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Reviews for Full Circle

By : vanessaclarke
  • From RyuuOokami on October 24, 2009
    I think this is the second time reading this fic and I don't think I reviewed before *hangs head in shame* Simply because I'm not good at expressing myself (in english no less *sweatdrop*) about a story.
    But! I just wanted to say; thank you for writing this. I really enjoyed reading it. It was also very interesting to read it again because this time I could see hints I missed the first time. *smile*
    Some things in this story makes me laugh so much it almost brings tears to my eyes. I also like the way you wrote the characters. ^^
    Oh and I must say that I liked Naruto's song. *smile* I liked it and I write poetry. ;) So it's not as bad as you might think (of course I could never write poetry in english though... >.> But still...)
    Anyway, thanks for the entertainment. *bows*
    //Dragonwolf
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  • From ForgottenPrincess on March 23, 2008
    chapter 10
    I like your poetry skills. I thought it would make a good song too. in fact it has the same feel as some of the music i listen to, wistful. either way i feel sorry for itachi and even his wife. Its kind of odd i think this is my favorite itachi, when he's not buissy messing around with iruka...i have a weird like for them together, even while i still love, and believe iruka and kakashi belong together. odd.
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  • From ForgottenPrincess on March 23, 2008
    chapter 3
    Poor Poor Sasuke, I think Mikoto does a perfect example of motherlyness. Mostlikely if they had that kind of power over their childrens live. I might have to kill myself if they did. Thank God for small favors. Naruto is cute. I love him and his father.

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  • From ANON - Charlie on February 07, 2008
    That was so sweet at the end.
    Thanks for that little info about Sakura. (ha ha ha)
    That was a nice gift for us.
    Any chance I can convince you to write an ItaNaru fic?
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  • From ANON - limonata on February 03, 2008
    Freakin' finally! Someone who, wanting to have their MALE characters have kids, does the sensible thing and has them adopt. No offense, but Mpreg, WTF? As soon as a guy in real life does it, I'll condone it, but until then... yeah, no. Plus, I'm adopted myself, so I can never see why it's necessary.
    Anyways, I loved this story! I like how Sai was like, a triple agent. It was fun-times. And the way Sasuke was eased into his attraction for Naruto seemed much more natural than some fics (not that I don't like them too) where he looks at his chest and is like "Oh my, I'm gay!" Very realistic fic, and an easy read, as it didn't have any of those annoying grammatical errors. Good job, you! And thanks for writing.
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  • From ringpop on January 24, 2008
    AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!That was totally cuuuuuuteee!!!!!!! My, my, i must say (once again) that we think along the same lines....a lot of how your Naruto acted towards the kids is how my Naruto acts.....I guess what they say is true....Great minds think alike : ) Well anywho I like this mild fic because there was just enough flirtation to keep me interested.....well pretty much anything with Sasuke & Naruto I'll read so...Very well done.

    Umm...I really liked the epilogue it was fantastic.....Now imunna have to go back & read that JWTHWT fic you were talkin about WOO!! Kay....I'll see you there! Byee!
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  • From ringpop on January 24, 2008
    Okay, since i have to go in like three minutes let me just say this OMG!!! we think along the same lines with kids!! *sneek peak* In one of my fics...in the future..a kid 'shows up'....& he acts just like Keiji!!! WEEEIRRDD!!! but he doesn't look a thing like himmm....my kid is was gnarly!!!hahah but anyways i just got to read like half....so i'll be reviewing when i get back in again : 0 Ttyl!!
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  • From LadyWolf on January 23, 2008
    This fic was well written! I love reading this and the ending was great....I am not scared to admit it , I squealed like a little girl when I read that Itachi and Neji hooked up!!!!!!! Thanks for the great read!!!!
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  • From ANON - qwerty on January 23, 2008
    Great ending! The kids are so sweet! Great job!
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  • From ANON - lo on January 23, 2008
    That was really nice. Well done I really liked that wrap up at the end.
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  • From roro237 on January 23, 2008
    Oh! It's a beautiful epilogue:) Sasuke picking out a pint size Naurto and Naruto drawn to a tiny Sasuke was so sweet^_^ Thank you for putting icing on the cake!
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  • From despairs on January 23, 2008
    The epilogue was perfect! I absolutely loved the way you described Naruto and Sasuke each picking out children that were exactly like their significant other. Both of the boys sounded adorable and Takara too. I loved how much detail you put into this epilogue...sometimes when a story ends i'm left with so many unanswered questions but i had none this time. Great job, i enjoyed reading this so much.
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  • From starprincess on January 22, 2008
    I love it. Sai and Sasuke was so funny. Please I would love to read an epilogue if you decide to write one. Great Story keep up the good work
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  • From nyge98 on January 22, 2008
    Please do an epilogue
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  • From Blckthorn on January 21, 2008
    Your story was a nice read, humorous and nicely developed. I kind of think you might've rushed through the end but it turned out alright anyway. It was sweet, if a little farfetched, and it keep me up reading all night long. lol I must admit it's quite a relief to read a good story and your's is one of the better ones. Anyway kudos for pulling off the sweet but not cloying kind.
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