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Reviews for Mr. Right

By : ringpop
  • From abigailpa on June 22, 2007
    i like i like write more pleeeeeeeeeesssseeeeee!
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  • From wickedwiccanofthemiddwest on June 22, 2007
    Stares at “Keep your boxers on, usuratonkachi.” *falls to floor and starts to ball like a baby* why why why why!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *gets up from floor* Lets just say i was a little sad when sasuke said that. Anyway great chapter please hurry and update i cant wait to see the rest of the story (espesaly when sasuke says take your boxers off) lol keep up the fantastic work
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  • From ANON - HellKat on June 22, 2007
    Aw man, how could you stop there. I was just getting into it and it ended. (I'm going to cry)

    It was good, and the flirting was sweet.

    Hope to read more soon. Ja
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  • From ANON - Tyra on June 22, 2007
    Really cute story!
    I like it how Sasuke's blushing and all, and Naruto's being so fun! xD I loved the flirting! xD

    Heh, I hope we are going to see more of that ShikaNeji too! They're so cute, and Neji's changed pretty much! Which is good. xD
    Update soon again! Keep writing.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 22, 2007
    *raises hand* question! Who's the uke? :3
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  • From ANON - ai-chan on June 22, 2007
    kyah xD
    i think it's a cute story!
    sasuke should definitly fight back! lol
    the cliff hangers fine
    just glad you dont update once a month~ hehe....
    please dont! lol
    enjoying it!
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  • From Belovedlovex2 on June 22, 2007
    i said this onece and i will say it again i am really lovin this story. keep it up.
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  • From ANON - chishio_rikka on June 22, 2007
    Good story Naruto's funny and well in character so is Sasuke. Neji seemed a bit out but for your purposes it suits him nicely. I hate the word hella. It gets so overused in my town. But for some reason in this story it's almost cute. Keep up the good work and update soon!
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  • From ANON - hiri on June 22, 2007
    Sasuke and Naruto goes wedding crashing! lol, They so want each other, they just don't know it yet! me still like this so keep it coming.
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  • From ANON - HellKat on June 22, 2007
    Hey, I like this. It sounds promising, and I'm very intrigued, and interested to see where you take this.

    Hope to read more soon.

    Thanks for posting.
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  • From ANON - badluck on June 22, 2007
    (If you’re black and you’re offended, don’t be. It’s okay he can sing this song…I’m black too : ) XD
    Many people get offended when people say 'nigga' to their face but in songs its ok to say that. i mean wtf? xD
    [im also black btw]
    oh, thnx for the cliffie. i loved it abd it was a great cliffie.
    UPDATE! I LOVE THIS STORY! =P

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  • From Yabun on June 22, 2007
    I finished reading the 1st chapter and just rated the story when I saw 'Next Chapter'. Then I was all, "Yosh! An update already! XXXXXDD"

    I enjoyed reading the story so far, and Shy!Sai is so cute XD. 'Til next time...
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  • From ANON - lil lilly on June 22, 2007
    Even better than the first chapter. I love the way the story is progressing..... Keep em' comin!!!!
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  • From wickedwiccanofthemiddwest on June 22, 2007
    stupid cliffe but love the story.
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  • From Belovedlovex2 on June 21, 2007
    i really like that pokemon part that was funn. i still like that old pokemon. well i am loving your fic. so update soon.
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