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Reviews for The Chemicals Between Us

By : SemeUke
  • From on June 18, 2007
    Argh! Need more story! What's going to happen now? Is Neji going to realise?
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  • From on June 18, 2007
    Awesome chapter 7! I always look forward to your story!
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  • From ANON - Grey on June 18, 2007
    Chapter seven and the addition of a *kitten*, which was possibly the only thing missing from this story. Sasuke is really starting to grow on me now that he's talking a little more and has the freedom to tease Iruka all he wants, although I do wonder just how incompetent Neji is if he can't manage to look after things for more than an hour. Hopefully they'll get to see each other more while they're living together, eh? Tsunade and her baseball bat may be my favorite mental image ever. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Grey on June 18, 2007
    Chapter six and I finally believe that Sasuke may like Iruka! Makes my day. *loves* On the other hand, all the women in this story are both mentally unbalanced and not particularly good friends, but that seems to happen a lot in yaoi. Poor Iruka for having his business spread around to everyone, but at least he should know who not to trust in the future. Sasuke, on the other hand, says nothing but still gets everything dragged out of him by the end, and also a knee in the groin, so maybe Iruka had the right idea. *grins*
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  • From ANON - Grey on June 18, 2007
    Gah. Chapter five and the sex was indeed smokingly hot. And I just noticed that this is an RP, which explains the way that Sasuke seemed not to care at all and Iruka seemed totally enraptured and gives me hope that there are actually feelings on both sides. *very happy* Loved poor Iruka making the first move despite having decided not to and having no supplies in the house, and I love that Sasuke has heavy piercings and yet apparently has never had sex with someone who made noise. Hee. What a pair. ^_^
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  • From swordheartoftheforest on June 18, 2007
    Aw, you know, I'm a sucker for pairings that you don't see too often. This fic is too cute.
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  • From ANON - Grey on June 18, 2007
    Aw, chapter four and Iruka trying not to be easy is adorable, especially since he's all but put Sasuke in a headlock in every stage of this relationship. At least Sasuke finally touched Iruka of his own free will - life is good! I'm with Iruka on the no long term thing though, since this Sasuke seems like he doesn't have enough spare time to keep a hamster alive. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Grey on June 18, 2007
    Chapter three, and Sasuke *does* like Iruka... maybe? He may be straight. Or looking for a father figure. But Iruka doing all the pushing is cute as anything. ^_^ I'm really enjoying this story so far - the dynamic is really interesting, and I have no clue how you're actually going to get this to an adult rating... Iruka will probably have to drug Sasuke and tie him down, but the fact that Sasuke keeps coming back gives me hope!
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  • From ANON - Grey on June 18, 2007
    Well, I'm only up to chapter two but I like it so far. You don't often see the super-aggressive uke and the totally disinterested seme in this fandom so it'll be interesting to see how you get them anywhere - although I am wondering if it'll end up being KakuIru after all, since Sasuke *really* doesn't seem into Iruka. ^_^
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  • From HumanInfiltrator on June 18, 2007
    "melktert" for you!!! (google it)

    Now, no eating of kittens and UPDATE, like, today!!!!
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  • From ANON - Libra on June 17, 2007
    So...if you keep updating this I swear I'll make myself your whore and whorshiper. So I'll whore-ship you. I feel kinda sorry for Iruka's phone. And I can't wait for a little moment when the two of them meet.
    Libra
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  • From on June 17, 2007
    Chapter 6 was awesome awesome awesome!
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  • From ANON - Anise on June 17, 2007
    I love how fast you update although it doesn't leave me much time to leave a review for each chapter. The smut was absolutely delicious and I love how long you drew it out for, made it very steamy! The adults were such fun taking pleasure in betting on Sasuke's life, although Tsume is a little frightening.
    So I left you a review does this mean my kitty's safe, I hope so I'm really rather fond of him :)
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  • From on June 17, 2007
    Awesome. I feel bad that everyone knows, but it makes it all rather interesting!

    Shikaku fan then?
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  • From Trollmia on June 17, 2007
    Somehow I can see Anko and Tsume getting into a real nasty cat-fight... *lol* But good as ever. Sasuke is so cute when he wants to take care of Iruka... *goes all wiggly-assed over it all before glomping you both*
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