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Reviews for What's Left of Us

By : ChatNoir
  • From missbri88 on May 13, 2010
    Oh cool story. I do so hope you'll update regularly. I'm very interested in where this will lead us.
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  • From Dorkchic on May 12, 2010
    I am so glad you updated! I think this story is going to turn out awesome. I especially like the fact that so much of it is what characters are thinking. It is hard to write a story that is primarily introspective (at least so far) and still have it be interesting. I also love fact that Sasuke is not entirely in character. It only makes sense that after 20 years that he would have matured and changed and the I love the fact that he is realizing what he really lost and the consequences of his choices.

    It is a little slow going right now, but that is to be expected considering the nature of the story and it will probably pick up once it gets into the meat of things. The only real complaint I have is about spelling. There are a lot of easily spotted and fixable errors throughout the chapters that could be dealt with by spellcheck or simply proofreading. Normally I do not rant on things like this, but there are enough simple little errors throughout that they started to become quite distracting (ex. Konoha and Kohana). Other than that it is awesome. Great concept and good pacing and well executed- just need to work on the follow through a little because detracting from such a great story with easily fixed little mistakes like that is sad.

    Please update soon! Because some things do not change and Sasuke always goes after what he wants. And it seems like what he wants now is not the family that he lost, but the one he willingly gave up.


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  • From ANON - Anon on May 12, 2010
    I love this fic soo much! Please keep updating!
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  • From JtheChosen1 on May 12, 2010
    SO AMAZED BY THIS!!!! Truly a great read here, I can't wait for more soon!
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  • From Prism0467 on May 12, 2010
    Hisashiburi desu, ne?
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  • From smint45 on January 04, 2010
    This was so great!!! I really like this story!!! Hope you update soon!!! See you!!!
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  • From ANON - lryn on December 31, 2009
    how long will naruto keep on ignoring sasuke?
    how long will he resist sasuke?

    how long is he going to lie to himself?

    im really a fan of naruto and sasuke fics..

    its nice story keep it up and unique too


    please update soon!

    happy new year!
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  • From ANON - Mickii on January 11, 2009
    This is sad but interesting. Naruto has changed so much...i hope he still have some of his bright sunshine self left.
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  • From ANON - snikiti on January 03, 2009
    Yeah!!! Take that Sasuke! I really like your story a lot and your writing style is very good. I love these stories with Naruto being Hokage and Sasuke the missing-nin hehe. ^^ Anyway i can't wait for the update, please make it soon i love it. ^_^
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  • From Kerrisa on December 31, 2008
    I want to start off by saying that I realy like your writing style. I like how you've developed the plot thus far, and look forward to how you are planning to develop it in future chapters. I like Naruto and Sasuke's characterization. Awesomely awesome.

    I have, however, stumbled across a few things the detracted from the fic. There were a few misspelling of words, like 'deserve' in chapter two, I think, and some Japanese terms. I'm a Japanese nut so I hope you don't take any of this as if I were picking on you because I'm not =( I just want to inform you of some things in case you weren't aware of them already. The hidden village Naruto and Sasuke are from is called Konoha (you were spelling it 'Kohana'), "Is that so?" (or something similar) is actually spelled "Sou ka" and "sorry" is spelled "gomen".

    In chapter three, the last paragraph, I ran into a little confusion. In Naruto's Pov the following was written: No. They were friends. Naruto found it almost laughable that Sasuke had assumed they were. But, unexpectedly, that same notion also broke his heart. They weren't friends, they hadn't been for a very long time. -- With Naruto saying "Sasuke. We are not friends." at the end of chp 2 (and then repeated as a thought in the beginning of chp 3) made this paragraph slightly confusing to me, unless the first bit of bolded text was suppose to read "They weren't friends."


    Thats all I can remember catching, so thus ends my mini-Japanese lesson. Again, I'm not not trying to pick at you, I enjoy what you're doing and I think that if I noticed these things others did as well. I'm looking forward to seeing how Naruto and Sasuke's non-relationship will blossom into a piece of yaoi fiction =)
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  • From satterb on December 31, 2008
    This is a really good fic. I would truly love to see more of it. I like the unexpected plot. Hope to see more soon.
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  • From Mija on December 31, 2008
    wow two years huh??? I wouldnt of known if you had not mentioned it, Ive only been a Naruto fanfic fan for about that length of time and I had yet to come across this fic I assume, but I am glad your updating it again, seeems like a really good fic, and not one of those Naru welcomimg home the prodigal son with forginess and all that jazz, good read so far and I hope to read more soon, I thank you for the wonderful read, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
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  • From ANON - reese on December 30, 2008
    wow! this is very interesting!
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  • From ANON - Lanie12777 on March 04, 2008
    I just wanted to say I really like your story. I know it's been a long time since you've updated, but I hope you will continue with it, I think it's very good, I love the plot and would like to read more.^_^
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 29, 2007
    Wow, I'm speechless. I usually avoid stories of Sasuke's return to Konoha, because most of them aren't written very well, but I simply couldn't stay away from this one. The only bad thing I can say about it is that it isn't finished! How could you do that to us, leaving the chapter at such a cliffhanger? I can't wait for the next update.
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