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Reviews for Tortured Soul

By : Tricia1224
  • From BlackMaiden on November 03, 2009
    Hey there Miss,

    I wanted to come by and be a fair person and review some of your works too, since you have done the same for me. I have only seen a few episodes of this anime, however, the way you state this character and the feelings she has, is very interesting in deed. I like how she is not black or white, in regards to her feelings of what is happening, but is grey. To me, she does not seek the pleasure of the act nor the hurt, in the sense of sexuality directly, but the feelings evoked that such a physical act can be so emotional. I see in her that she is numb, numb in mind and soul, and to get physical contact in the ways of pain and whatnot, has given her the chance to feel again and though she doesnt like it, she still needs it. Good work for such a short chapter. So many descriptions in such a few words is a hard task to pull off, in which it takes years for some authors to pull it off. I like and will keep watching what you write. Perhaps you will write some inuyasha one day. I love giving challenges, so if your up for the task, I can do that for you. I also like collaborating and taking commisions, if you want to do that too.

    Now that I have done that, I wanted to thank you for your reviews. In being direct and letting me know exactly all that you appreciated in my work, means more to me than I could ever put in words. You reviewed quite a bit and I appreciate such. Now, if you dont know yet, the finale has been posted and I would like to know what you think of the story in all, now that it is complete. I am a controversial writer and will write just about anything, and though I have a talent with dark fiction, I do write any and all genre's. I hope you come by again and read my other stories as well. World Trade Centers is not posted on my computer and must be rewritten. I will admit, I am wary to repost it because all the, downright, hateful things that were said about it. To me, i felt that some people chose favorites and followed the crowd a lot like the drama of high school, but your reviews and the great reviews of other proved to me that there are still some good people out there, who are true to the site motives, when responding to the objective; sharing work, helping others and having a good time.

    In some instances, some big time writers here on the sight, some you know very well (I wont say names) are not true to the nature of the sight, in which they ignore giving thanks to those who got them so highly reviewed and rated. Too cocky for their own good. I ensure you, despite all the ratings I recieve, I will always remain a humble writer and give thanks. I hope that you will find others to give you that guidance as well.

    So, once again, I am ever humbled by such devoted, straight foward people. You're are appreciated. Stay in touch and email me anytime, even if just to chat.

    Darkest Regards,
    BlackMaiden

    PS. Remember, I am taking commissions and if you would like me to write something, give me the information that you want in the story and all the details that you would like me to include and I will such for you.
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  • From ANON - kate on May 07, 2008
    i like this story so far. are you going to update it?

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  • From oohshiny on December 02, 2007
    ......oO ......tf?? email me when you update so i can see wtf is goin on. meh email is deannathx@comcast.net
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  • From vegaqixi on August 09, 2007
    Thank you for your review, it was very nice of you to say so. I'm anticipating your future updates as well! Please keep reading!
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  • From KatherynnRae on August 08, 2007
    wow this looks really good, I hope you update soon!
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  • From ANON - ninjakitty on June 23, 2007
    i'm curious now....
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