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Reviews for The Chemicals Between Us

By : SemeUke
  • From Trollmia on July 09, 2007
    I'm so glad that things seems to be working out for them again. But Iruka sure has a fiery temper. I'm glad I'm not on the recieving line of his fury :)
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  • From llyoung on July 08, 2007
    I want to apologize ahead of time especially if I misread the Anko/Iruka scene after Anko broke Ino's nose but didn't Anko and Iruka have sex? And if so isn't Iruka being a little bit hypocritical over Sasuke's "fuck buddies" when he has one too? I'm just a little confused. Ok - so I get way to attached to stories but you are good writers and able to evoke emotions from your readers.

    Loved the scenes with the deer. I really like the baby one that follows Sasuke around and I'm glad that Iruka and Sasuke are getting back on track with their relationship.
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  • From AimeeC on July 08, 2007
    Heh - very funny with the deer and it was _awesome_ to see Iruka grow a spine for a while there. It's good that he can 'intuit' Sasuke's feelings from his boyfriend's totally stonelike facade, even though it's going to amuse me forever that Sasuke freaked out seeing Iruka having _dinner_ with Kakashi yet sees his fucking his way through the populace as nothing to apologize for. But it's all good, because Iruka's a masochist and the sex is freaking hot! :D
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  • From ANON - qwerty on July 08, 2007
    good story, Kakashi is such an a-hole. I really want to punch him in the face. oh well. great writing. update!
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  • From caramelkisses on July 07, 2007
    X_x.
    i hate kakashi SO much right now!
    [and he's my favorite character.]

    ::pants violently.:: thank god they're at least talking right now, i was seriously going to lose my mind. lol.
    i really love your writing, but i always end up getting way too into it. and the last couple of chapters had me almost in tears a couple of times [and i'm as unemotional as they come!]

    anyway. i just wanted to let you know that i REALLY enjoy your writing. so keep it up! i'm already dying for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Ren on July 07, 2007
    Holy Shiznat!!!


    ShikaxKibaxSasuke threesome!!! Sexxxy!! =D


    Ehehehe, I loved it.


    Darn that Kakashi, getting in the way of some good SasXIru lovin'. DX


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  • From AimeeC on July 06, 2007
    Wah, poor Iruka. I'm not sure how he wound up having to do all the running again when Sasuke seems quite happy to go off and have sex with other people. For such a successful businessman, he really is a passive little person when it comes to Iruka... though not when it comes to fucking anyone _else_ which is a little odd. I think I'll just believe that Iruka is a masochist, since that'll make them being back together something like 'happy'. :D
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  • From Shiola on July 06, 2007
    I adddooorreee your story its definately one of a kind :))))
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  • From ANON - eppy! on July 06, 2007
    I so loooooovvvvveeeee this story!!! Loved the chapter!!
    I can't wait to see how they would make up since verything that happened
    between them!! and again IIIII LOve this story!!!!
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  • From Twiggies on July 06, 2007
    Ahh. How I love this story.
    I just love all the smuts and all.
    Shika/Sasu/Kiba threesome was totally hot!

    Heheh, It's quite amusing, everybody knows about Kiba's sexlife. xDD
    And a real family they are: Everybody has had sex with.. everyone. xD Expect Neji and Sai.. I guess. :O
    Do you remember when I said something about Shika and Neji? Something about them having sex? xDDD Well,
    after reading this chapter, I got fantacies about NejiSai.
    I know it's impossible: Neji's straight, and this fic is mainly about Sasuke and Iruka (Hot!). But it doesn't hurt to dream, eh? xD Sorry to bother you with this.

    I hope you update soon again! Keep writing! -hearts-
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  • From llyoung on July 06, 2007
    I do like Sai - he is very funny. Poor Kiba having his sex life discussed and I still would love for him to end up with Shika. And Anko unintentionally has actually made things worst since the attack with almost everything she has done. Thanks for another chapter.
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  • From ANON - Anise on July 05, 2007
    It's been awile since I've reviewed but I have to admit that the angst did get a little overpowering and I really didn't know what to say. I've loved the last parts with Kiba, Shika and Sasuke, it's fun to watch them interact and of course the sex was very hot! Now I'm just looking forward to seeing how we get Iruka and Sasuke back together, at least I hope that's where this is going, but whatever happens I'm still loving this story! :)
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  • From llyoung on July 05, 2007
    While I realize the it was just a reaction to everything that had happened (plus the alcohol) I really enjoyed the threesome. Hope that Shika talks Kiba into just the two of them having sex. I would also love it if someone did a drawing of the threesome.
    thanks for writing
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  • From ANON - Sara on July 05, 2007
    Okay. New pairing for me. But, I have to admit, it's one of the best. An older uke Is hot. The whole thing with Itachi, thouh, absolutely broke my heart. And the thing with Kiba made me laugh. Keep on with the story because It's one of the best I have ever read.
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  • From ANON - Steph on July 05, 2007
    hey just wanted to let u guys know! that i really enjoy this
    story!! i fell in love with this pairing!!! It's hott!! Can't wait
    for the next chapter!! ooo and i want them back together again! Stupid
    kakashi he needs to get out!! ooo and one mnore thing! the sex scenes are hoottttt!!!!
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