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Reviews for What's Left of Us

By : ChatNoir
  • From roseying on June 08, 2007
    Wow, what a cliffhanger! I really like that last line and I like how Naruto is dealing with this as neutrally as possible--makes him a better leader. And of course, how could Naruto possibly consider Sasuke a friend? Sasuke was friends with the 12 or 13 year old Naruto he remembers, not the thirty-something year old Rokudaime Hokage. But why is it that "considering [the Uchiha's] case" he won't be punished by death? Are they going to say something like the bloodline needs to continue on so they're going to keep him for breeding purposes? Or are they related to Sasuke's untreated PTSD from the influence of the curse seal and 2 Itachi induced genjutsu's so it's like letting him go by reason of psychological issues? Or just something completely different? Oh well, guess I'll find out soon.

    Oh, and great job by the way--there are some minor typos, for example instead of "angels," it's "angles" of the face. I guess if you really want, can go back and fix the typos if you want to polish up the fic a bit. Or, get a beta to do it. Whatever--your story, your call, and just a suggestion on my part. Looking forward to the update. =)
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  • From ANON - Damp on June 06, 2007
    My biggest fantasy has usually been Naruto Tell Sasuke that He and Sasuke were not longer friends...now that I've actually read someone writing about that... o.O I don't think I'll ever be the same again.

    -Damp *o.O*
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  • From gaara89 on June 06, 2007
    OMG!This is so good. Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - mee on June 06, 2007
    i love it :D...and cliffhanger...it's evil, so update soon, ok? hehe and finally a story with naruto as a hokage and a good one nonetheless.
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  • From Greenstages on June 06, 2007
    sounds interesting, please update
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  • From ANON - Hiketsu_Hitori on June 05, 2007
    -gasp- ...Omg
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  • From ANON - May on June 05, 2007
    Kinda short but then again readers=beggers so we can't demand much. But please, this story holds so much of potential that practically made me drool ^.^ I love the prologue (finding a story in which Sasuke's treated like a traitor should be is very very very very rare! And I really really really hope you're keeping it this way :D) and whatever pairing you choose for this fic, I'll love it because I love the story already. So more?

    ~ m a y ~
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  • From Bunni07 on June 05, 2007
    Ooooohhh......Great start!! ^_^ I'm so excited for the next chapter, now! It's a very cool idea, too, to have Naruto 'not want' anything to do with Sasuke! Now Sasuke has to work for it!! YAY!! I love Sasuke to death, but seeing him all frazzled and frustrated is one of my favorite things! This is gonne be so fun to read...I can tell. I loved the imagery I got from Sasuke being dragged back, too...this whole chapter was awesome. LUFFS!
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