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By : ringpop
  • From wickedwiccanofthemiddwest on August 24, 2007
    Yeay for Matching. Thank you so so so so so so so very much for updating i was having a really crappy day and i was pissed beyond all reason I probably did make satan look like mary poppins today but you have impecable timing because i read this story and now i'm happy agian (huh maybe i do need a yoai fix every so often so i wont' be witchy) any way great chapter.
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  • From Rosebud on August 24, 2007
    Awesome chapter! I loved it! I can't wait to see what's going to happen next!! XD
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  • From hisoka on August 24, 2007
    sasukes smart to figure that out so fast, glad narutos not mad at finding sasuke in a closet with suigetsu.is itachi dead?
    hope you update soon
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  • From gaara89 on August 24, 2007
    good job! i'll be looking forward to the next chapter1
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  • From Belovedlovex2 on August 24, 2007
    that was a great chapter update soon
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  • From ANON - Vivi & Venny on August 22, 2007
    Vivi: You black? We be black too!

    Venny:....-cough-

    Vivi:...Okay, I be black. Venny's a white boy. But he's the sexiest white boy you'll ever meet! Black hair, pale, lean, dark green eyes, and perceings. So sexy!!!

    Venny: Yup, I got my tounge, snake bites, right eye brow, five on my left ear, and one at the top of my right ear done.

    Vivi: Tisn't fair! I only got my ears done twice.

    Venny: Shit, ALL of your Narutos look fuckin' sexy. I would do ALL of them.

    Vivi:.....Hey, is this a SaiXSakura?

    Venny:.........THAT DIRTY BITCH!!! SHE STOLE MY SAI AWAY FROM ME!! I'LL KILLL HERR!!! -charges at Sakura-

    Vivi:.....-knocks Venny out- Crazy fan boi. Now, besides the SaiXSakura thing, I lurv this~! I like that voice in Naru-chan's head! Half the time Venny kept saying that she sounded like me. Can't wait for the next chap

    Venny:...-wakes up- What the fuck happened? -rubs head-

    Vivi: You fell and hit your head. And say the ending, stupid.

    Venny: Oh, BYE!!

    Ja,

    ~Vivi & Venny
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  • From minaaaaaaaa on August 10, 2007
    loody doo, aahhh i had stopped reading about 5 chapters back bc naruto came out as seme (and sometimes i feel bitchy and stop reading bc of shit like that lol) but i'm back (not that you'd really care that much lol) and i gotta say GOOD JOB GIRLIE!! tho i still gloss over the narusasu moments as long as you dont make it exclusively that i'll keep on reading cause i really do like this story :) Oh and that last chapter? HOOOOOTTT!!
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  • From hisoka on August 06, 2007
    aww thats cute, i guess thats what horny people do ne screw and sleep.theyll probly never get enought of each other. is suigetsu still fallowing them?what happened to itachi anyway?
    i cant really read what i said last time i musta had some were to go.
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  • From LadyWolf on August 05, 2007
    This was the hottest lemon ever!!!!!! OMG.....!!!! Definitely continue, please post more!
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  • From wickedwiccanofthemiddwest on August 05, 2007
    *stuffs tissues in nose* By far the best lemon out of this story by far. Although i may have to stop reading this story out of health reasons... namly dieing of a nosebleed. LOl keep up the great work.

    Ps. IN my defence that bimbo may not have stopped yoai goodness and just fuled it, but point is she tried to stop it by flirting with sasuke as in property of naruto so she had to be punished. As far being brutal without my yoai fix don't be ridculas... I make satan look like Mary f'n Poppins lol. Srry i'm not 25.
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  • From Rosebud on August 05, 2007
    I think this is my favorite chapter so far!
    KEEP IT UP!XD
    I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!
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  • From MissMayumi on August 04, 2007
    Gah! I loved this chapter. I know it's weird, but I think its EXTREMELY erotic when the uke rides the seme. And I love Sasuke as the Seme and Naruto as the uke. This was amazinG! Did you see the new TOS? You should...please have another chapter like this! I was picturing Naruto..and damn...
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  • From Belovedlovex2 on August 04, 2007
    I am not into ItachiXSasuke so I did not like that part. But everything else i liked it. I didn't have anybody to read it with this time T_T. Cant wait until the next chapter update soon.
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  • From gaara89 on August 04, 2007
    awesome! that was so good! keep it up!
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  • From ANON - AoiKitsune on August 04, 2007
    nicceeeee!!! X3 i luv it! the strawberries were just 2 die 4!!
    but i would have 2 say my fav part was whenn Naruto rode Sasuke
    now dat was HOT! heh neways i hope update soon best of luck.
    AoiKitsune =^-^=
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