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By : ringpop
  • From Rosebud on July 20, 2007
    Damn that was HOT!
    I want more lol!!!!
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  • From ANON - LadyWolf on July 18, 2007
    MORE! MORE!!! Please....! I thought this was so hot. Naruto...Seme...That's hot! All other Fics that I've read, Sasuke was Seme....I love it!

    Please, pretty please with sugar on top, continue. I've become addicted, please supply me with my fix!!!!!
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  • From Lihrah on July 18, 2007
    Dayum, dude. This is like the most entertaining fic I have ever read. You are so random and hyper. Do you have ADHD? I like you. No, scratch that, I FRIGGIN' LURVE YOU! Where do you live? I'm gonna stalk you down and plant some kinky ideas of my own in your head while your asleep that I get from my hot NaruSasu dreams.

    You know what's weird? I rarely get dreams, or if I do, I don't remember them. And the dreams I do remember, well, let's just say I have NO FRIGGIN' CLUE how they came about. Like once, I dreamed I was at some place called "Cartoon Network High" and I befriended a bunch of the characters and this dude with pitch black hair and blue eyes tried to molest my on the staircase. Do you think my subconciuos is trying to tell me something?

    So yeah, off topic.

    Heheh, that makes me think of hot topic...Damn I need to go there soon. I need ta buy meself a plaid skirt and a tie to finish off my punky school girl look.

    Oh yeah, I'm reviewing the fic...D'oh...

    Erm...so yeah, truthfully, the first few chapters were nothing special, but then it was... aMaZiNgNeSs all around.... Yup yup. Naruto's inner selfs are very amusing. You should give Sasuke some too. I mean, Bieng Naru's boyfriend, SOMETHING has to rub off on him... Hmmm, now I have a very interesting image of a chibi Sasu-slash-scary-Asian-lady-shopkeeper-person. No offense to the Asians out there. I love your pretty boys.

    Ja!

    ~Lihrah

    P.S: LUV YA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! =^w^=

    P.P.S: UPDATE!! RAWR!!

    P.P.P.S: Cookie?
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  • From marquesgue1 on July 18, 2007
    "Because, I want to take a shower and I have to piss. Do you want me to piss on your stomach?"

    "Does it turn you on?" Naruto attempted to sound seductive.

    looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool I loved that loooool it made me burst out laughing looool :D heh, Sasuke got his piece too eh? nice ^_6 loool i liked it it was hot ^_^ can't wait to see what you throw at us next

    Hina xXxx

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  • From wickedwiccanofthemiddwest on July 18, 2007
    AWw fluffy endings are good once and a wile and this was one of those once and a wile times. Asome chapter as always and i cant wait for the next instalment. I think you should get sasuke's toungue pierced that would be cool and hot. As for "Sasuke + Shower........= Me in there with him!" which means me+video camera+tissues= me video taping them with tissues up my nose to prevent bleeding to death lol. Anyway once again great chapter.

    p.s. what did you mean by "wiccano/Espanol...masculine type thing...I knew it was a masuline spanish word" i didn't know that was spanish the only spanish i understad is hello, goodbye,friend, and where's the booz? (How i know the last once i can only blame on being genectically encoded because my family loves beer.)
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  • From ANON - Darkcherry on July 18, 2007
    I just had to review again!! this story is soo sooooooooo....KOOL!! >.< PLEASE PLEASE WRITE MORE!! I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!! IF I HAVE TO I'LL WAIT FOR EVER UNTIL YOU UPDATE AGAIN I JUST LOVE THIS STORY!!^^ I'LL DIE IF YOU DON'T!!! sooo please please write more!!^^ and wow I can't believe they went at it two times poor Naruto I wonder if he's ok? by that I mean dose his ass hurt? PLEASE PLEASE WRITE MORE I'M A BIG FAN OF YOUR WORK!!^^
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  • From Belovedlovex2 on July 18, 2007
    That was a nice chapter, but something deep inside is telling me that something is going to go wrong. I don't feel like crying. I loved the love making in the shower it was great. Thanks for updating so fast. I can not wait for the next chappie!
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  • From ANON - Darkcherry on July 18, 2007
    OMG!! OMG!! that was a great chapter!!^^ please please write more I really like your story!!^^ I CNA'T BE THEY'D GONE TWICE IN THE MORNING AND THE NIGHT IW OULD HAVE BEEN TIRED BUT HEY IT'S HIM!!^^ CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!^^ HURRAY FOR YOU!!!
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  • From Bluesake on July 18, 2007
    Another great chapter! Loving the updates too. : D
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  • From Madamdragon on July 17, 2007
    Tight! Awesome fic, love em since tha beginning. can't wait for the next!
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  • From ANON - LadyWolf on July 17, 2007
    SWEET!!! I loved this chapter, I was laughing so hard! I love the way this flows, no breaks, it just keeps getting better!!!!

    Ok enough of my babble, TO THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!
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  • From Chria on July 17, 2007
    Are you watching me? *checks window* How did you know I'm hot? Ah well, wouldn't be my first stalker. We'll see if I'll call you tho. It depends on if there's bondage next chapter....that kinky side of Sasuke is crazy hot! And when Naruto talk dirty....drools....
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  • From ANON - AoiKitsune on July 17, 2007
    dancing really 2nite sure y not..lol nope sry got a quiz 2 study
    4 damn summer sessions. but hey gets me out of chores heh. well i
    luved duh c u nest update til then ja. AoiKitsune =^-^=
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  • From Bluesake on July 17, 2007
    'o' hot xD keep going!
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  • From vegaqixi on July 16, 2007
    Hey, sorry, I hadn't finished typing it yet- just experimenting- I've been reading aff.net for a long time, but just now got an account. Check it again. BTW, I'm really into this story of yours (Mr. Right), it's totally hot! ^_^ I'll keep reading it.
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