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By : Arcueido
  • From Dream2010 on July 12, 2007
    Finished your latest update. Really nice. I liked how this is going. The kiss, the race, and the surrounding characters. Itachi will find out. Otherwise there'll be no drama. Let the love birds have some first. ^ ^
    One thing I didn't quite get was why Daidera said Sasuke was important to him. Was he in love with Sasuke?
    I'll be checking back. Ja ne!
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  • From Dream2010 on July 12, 2007
    I read thr Ch 11 last night and when I tried to leave a review, it was the download time. So I thought I better do it before I read more. I recall loving this story quite a bit. It was well written. I love how you handle Sasuke in particular, and the rivalry thing b/w him and Naruto, and the secret admiration, and of courst the Ita/Sasu was a very nice touch. I actually love ItaSasu. I always like Itachi loving or lusting Sasuke, even to the extent that he would claim him as his own. Let me read more now. ^ ^
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  • From thispuppybites on July 11, 2007
    Naruto Show of! Never. Anyway I'm sure he would have gotten better timing if he didn't mess up. Heh. Keep writing I cant wait to see what happens next
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  • From Bluesake on July 11, 2007
    Loved it! keep it coming! : D
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  • From Dragon7 on July 10, 2007
    It really starting to get GOOD!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
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  • From Bluesake on July 10, 2007
    XD the text looked a little messed up but other than that loved the story! XD
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  • From Bluesake on July 09, 2007
    I really like the story please keep going!
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  • From snowren on July 07, 2007
    Yay! A new update!
    You're leaving us on a cliffhanger here! I am secretly hoping Naruto gets the msg from Sasuke in time, but then again, I also want to see what would happen if Naruto approaches Sasuke during the race~

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  • From Dragon7 on July 07, 2007
    I love it!!!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
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  • From JCooper on July 07, 2007
    And the intrigue continues. Of course Kisame, would like Itachi. Even in the nime, he's a little to polite and "Itachi's the boss." Makes a person wonder. I'm glad that you didn't get rid of Kisame's ruthless asshole nature.

    One sentence stood out to me as needing a fix: "Neji resigned back into his relaxed position, not amused with Naruto’s antiques." The spelling is "antics" and it just threw me off while I was reading. Had to go back and reread it to make sure I understood it.

    This is just getting better. Deidara gives Sasuke as much freedom as possible, and Sasuke's all "It's a COINDENCE. The fact that I came hoping to see him means NOTHING." *snort* It's a good bit of light ironic humor mixed in when everything is so obviously getting heated up. I'm glad Naruto finally admitted that he has feelings for Sasuke so that Neji can get over him and move on.

    The next chapter is going to be so much fun. ^_^
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  • From DevilnBlue on July 04, 2007
    wow that was bloody brilliant. The image of Naruto's mother dying... the way he planned the gallery for Neiji's party... what drives Sasuke's to be such a cold hearted bastard is well planned out by you. Your story is amazing and well thought out. You have a way with words that allows someone to instantly picture it. And I feel sorry for Neiji that he can't have Naruto-kun. It's like this wierd Romeo and Juliet story except there is only one real obstacle, Itachi. I hope the muses always stay with you and I get to see your work again soon.
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  • From snowren on July 03, 2007
    what's the matter with that psycho Itachi?!!! If he's already this mad when he sees Naruto and Sasuke in the same room, what would he do when he finds out Naruto and Sasuke are going to coincidentally racing together on Wed?
    Poor Sasuke...I'm sure alittle blond love would make him feel better.
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  • From Kerrisa on July 03, 2007
    *sniffles* Poor Sasuke =( Stupid Itachi! >_< *rubs eyes* What's going to happen to our couple that has yet to be? =(
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  • From JCooper on July 03, 2007
    Itachi is one possessive and psychotic SOB. Poor Sasuke-kun...

    Now I'm dying for Naruto to figure everything out and save Sasuke (without getting himself killed in the process) but at the same time, I don't want everything to end so easily. This story is so great. Lots of plotting and subplotting, and Sasuke-abuse (which every Sasuke fic should has in liberal doses).

    Can't wait for the next chapter. You've got me on the edge of my seat. ^_^
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  • From JCooper on July 01, 2007
    I like that you gave Sasuke a unique hobby like racing, although do be careful to not have too may "coincidences" about how Sasuke and naruto continue to bump into each other. Some might see it as Fate, others might see it as cliché.

    Oh my... now I feel bad for both Sasuke and Naruto, and thent o find out that the only reason why Sasuke was sent to Germany was because of Itachi... I like how that works. It makes me wonder if Itachi had anything to do with their parents deaths because he wanted Sasuke back. Wouldn't be surprised, because your Itachi is twisted.

    Not sure how I feel about Deidara. He "helps" Sasuke, but at the same time, he throws him to the wolves within the same breath. Although I know Sasuke is grateful for his intervention. Will the fortuitous coincidence at the race track lead to Naruto and Sasuke finally bridging th gap between them...? I can't wait to find out. ^_^
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