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Reviews for A Soul's Salvation

By : KogasAngel
  • From DasDeke on October 17, 2007
    A very nice tasteful lemon. You could feel the love in the act though with Naruto and Sakura, and I liked that. I'm glad those two crazy kids are finally together, you certainly piled on some angst there lol. Hopefully Ten Ten and Neji can make up, nice side story there. I've really enjoyed this fic, you'd done a very good job capturing the characters.
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  • From kabata4life on October 17, 2007
    Loved the chapter. Nice setting you created where Naruto and Sakura made love to each other. Love the tension you created with Neji and Tenten. A previous reviewer stated you spelled Naruto's last name wrong. I believe you are spelling it correctly as Uzumaki there is no such word as Uzamaki. Uzumaki does mean whirlpool in Japanese. Anyways, been checking daily for updates. I'm still addicted LOL! Hope to see more lemons and the next chapter soon! Thanks for the story!

    K4L
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  • From EzriCandy on October 17, 2007
    Another great chapter! The lemon scene was so absolutely sweet and perfect, I loved it. I was so hoping that Sakura wouldn't hit him when he asked that question because when 'page downed' the story, it stopped right before her reply, lol. I can't believe Neji though. He better do some BIG time groveling and be willing to be Tenten's bitch until he gets back into her good graces, if that even happens. The only thing that I found, that stood out as far as needing correcting is Naruto's last name is spelled Uzamaki instead of Uzumaki.

    Wonderful job!

    Ezzy
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  • From PrincessKoriandr on October 17, 2007
    Oh My God...you so rock for this chapter! Finally! Naruto and Sakura get down in dirty! Too bad Neji is action like a poser! Hopefully he'll get his act together before TenTen really decides she can really do better.
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  • From ANON - curious_corbie on October 17, 2007
    YAY!!!!!! another update. i love this fic and check everyday to see if its updated. Not that i expect it to updated daily. Thats just crazy! anyways i look forward to the next chapter. I'm curious to see what Sasuke is going to do.
    Corbie
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  • From Tricia1224 on October 12, 2007
    I am not sure how many times I can tell you how great a writer you are. So far this story is absolutely awesome. I love the "Kankuro must die" I laughed my butt off. I cried after Sakura ran off and Naruto went after her. The emotions and the imagery you use spark my imagination. I wish I was a good artist and could draw more than stick figures. This story has sparked my minds eye to draw, but alas, I suck at drawing people and anything more than stick figures. Thank you.
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  • From Tricia1224 on October 12, 2007
    Wow this first chapter has me crying. It is so full of loneliness and sorrow for things lost and unsaid. Damn you are good.
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  • From kabata4life on October 10, 2007
    Another great chapter. Love the play on words with Neji coming out of the closet. Love the Naruto x Sakura moments and also the fact that you kinda thwart Sasuke's plans before he even thinks of them. So the lemon is comming next huh? I just hope you don't tease us and have the lemon between Neji and Tenten instead of Naruto and Sakura lol! Anyways, great story and enjoying it immensely. Hope to see the next chapter soon.

    K4L
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  • From ANON - Squall on October 09, 2007
    This is incredibly well written, the story's dialogue and narration flows like nothing else. Naruto's forgiveness is not rushed, but a gradual process that is realistic (given how he was treated). Stalker Sasuke does creep me out, however, I hope someone does something about him soon =D. Brilliant piece of writing, I'll be waiting eagerly for an update!
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  • From ANON - dragonman/dragonshaun9 on October 08, 2007
    My freaking God. This is the most amazing story i have ever read, and that includes my own. Kudos to you.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 05, 2007
    Awesome...simply awesome!!! Can't wait to read about the "lemony" parts with Naruto and Sakura! You know I always did think Sasuke was an ass...he really is! Great job!!
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  • From ShimekirixnoxSeken on October 04, 2007
    Well, I have to say, the story is starting to move along! Yay! Sorry I haven't review in a while, been kind of busy....
    As for the NejiTen, I wonder what Neji's going to do? lol! I can't wait for the next chapter! Also, don't forget to add a little bit more NaruSaku then NejiTen, even if it's just a smidge.
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  • From Kipling on October 04, 2007
    Ahahahaha. I _love_ the Neji and Tenten action here. It's so amusing because it's SO plausible. Plus Tenten's rather clever for that plan...Lee too. Seems Neji isn't as good as reading his teammates as he thinks he is, if they can pull the wool over his eyes. And I lvoe the idea of Sasuke working with Lee and Gai!

    I like the NaruSaku too, but honestly at this point I am on the edge of my seat waiting to see what Neji will do.
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  • From ANON - Gaara of the Desert on October 04, 2007
    I really wish that Sasuke would die already.
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  • From rickp2006 on October 04, 2007
    Hey, like i said, im reviewing this too from now on. And i have to say, awesome chapter, i loved it, i started cracking up laughing so many times during that fic, especially at the end when i realised Naruto put Neji in a closet to sleep. Anyway, cant wait for next chapter.

    Hope you update soon :D
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