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Reviews for Full Circle

By : vanessaclarke
  • From LadyWolf on January 20, 2008
    I think an epilougue would be great!! as well as a lemon....? What'cha think????

    I love this fic, I swear I was screaming "I Hate Sai" at my computer every time he came into the fic....

    I love it when a story is interactive like that!!!!
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  • From ringpop on January 20, 2008
    Hahahah i just noticed...that that review was in fact, just as long as the last...if not longer lmao!
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  • From ringpop on January 20, 2008
    Organized?? Me and organized don't even fit in the same category! Lmao...I kinda just wrote it...I was feelin it, so i wrote it....normally i keep that sorta stuff to myself....but i thought: Hey! I'd like it if some random person told me i was their favorite author! So why not you?!

    That was actually the longest review i've ever written. So feel special.

    So Itachi was behind all this huuh...(i think i hear a sequel calling.....do you?....no?...am i hoping for too much??....yeah?....well a girl can dream!)

    I was a bit surprised....i didn't know that was the last chapter until i read your little author's note @ the bottom. Y'know you left so many doors opened, that you could totally make a sequel....I mean think about it.

    You've still got:

    Sai & Sakura.....you could make some little thing happen between them

    Neji & Itachi....& fucking Takara (This little character was my FAVORITEE!!!((Well i liked Itachi too)) He was so freaking adorable....& i hate kids too!) Y'know....we can see little glimpses on their relationship....maybe some jealousy/tension between Neji & the mom... maybe she's a homophobe & she's hatin on Neji &...i dunno wants to take Takara from Itachi to make him choose between the two....custody of Takara or Neji...

    Sasuke & Naruto....with his music....& I know you can write normal situational scenarios....but i'd love to see your citrus skills in this fic ; )

    About the epilogue...you already know my answer on that one....but I'm thinkin....sequelogue....more More MORE MORE!!! I loved this fic the best because it was steady...not...(well i think) like one update...then 20 years later Oh! i forgot about this little sucker *update 20 years later* Y'know? So i didn't feel like i hadda go back & read the last chapter to remind me of what happened. It had enough flirtation to keep me coming back....normally it's sex....but this was okay...because your characters were right on! If Sasuke had been a skribbler & was like Naruto...i would have been like 'NEXT!' Buuuut they weren't so-.....Gahh! I'm ranting...

    Anywhozle this one won't be as long as the last....but it's something! Thanks for your equally long review though...you helped me see some things I've lost sight of....i knew i was loosing focus, but i was just trying to figure out where i could bring some old stuff back up....eh...I'll figure it out....Sooo if you read the review i just posted like 20 minutes ago...i accidentally posted the same review twice...so i deleted one...& it ended up deleting them both....so i hadda re-write it...but if you don't know what the hell i'm talking about, enjoy your review!

    Thanks again!♥

    Love ya!
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  • From ANON - Josh on January 20, 2008
    Great fic so far :)
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  • From ANON - Gale on January 20, 2008
    That was just the cutest and most perfect story ever! You just have to make an epilogue to make even more perfect. Hopefully with a bit of honeymoon action too! ;)
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  • From DarkRainFiend on January 20, 2008
    This was just as wonderful a story as Art and Artifice. I'm not sure on an epilogue...but I think you could easily make a little sequel for this. Naruto and Sasuke's relationship panning out, Itachi and Neji, Sai and Sakura. Sounds like sequel material to me!
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  • From ANON - qwerty on January 20, 2008
    Heh, so Itachi was on it too. Figures. I would like an epilogue because they you could add some Itachi/Neji exchanges, how Sai deal with Sakura (as a very minor note though) and maybe the wedding of Naruto and Sasuke?
    update!
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  • From ANON - Chishio_rikka on January 20, 2008
    I loved the plot of this story, and I would really like an epilogue. There you have it. I would like to be more descriptive and tell you exactly what I loved about this story, but I'm afraid that would take up entirely too much space. Suffice to say I loved everything. I hope you keep writing. Sad to see a good story end.

    Chishio
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  • From narutovixen383 on January 20, 2008
    DEFINITELY!!! I have to read just a little bit more before I can put my mind to rest about this story!! Hmmm, wonder if Itachi and Neji ever got together and OMG the wedding of course!! And the relationship evolving!! SO SO MUCH!! So please very much write once again because that would make me and other readers very happy!
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  • From Sessygirl on January 20, 2008
    I loved this fic from start to finish... especially the finish... Sai cracked me up, he came out of all of this a richer man. I can only wonder about his new assignment now... poor Sakura. LOL.

    As for an epilogue, I would like to see one... maybe with a *cough*lemon*cough*...

    Well thanks so much for sharing such and amazing story.

    -Akiru-
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  • From ANON - lo on January 19, 2008
    I like how you ended this. This whole story was nicely written. Nice work.
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  • From lexjamandme on January 19, 2008
    First, thanks for forgiving my stupidity. You can bet that I made sure to read EVERYTHING this time!
    Beautiful ending! I loved the Itachi factor! LOVED IT!
    Speaking of love, I'd love to see an epilouge where Sasuke is fulfilling his dream career with Naruto by his side. That was one of my favorite chapters when Naruto creates the treasure hunt picnic for Sasuke... that was AWESOME.
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  • From Deandraquin on January 19, 2008
    I really love the story. I hope you will write the epilogue. *hopes real hard for a wedding*. Great story.
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  • From llyoung on January 19, 2008
    Yes please write an epilogue.
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  • From Meikyuu on January 19, 2008
    Even though the end was sweet it seemed like there was lack of closure with Sasuke and his father... at least for it to be a truly happy ending. I'd love to see peace within the Uchiha estate somehow worked into an epilogue (one hopefully filled with cheese and waff like you promised *hearts in eyes*) Please please please don't get upset with my crit!!! I LOVE your story, and would be just as content if there were no epilogue. But if there *is* an epilogue, I just hope that it will also wrap up the family issues ^__^;;

    I'm really looking forward to reading your future submissions as well. Whatever you choose to do, thank you soooo much for this fic! The read from start to finish was nothing short of enjoyable. And claps on Zee_Kay for her review, it's hard not share her sentiment when reading your work.
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