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Reviews for The Chemicals Between Us

By : SemeUke
  • From ANON - Hallow's Eve on July 04, 2007
    Well i hope i am not the only one that needs a to wipe up all the drool. That was hot!

    I really enjoy reading this story, i can see and feel what is happening.

    I would like to know a little more about their surrounding like the boys rooms and the farm. I had no ideal that they where in peoples rooms i just knew it was a room. just little this like do they have books or posters or nothing a window something to make it more than a pace there are using for that moment.

    Sorry if this is rude i am not trying to tell you how to write just what i think could make a really great story even better.

    -Hallow's Eve

    thank for your time.
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  • From llyoung on July 04, 2007
    Very hot chapter. Personally, I like the idea of Kiba, Sasuke and Shika having sex.
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  • From ANON - Ren on July 02, 2007
    Ehehehe

    I love all the alternate pairings! =D

    I wonder what will happen to S+I now! Oh noes!

    Hope you update soon!
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  • From HumanInfiltrator on July 02, 2007
    Thank you for updating, I was getting worried about you guys. The emotional distress is starting to get to me, but I can't stop reading, another sign of the quality of your writing.

    You get extra roly-poly for your rules!!!! Yeay for you!!!!!
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  • From on June 28, 2007
    I've just read the last two chapters in one sitting. I cried. Lots. I cried so much I had to stop reading while my eyes cleared up. That was so... scary? Sad? Horrific? It made me hate Kisame and Itachi with a passion now! And oh... At least, I'm glad it's all over and they're both out of it alive, but what about their relationship now? Gods, I felt so sorry for them throught all of that, especially Iruka, going through it all again. Damnit, it got me so emotional. I need to know what happens next now!
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  • From ANON - kayako on June 28, 2007
    gah! this chapter made me so sad!
    i hate it when they aren't together. T_T

    this is definately one of the best things i've read in a very long time, and i can't wait till the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - ren on June 28, 2007
    ahhhh!!!!!! I hope iru and sasuke can patch things up!!!


    I wonder if there will be any further interactions with our dear naruto!

    Ehehe, I can't wait for the next chapter.

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  • From ANON - ren on June 28, 2007
    omfg omfg omfg omgf omgf omgf omfg omfg omfg omgf omgf omgf omfg omfg omfg omgf omgf omgf omfg omfg omfg omgf omgf omgf omfg omfg omfg omgf omgf omgf omfg omfg omfg omgf omgf omgf omfg omfg omfg omgf omgf omgf omfg omfg omfg omgf omgf omgf omfg omfg omfg omgf omgf omgf omfg omfg omfg omgf omgf omgf omfg omfg omfg omgf omgf omgf

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    That was intense!! I am dieing here!!!!!!!
    Must read more! ;___;



    Update soon!
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  • From ANON - j.s. on June 27, 2007
    damn...these last 2 chapters were sooo sad...i didnt want 2 read it but it was like i couldn't stop. Update soon i cant wait to see what happens next
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  • From ANON - Tiffany on June 27, 2007
    I hope sasuke and iruka go back to their old selfs!!!I would hate for them to be broken!

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  • From ANON - Trollmia on June 27, 2007
    *frowns* To be honest I really don't like the last two chapters... But Dom you know - I don't like that kind of thing... But still, the story is good. But I'm sad the kitten had to go... You could make him a ghost cat that comes back and haunts Itachi and Kisame... scare the shit out of them. Make them suffer!
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  • From swordheartoftheforest on June 26, 2007
    They killed the kitty?! *sob* I hate it when animals get hurt.

    Fuck, you were right though. That is one hell of a twist.
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  • From on June 26, 2007
    Oh My Gods! So we finally found out who those mysterious people were, and Oh gods! The amount of times I gasped and said 'No!' while I was reading this chapter! Oh, I have to know what's going to happen, please let them be alright! Argh, I was almost in tears, damnit! Poor them! And damn Itachi and kisame for being so damn COLD! Argh! I can't wait for the next update!
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  • From ANON - Tiffany on June 26, 2007
    Ahhhhhh!!!!!! I almost cried chapter 14 was soooooooo sad!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Trollmia on June 25, 2007
    Ohh three lovely chapters... and lots and lots of sex... just what I needed to relax after a busy weekend. Sasuke sure is busy... how on earth are they going to be together if he's going to keep this up?? And Anko is a helpful friend ain't she :) Wonderful as always girls!!
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