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By : ringpop
  • From ANON - Kitsune13 on September 28, 2007
    that was such a great story!! i loved it please post the next chapter soon. :)
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on September 22, 2007
    Sexy Character you haven't used yet, the original container for Orochimaru. Oh and have you used Neji yet? I don't recall his appearance.....
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  • From hisoka on September 22, 2007
    COULDA SWORN GAARA DIDNT HAVE EYE BROWS,HUN...HAKU AND KIBA GET THEIR 3RD GUY BEFORE SAI GETS HIS 1.DOES GAARA KNOW ANYONE CUZ I GOTTA FEALING HE KNOWS NARUTO LIKE LONG LOST CLOSE FRIENDS(NOT AS CLOSE AS FRIENDS WITH BENIFITS JUST PROTECTING EACHOTHER WISE).SASUKES GATTA FIX HIS DREAMS AND STOP THEM THOUGHT HE WAS CHEATING ON NARUTO FOR A WHILE AND WAS SURE HE WOULD COME IN AND SEE THAT WHAT DRAMA THAT WOULD BE.HOPE YOU CAN UPDATE SOON CANT WAIT FOR SAI TO MEAT SUIGETSU AND GAARA,CANT WAIT FOR ANYONE TO MEAT GAARA
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  • From llyoung on September 22, 2007
    I love the addition of Gaara to your story.
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  • From gaara89 on September 22, 2007
    Update soon! I'd like to see how Gaara's interview goes.
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  • From despairs on September 22, 2007
    I like Kiba, Haku AND Gaara as supporting characters so i think they would work out well in a threesome :D
    BUT i seriously hope you keep the threesome thing with them and not Sasuke and Naruto...call me an old fashion
    prude but i only like Sasuke with Naruto. They seem happy and content with just themselves anyways...ya know?
    I was so proud that Sasuke turned down his stalking ex just to stay true to his Naruto :D

    Anywho...i am also eagerly awaiting Sai's reaction...hope he can keep Suigetsu satisfied so he leaves poor Sasuke alone
    Yay for Sai! I was so happy you brought him more into this story...you rock!

    I know i'm not very helpful review wise :( i'm sorry...i guess this is why i stopped trying to write a story of my own lol.
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  • From YamiKaeko on September 22, 2007
    You know...*dramatic pause* I'm full of ideas *evil smirk* Loved this chapter, can't wait for more.
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  • From KoibitoFemme on September 22, 2007
    You my friend have some weird ass coupling in here but IT WORKS I can see it I am so happy you decided to update this I am curious to see what Sai's reaction to his possible? Update soon and your others stories as well!
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  • From ANON - Tara on August 27, 2007
    I yay'ed like a loser =D *hugs you* OMG! RAPE!
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  • From QueenRandom on August 26, 2007
    I yay'ed! Hahaha. Great story. =D
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  • From LadyWolf on August 26, 2007

    Great your back!!!! I was missin' this fic!!! Ahhhh....I just love it when a chapter is added...sweet just like the rest....
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  • From ANON - Black-Diamond on August 25, 2007
    wwoooww...great twist! Suigestu and Sai!? that's actually kinda hott =D
    I hope there is smex in the next chappie! plz add it wifey ^^
    I love you and your story! *glomps* update when you cann!!! =))
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  • From ANON - Vivi & Venny on August 25, 2007
    Vivi: Glad to be of service! Dunno how, but glad anyway.

    Venny: Ha~, yea. She is a really lucky bitch, I keep telling her that.

    Vivi: Shut up.....but yea, I guess I am lucky. Yea, I'm black, and look it; except for my eyes. Their really slanted; thus my mamma calls me 'black-anese'. Though both of my parents are black.

    Venny: Nice to meet you too, lovly! He does look sexy- well, what I could make out about him was sexy.

    Vivi: Wow, I /knew/ Sai was gay.

    Venny:Yay! Sakura is GONE!!!......wait...Suigetsu's in on it now? Eh, at least he's better than Sakura.

    Vivi: I was so sure that Suigetsu was going to rape Sasuke. Damn, I think Naruto should have broke down the door even if Suigetsu was just joking. Shit, I would have if my bf was locked behind a door with some random guy that said they were having sex.

    Venny: Oh gawd, I 'yay'ed. Then stared at Vivi until she went 'Whoopee.'

    Vivi: The only reason I did was because he kept staring at me, and sticking out his tounge and licking me! I have Venny-germs on my arm!

    Venny:....ya know ya like it~! -starts touching her; gets kicked in the shins- Ow! Fuck, shit, damn it!

    Vivi: ^-^ Just say the ending, Venny

    Venny: Fucking unstable, whore. I should-, wha? Oh! BYE, LOVELY!

    Ja~,

    ~Vivi & Venny
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  • From ANON - vikuta on August 25, 2007
    ... i....i....i did that. i Yay'ed! omg. i didin't even realize thet till i've read your comment. the chapter is the greatest.
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  • From YamiKaeko on August 24, 2007
    Nice....thanks for getting rid of Sakura for me...now she's sleepin with the fishes rofl!!!! anyway great chapter, update soon ne? ja!
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