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Reviews for A Soul's Salvation

By : KogasAngel
  • From ANON - ninjakitty on October 04, 2007
    Poor Neji, he's so clueless. :P

    Yay for Naruto!! and for Sakura!!

    I'm curous as to what Sasuke is going to do.
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  • From EnchantedFaery on October 04, 2007
    yes the 4th is naruto's dad! u r right! if u read the manga we finally find out when Tsunade and Jiryah talk about it, we also find out some info on his mom too! so for any of u who didn't know this...SURPRISE...sorry didn't mean to spoil it but its gonna be a long time until its revealed in the show...

    By the way, I absolutely LOOOVE this story! So glad that u updated so soon! big smile!

    EF
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  • From LadyLaran on October 04, 2007
    I love this! I can't wait to see Sasuke get knocked onto his ass. He really hasn't snapped to the fact who Naruto's father is, has he? Ohhhh..that's seriously going to blow up in his face. Great job!!!
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  • From EzriCandy on October 03, 2007
    Ya know, I really, REALLY want to throttle Sasuke! I really think that boy has some serious mental problems! *fumes for a few moments and then calms down* That was a great chapter and I especially loved when Naruto said Neji had finally come out of the closet. That was great! Keep up the wonderful work!

    Ezzy
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  • From DasDeke on October 03, 2007
    An amazing story! So much flip flopping emotions in this one! A serious rollercoaster. Now mind you, this is a review up to this point in the story. I have to be honest, you had me worried a bit there about this being Naruto/Sakura, but proved me wrong! I love how you've written in three of my favorite couples! I love the Hina/Kiba pairing, and how you've written them. I think you've done very very well writing Kiba. Hinata, not bad, as she's older you've added some that inner strength we see in her. Neji guarding her, very fitting and I loved their interactions. Kakashi's redemtion, a side plot, but you did very well on it. It added to the story, and parrelled it somewhat with Team 7. The Neji TenTen is heating up, and seems to be heading in a good direction. Sasuke as an ass, an arggonte ass, yep thats how I think he'd turn up. I hope he finds resistance to stirring up to much trouble, lets hope so. You've crafted the Naruto/Sakura relationship very well here. Had me guessing a few times, a few false starts, but in the end it looks to be going strong. BTW, Gaara as a badass, always good. I love how you've written the rookie 9 all cheering on Naruto and Sakura. I also enjoyed the reaction Sasuke got to them. Really not one of them would have a reason to trust him, let alone like him. I think that the reactions that your are writing to them interacting with him are very legitimate. I can wait to see more of this! Great great job!
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  • From twilightgarden on October 03, 2007
    Yes a new chapter and it was a very good one. I hope that you make Sasuke's end a painful one for being so full of himself he is so easy to hate in this story. Not going to update until next weekend is no problem because you will be back and the wait will make the chapter even better.
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  • From PrincessKoriandr on October 03, 2007
    OMG! You are goddess of this site meaning you own writers here totally. Yet another excellent chapter in storytelling. And about time Naruto got to it! Man, if he had confessed sooner, he could have avoided a few problems. Not Sasuke, there is no avoiding Sasuke, but I figure Naruto will be more then up to the task of handing him his ass. Good Job! I shall patiently [I'm lying, I'll be fiending like a crack whore] for the next chapter. [SmutInTheNextChapterOMGYAY!] Kenya
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  • From roxnroll on October 03, 2007
    That was really good. Just to let you know, Naruto's dad was the Fourth Hokage. I can't wait to see what Sasuke's creepy plan is. And I so can't wait for the long awaited lemon. Keep updating.
    Rox
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  • From KMac on October 03, 2007
    I adore your story, and have been following it closely, but you goofed in chapter 16. *Tsunade* is the Fifth Hokage, as Wikipedia says here: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Naruto , and here: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tsunade_(Naruto) .

    The Third ('Sandaime' in Japanese) is the old man, The fourth (Yondaime) is Naruto's father, and Tsunade is the Godaime (fifth). Godaime is also used in the show to refer to Gaara as the Godaime Kazekage: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Gaara.

    Should be an easy edit tho. =) Keep up the good work!
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  • From Leowen on September 30, 2007
    You are cruel. I get yelled at for the emotional roller coaster I put people through in my fic but seriously...that shower scene? Too cruel. Nonetheless it's only getting better, despite my occasional "...OH COME ON!"'s. I practically spazzed out when I saw that lovely Chapter 15 on the drop down menu as I obsessively check for updates every day. I definitely could see Naruto losing his cool like that and saying something horrible before realizing it, but of course you already know that. I do hope that that incident doesn't cause too much trouble in the relationship but from the sounds of it it wont be TOO much a problem. Nonetheless I loved the chapter and I'm already eagerly waiting for the next to come out, hopefully it won't take too long. (Though I definitely understand what it's like to have very little time to write with a busy schedule, so take your time and don't rush it if you're busy!)
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  • From ANON - ninjakitty on September 30, 2007
    fantastic
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  • From raiykazuma on September 30, 2007
    I have but one problem with this... and that is that I have to wait for the Sasuke murder (please, kill him in the slowest, most humiliating and painful way. The asshole needs to DIE!) and the love scene between Naruto & Sakura. Other than that, I absolutely LOVE this fic!!!
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  • From zeroharm on September 30, 2007
    Once again, an emotional roller coaster; Every time we see them making progress it gets just a little more difficult, but you also get a real feeling that they are on their way. Looking forward to your next update... definitely still the number one WAFF fiction on aff.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 30, 2007
    This is just too good!!! I keep looking for your updates every other day (kindly giving you a day to update, how generous of me right?)just to make sure I read it as soon as it is out. Keep up the good work!!!!
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  • From ANON - andrew on September 29, 2007
    damn dude this is awsome. finally naruto sasuke confrontation. please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, let there be a big, hugemungus, fight, with no outside interferance. please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, finish the story
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