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Reviews for Naruto of Sparta

By : Shinn
  • From UzumakiIno on June 28, 2007
    Very nice. It seems that you really like Kin, giving her huge tits and all. Keep up the good work. Hope to see more soon.
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  • From ANON - sliver32 on June 27, 2007
    This has a lot of potential, but needs serious revision. You DO remember that Naruto is 12 at the times of him being genin, right? At that time he should have no idea what to do with a female, seeing as no one explained the basics to him. And with the amount of sex he and Anko have been having, she should be very pregnant by now. Fanfiction is written primarily by females and there seems to be a sort of compulsion in male writers who put sex into their stories that they have to tell the reader the woman's breast size. Why is that?
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  • From ANON - B.T. on June 27, 2007
    Now this is what I would call a good fic.
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  • From darthme1011 on June 22, 2007
    me like more
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  • From darthme1011 on June 21, 2007
    haku too
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  • From UzumakiIno on June 07, 2007
    Very interesting. Other than the ocassional grammatical error, rather well-written. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - B.T. on June 07, 2007
    Wow the uncensored version is better then the other version of this story that you have on fanfiction.net.
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  • From sajuuk21 on June 06, 2007
    hello
    for when the next chapter ????
    a +
    sajuuk21
    p.s: make no only for the login people and you can have more review
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  • From RacerX78 on June 05, 2007
    different, can't wait for your next chapter
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