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Reviews for Mr. Right

By : ringpop
  • From ANON - Yuue on June 25, 2007
    The story is great good work, i almost laughed when Naruto pulled the straight razor line. (thats not an insult i rarely laugh)
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  • From ANON - kai on June 25, 2007
    comunication is the key,what was the ring tone for sakura that sasuke had on his phone?i like it give you props on everything songs style etc.hope you update soon

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  • From ANON - mr. L on June 25, 2007
    awww....trouble in paradise? really nice....who's the guy naruto asked? i can't wait....thanx
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  • From tovah on June 25, 2007
    I love this story! Please continue with it. I think it is starting to get really interesting. I am very curious who Naruto asked to go with him to the party. Maybe Neji? can't wait to find out.

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  • From ANON - chishio_rikka on June 25, 2007
    What are we supposed to be voting on? Maybe I'm just clueless. Hahaha poor Naruto. But I feel bad for Sasuke too. He must be on one hell of a guilt trip right now. hehehe Good story please continue!
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  • From roro237 on June 25, 2007
    Your story is funny and sexy and a joy to read. I recognize the song Naruto was singing! Looking forward to more:)
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  • From Belovedlovex2 on June 25, 2007
    I love you for updating! but it just makes me want more! update soon and don't give up.
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  • From Belovedlovex2 on June 25, 2007
    NNNNNNooooooooo!!! i want more.this chapter made me laugh it was funny. i just love the clothes that you put on naruto. i just love this story please comtinue with it. don't give up on it. please. please update soon.
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  • From ANON - zaira on June 25, 2007
    OMG this story is so fantastic!^.^ I love this playful naruto, and even sasuke is so cute! i really really like your story. me (or I? english is not my first language, so sorry) and my boy are waiting impatiently for the next chapter.. write it soon, if you can^.^! bye!
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  • From ANON - mr. L on June 25, 2007
    luv your story...nice writing....you really are a funny, imaginative person...thanx for the GREAT chappie...luv u
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 25, 2007
    I officially love this story..... the Naruto tung pierced thing very smexy... update soon!
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  • From ANON - tysonandkai on June 25, 2007
    awesome story!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From YamiKaeko on June 25, 2007
    I love it I love it I love it! hehe! More please!
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  • From ANON - hiri on June 23, 2007
    sasuke acting all modest (sleeping fully dressed, he's such a BAKA) while naruto is ohh so seductive.. lol! maybe a bite OOC. I can't pinpoint it so...whatever I'm liking it and that's what counts! I wanna write fics too..I admire you for actually getting it done. I'm such a slowpoke myself ^.^ keep it coming and I'll treat you to some cake. (I make delicious cake!) anyway... what's gonna happen next?
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  • From kagome1303 on June 23, 2007
    Now By now they better both see how they're starting to get attracted to one another, with all that flirting, only a person totally blind to this stuff wouldn't be able to see that. I like this story a lot. I tend to go towards the SasuNaru and NaruSasu that are AU/AR.
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