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Reviews for Mr. Right

By : ringpop
  • From YamiKaeko on August 04, 2007
    yay!!!! I love it! you're such a great writer! more please! hehe ja!
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  • From Belovedlovex2 on August 02, 2007
    "You look so sexy on me Sasuke. Fuck yourself harder. Make me cum in your tight, sweet ass." that was my favorite part. i read it out loud again with my friend next to me. again she was laughing her ass off. and may i ask if you are male or female cause i would like to know who i am marrying. can't wait for the next chappie so keep it up!
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  • From Chria on August 01, 2007
    I love you too for working so hard on this! I'm thinking they go to the beach and hop on jetskis and chaos ensues! Because the thought of either Sasuke or Naruto busting their ass out there has me cracking up. heh Sex in the ocean sounds pretty hot too. drools.....
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  • From ANON - Raaaaiiiii~ on August 01, 2007
    I love your story so much! I stayed up all night read it just as I was going to bed. ._.; But anyways, that story you are talking about is called "Tranquil Blue". Very good story, I might add. If you want, you can search "Raikari-hime" under authors on FF.net, and you'll find me!

    *headbangs to Shiina Ringo music*

    ~Raiii
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  • From despairs on July 31, 2007
    That's one thing about the quiet ones, their always the kinkiest.

    LOL that explains alot about me...i'm uh ..pretty quiet myself.

    Anywho...Great new chapter, as always. I really like how Sasuke and Naruto
    dont want to keep their relationship a secret and give major public displays of affection ;)
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  • From Lihrah on July 31, 2007
    God, Sasu-chan is such a little whore. Heehee! I was right! I am PSYCHIC! BOOYAH! When I was reading the scene where they were sitting in the airport and Sasuke kisses Naruto, a random thought popped into my head and I said it aloud: "They're going to join the Mile High Club." I WAS RIGHT!


    YAY! You took my suggestion about Naruto rubbing off on Sasu! I feel special!

    Fuck, man, that lemon was some serious hot shit. Like, seriously.

    God save the lazy bastards and bitches like us! I still haven't updated my story and it's almost been two months! Eh...heheh... -sweatdrop-

    Oh my, You have the image of Sasu in glasses with a pen in his mouth stuck in my head. I might just end up drawing him. If I do, obviously I'll let you know! But don't expect anything!

    You keep writing, and you keep liviong! Simple as dat! HAH!

    I really think I might be slightly insane.

    As for msn, nooo not really, but I do have AIM. It's tnvr600 but random as to when I'm on.

    LOVE YA! LIKE, FO' SHO'!!
    ~Lihrah

    Dammit, YOU'RE rubbing off on ME!!
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  • From LadyWolf on July 31, 2007
    I love it! please write some more!!! They are so sexy it just makes me want to scream!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From gaara89 on July 31, 2007
    Nice work. haha they joined the mile high club...lol. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From hisoka on July 31, 2007
    thats cute,that stewertest shouldnt of been so curious of sounds in a bathroom you hear something odd you dont go check it out like the stupid girls in the movies you eather get someone else to check with you/for you or you walk away like you didnt hear anything,who knows maybe next time it will be an alien or pretitor er sumthin'. suigetsu was watchin them at the end wasnt he damn kiba for puttin out other peoples buisness like that.
    continue ne
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  • From Sessygirl on July 31, 2007
    LOL, that was great. Sasuke and Naruto join the Mile High Club. XD

    Another great chapter and an even greater lemon.

    Can't wait for more.

    -Akiru-
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 31, 2007
    oh my god this was terribly hot! I think the best love(fuck) scene I have ever read. very very erotic!^_^
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  • From wickedwiccanofthemiddwest on July 31, 2007
    *starts conga line with other reviews* there was a new chapta, there was a new chapta, there was a new chapta, ai ai ai. *stops conga line* what elese can we conga to? *random reviewer whispers in ear* Oh yea thats good. *starts conga line up again* they joined mile high club, they joined the mile high club, they joined the mile high club, Ai ai ai. Ok what to do now... Oh yea *hops in to airport with a louisville slugger* Hey brunette bimbo. *brunette looks* take this *smashes bat into stomic,* never *hits smashes bat on back and she falls to the floor,* ever *kicks in ribs* interrupt yoai goodness again *kicks in face.* Or else you'll never live to see the old whore's homecapche! *steps back to computer* sorry about that just had to teach someone a lesson lol. OK now to the serious part of the review. I know you may get tired of me saying the same thing but another great chapter and i cant wait to see what fun they have in LA. SO please hurry and update *puts on puppy dog face*
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  • From YamiKaeko on July 31, 2007
    *Nosebleed* *thumbs up* O K! *snickers* I'm Lovin it!
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  • From ANON - Rei on July 31, 2007
    Eh I know what masuse one your talking about I believe is called traquil blue...
    as for the author...I think it was anime_head something or another...*sweatdrop* sorry if im not much help....if you ever want a good fic to read I reccomend Spiral Falling by BeccaAmon and Spartan Ninja's
    even though it was abandoned it was flippin awsome so I read it over and over...sorry forgot the authors names because tehre are two authors reponsible for the fic I know ones name is cecelia(sp?) and they also did a really awsome vampire fic...eh good job by the way...
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  • From Dragon7 on July 31, 2007
    Grate chapter!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
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