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Reviews for Mr. Right

By : ringpop
  • From MidnightMoonMaiden on July 16, 2007
    About friggin time!
    poor Naruto and Sasuke they can never get any privacy...
    Hahaha man I know how that goes and the last person who
    interupted my privacy had a broken nose and a jammed thumb...

    you know privacy is over rated now-a-days...

    Anyways I hope for more of your work.
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  • From ANON - Chrissy on July 16, 2007
    Ooooh my..this lemon chapter was SO worth the wait *nods approvingly and grins*

    Thank you for replying to my reviews, its really nice to know you care enough to do so.
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  • From ANON - BlackDiamond on July 16, 2007
    AAAAHHHHH!!! YESH THE SMEX WAS GREAT!!! =D *kisses*
    There is your kiss!!*glomps* ^^
    THIS IS MY FAVOTIRE STORY OF ALL TIME plus YOU ARE MY FAV AUTHOR!!!
    "RIDE MY COCK" XD What a great chappie name! LMAO! I saw it and i new great smex was comming! =D
    I like the little twist that Naru-Chan was the seme. It was deffinately hott!!!*kisses*
    I love you again!! *huggles* Thanx for the great chappie!
    Ahem...
    UPDATE WHEN YOU CAN! xD
    [That's my trade mark saying!=D ]
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  • From gaara89 on July 16, 2007
    Good job!! Please keep up the good work!
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  • From Belovedlovex2 on July 16, 2007
    Omg that was sexy. I can not wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work. I love you too i totally think we should get married
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  • From wickedwiccanofthemiddwest on July 16, 2007
    First off i want to say An asome lemon of and asome chapter to an asome story. I loved the description and love you conveyed into naruto and sasuke during the lemon.

    As to a responce the the responce to some of my reviews. 1. Don't blame it on me your the ones that gave Naruto and sasuke the morals when it came to the hot smex, well ok i guess you can blame me what can i say i'm wicked;p 2. In my defence i only threatened to castraight kiba with a rusty spork if he directly came between the smex again. 3. I just wanted to say i'm sorry for the "stupid cliffe but love the story review" i just now relised that it sounded like i was saying the ending was dumb but i actually mean stupid cliffe like "dam cliffe i hate you so much right now (sends cliffe evil glare look) sort of stupid. 4.I loved this story and i don't know if this is the end to Mr. Right if it is i'm sad but i'm going to be lookin out for your other fics if its not i'm glad and still be looking for your other fics. 6. You are offically one of my favorite authors now and forever because you didn't automatically asume i was a girl, so think you so very very much. Once again i loved the chapter and the lemon.

    p.s. I'm not that down to earth i have voices in my head and everything, but don't worry they like ur story. HEE HEe j/k i don't really have voices in my head but if i did they would love your story or else i would kick em out.

    p.p.s. Sorry for rambling
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  • From ANON - AoiKitsune on July 16, 2007
    gah :drool: damn dat was hot. i luv it must have more
    plz update soon. heh i luved da begining we der was 2
    much goin on around dem 2 get da deed done. heh well i
    wish u da best on da next ch. Ja Ne AoiKitsune =^-^=
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  • From Chria on July 16, 2007
    it was hot...wooo
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  • From ANON - Darkcherry on July 16, 2007
    Finally!! Naruto told Sasuke those three little words!! YAY!!^^ and finally some smut!! about time it was also funny when sasuke was 'uke' write more I LOVE THIS STORY I NEED TO READ MORE!! will anything happen between the two? WRITE MORE!! IF NOT I'LL KILL MYSELF!! J/K!!!^^ PLEASE WRITE MORE!!
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  • From ANON - Word_Slave on July 16, 2007
    I have to say, that I'm enjoying this... Which kind of surprises me. I don't know why, it just does. But I really can't wait until Sasuke takes Naruto... Please...
    Oh, and please don't skip the curses, you know the ones durning the smex... But I'm loving the characters, and it sounds like you're having fun...
    Oh, and get your ass moving and write more...
    Please
    Slave
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  • From Rosebud on July 15, 2007
    Are Sasuke and Naruto finally going to get it on?????
    PLEASE update this ASAP!!!!!

    I loved this chapter btw! ^^
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  • From Dragon7 on July 15, 2007
    Grate chapter!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
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  • From Lihrah on July 15, 2007
    -Falls to the floor-

    Okay, several things to say here...

    Iruka is SO OOC, but I love it.

    Ouch, poor Kakashi -giggles-

    Naruto gets slightly annoying and loud in here, and even though I hate it, I love it cuz it reminds me so much of the pre-timeskip Naru. Which is supposed to be good, I think. I think...

    Yay! More jealous-ness!

    AWWW! POOR KIBA-KUN! -baby voice-

    -pants and drools and fans herself- H-hot! Ohmigawd, hot, /hot/, HAWT dance...

    Must...have...lemon...before...I DIE! And come back as a ghost to haunt you to all eternity. If you don't update. Soon. -grins charmingly-

    Cookie?

    ~Lihrah
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  • From ANON - Darkcherry on July 15, 2007
    Please please write more I love this story it's gotten so cute!!^^ I wonder will Naruto say those three little words I love you? and you had to stop in the good smut!!!! why???!!! WRITE MORE PLEASE!!^^
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 14, 2007
    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! you stopped before the sex! what were you thinking?!??!!!
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