to get layed but theirs a catch...they stick with the same lay now thats love...no thats just gay but sweet.hope kiba and haku dont forget about the dinner because they had to try out their new lover, this plan should go well.hope you can update soon
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  • From ANON - TicTac on January 19, 2008
    I really like this fic, I can't wait to see what happens with Suigetsu. Please update soon.
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  • From on January 17, 2008
    I just read your review for Shawty so low and I felt that I needed to respond. Yes, finally some good constructive criticism; I’ve been waiting for someone to help me figure out what the hell I’m doing wrong. Thanks a bunch for pointing out how I can improve myself. Yes I am fairly new to writing lemons (only written four in a couple of months) and every time I write one it seems off. Don’t get me wrong I’m glad that I’ve gotten some good reviews on them but I’m it’s nice to have someone say hey you can do better because this, this, and this needs fixed. I know this may sound slightly masochistic on my part for saying thanks a bunch but seriously I want to improve and get better at my writing skills. So anyway, I love this fic btw and I’m not sure if I’ve reviewed it yet but great job. I love the interaction between Sasuke and Naruto with a lot of humor to boot. Sorry if this review is a little odd and random but I just woke up @_@. Again thanks for your input.

    ~cai~

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