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Reviews for Full Circle

By : vanessaclarke
  • From ANON - DesperadoSweetie on December 01, 2007
    I feel so bad for Naruto since he didn't do anything at all. And for Sakura to bash him like that just because she was upset with Sasuke was just plain wrong on her part. Very immature as well since as Neji said, she was a guest in someone else's home for dinner. I wonder what her parents must think of her behavior. Would love to read what happened to her after they took their leave.

    Will Sasuke finally tell Sai that he isn't interested in fulfilling his plan anymore and that he shouldn't come around at all?

    I am so proud of Neji for standing up for Naruto and I really loved the part in the room where Sasuke thought that Neji and Naruto were doing something when Naruto was enjoying his "canoli". LOL that was hiliarous.

    I look forward to your next update.
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  • From Daktalakpak on December 01, 2007
    AAAH!! Dunno what to say XD Awesome story so far. update soon. I really really wanna see where this is going.
    You have made the characters good. I mean they are fitting XD that didn't explain it any futher sorry. XD

    -Minna-chan
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  • From lexjamandme on December 01, 2007
    Excellent update. I missed you while you were gone. Silly Sasuke needs to jump on Naruto before he gets away.
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  • From cynaga on December 01, 2007
    Nice, nice, nice but a bit slow moving...
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  • From ANON - lo on December 01, 2007
    I love the tension,great job. It has me on the edge of my seet. I hope the Itachi can find some happiness in this story. Any way, I can't wait to see more of this and keep up the good work.
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  • From Chria on December 01, 2007
    Two thumb ups for this chapter! It's the best written so far. I loved that Sakura got what was coming to her. It was funny when she started accusing Naruto of building a harem. lol
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  • From ANON - Clow Angel on December 01, 2007
    Well, I was going to review this on ffnet, but it seems there's something wrong with FFnet right now. Therefore, I'll review here. ^-^ *Ahem*

    OMG!!! Neji finally showed up! Thank you! I love you! Well, really I love Neji, but since you're the author and therefore only you can make him make an appearance, I suppose I'll extend some of that love to you too. Heehee. Yeah, I really loved how you portrayed Neji. You wrote his character impeccably well, really! It wasn't the least bit awkward. The Takara and Neji interaction was an unexpected but pleasant surprise too. My favorite part was definitely where Neji put Haruno in her place. ^_^ Muahahaha! I had such a vivid scene of that part play out in my mind. It was amazing! Keep it up! Oh, and I hope Sasuke and Naruto make some progress soon. >>; Sai is really starting to annoy me.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on October 23, 2007
    Takara is adorable. I love him. Can't wait to see Neji meet everyone.. especially Sai. Great chapter.
    update!
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  • From bluegenjutsu on October 23, 2007
    Thanks for the two new chapters!! I'm glad Sasuke is really feeling the guilt and regret for how he's treated Naruto. You did great with using Neji to help Sasuke see his feelings even more. I wonder if Neji will figure out what is up with Sai after he meets him.
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  • From Raina on October 23, 2007
    I am surprised at myself for not reviewing this sooner! Though I do suck when it comes to giving reviews, but as a budding authoress myself (still got a lot to learn) I realize that feedback is important.

    I just want you to know that this story is wonderfully adorable and I love how you have Sasuke wavering in the land of denial. Takara is so dang cute! And I absolutely loved the treasure hunt, Naruto is just so... *huggles* As for Sai, he is such a conniving jackass, but well... that's what he's paid for. Can I tell you how much I am loving that Neji is there now?

    This story is so wonderful, I can't wait till your next update

    -Rai
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  • From ANON - Lila on October 23, 2007
    First off thanks for the double update (bows respctfully)...........Now i want MORE!!!!!!.............when you can of course :).............. i just want sasuke to tell Sai to fuck off and him to get with the smexin of his fiance' XD
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  • From gaara89 on October 22, 2007
    I am fully enjoying this story and I hope to see an update soon. If it's not too much trouble, could you email me when you update next. If you do make sure to put this story as the subject.

    Please and Thank you

    ~Reigh~
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  • From lexjamandme on October 22, 2007
    Double updates TOTALLY ROCK. Interesting about Itachi. Honestly, I never guessed, but in my defence I was distracted by the cuteness that is Naruto. Having Neji around is going to be FUN. I am so excited that Sasuke has FINALLY figured out that maybe he "likes" Naruto. Once again I find myself in a dilemma... I know that having Sai in the picture is a good thing for plot and so on, but I hate the build up until the shit hits the fan and Naruto realizes that Sasuke was a jerk and Sasuke at that point just wants snuggies and Naruto will be all like "bite me" and Sasuke will be all like "damn it I was so stupid" and my tummy will hurt... and then finally (hopefully) everything works out. Okay, bit of a rumble there, but awesome update. Can't wait for the next.
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  • From LadyWolf on October 22, 2007
    HOLY SHIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't wait until Neji meets Sai!!!!!!!! If Neji doesn't kick Sai's ass he's going to kiss him!!!!!!

    More please this is getting good!!!!! Hell it's already good!!!!
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  • From Chria on October 22, 2007
    This is good good good! I liked that you kept Sai and Naruto’s date a secret because wow…the suspense! This whole situation totally fits in with Sasuke's lifestyle of having everything even love dropped in his lap and he doesn't appreciate any of it and pushes it away. He tortures himself to ironically enough avoid pain. Thank god, Itachi is here to set him straight! (or not *giggles*) Much Love~
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